Topic: fanfic:spongebob2

[patrick12q]

scene 1-flash back:you already know this scene,its the very last scene.

scene 2:3 years later

(plays ocean man.spongebob asleep.alarm goes off,spongebob flys off screen.a window can be heard breaking.shows spongebob gets ready for work.he runs outside and waves to sqidward.squidward just frowns and goes to his bike,but trips.he waves to patrick.patrick waves back and falls off his rock.waves to sandy.she waves back,and gets bitten by the snake she was holding.says hi to mermaid man and barnacle man.waves to plankton,plankton just growls.spongebob steps on him)

spongebob:i was waving to you to move out of the way plankton.

plankton(whispers):imbesle.

(spongebob enters the krusty krab 2)

spongebob:i'm back!to the place thats as good as heaven!

(shows inside,its very dirty)

spongebob:it seems a little dirty(whispers something to himself)

spongebob:spongerick,spongelarry,spongeharry,and,uh,the rest of the employees!

(all of a sudden,6 spongebobs come up spongebob)

spongebob:okay me,(mutters)or maybe i should say me's,anyway!let's get this place cleaned up!

[weird_4]

Not really funny.

[patrick12q]

scene 3:the swan song,uh,thingy
do you know that song?spongebob and patrick sing that song in jellyfishing.do you know it?well,this song is playing while this scene is paying
(plays that song,shows spongebobs cleaning the krusty krab2,spongebob#1 is vacuming the ceiling,#6 eats soap,and shoots it out of his holes,#4 wipes the walls while he's shooting,well,i can't come up with all this!so,uh,just some funny weird,crazy,cleaning sequence,and it ends with them running into each other becoming one.)

scene 4:a idea that probably won't work
(shows overhead view of the krusty krab,you can hear mr.krabs sighing)
mr.krabs:*sighs*there hasn't been a costemer for a few weeks now,i'm probabaly gonna go crazy if there isn't at least one ustomer this year,they probably went to the "shell shack".even plankton has left us alone to steal their formula,

(shows plankton running out of the chum bucket,laughing,gets run over by a truck)

mr.krabs:well,it can't get any worse!


                       6 months LATER
mr. krabs(looks annoyed)

spongeob:whats up,mr.k?

mr.krabs:spongebob,there hasn't been a custemer for a while,what're we going to do?

spongebob:i got an idea...

[weird_4]

And again. Not funny.

[Sheldon J. Plankton]

You should work on your sentence structure. I don't know what it's saying.

[patrick12q]

rrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(turns into a giant robot dude with all the guns in the world,starts shooting)
hahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dddddiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!dddddeiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!haha!heehee!(blam!)

(goes out of computer and starts destroying the town.)
goes back to being a human.
posts:fine,i'll just stop then!

[patrick12q]

fine!i'll just stop then!

[Thomas]

Spelling needs improving, and layout also....other than that, it's OK...not perfect, but OK.