ha maybe you should take it out andd post it hear. it wouldn't affect the story if it was brief. someone needs to make a fanfic to compete with mine better. not that other peoples stories aren't good, there really needs to be more people making fanfics. there really aren't that many so I don't have much to compete with. oh well, 2 people voted foulpattie you idiot you havn't finished the first one. i typed some more earlier today. some really funny stuff. i'll post it when I finish the rest of the story, which could be sometime soon. very soon.