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Haiku
« on: April 24, 2007, 09:43:51 am »
I'm not very talented, but in my free time, a few months ago, I sat down with haiku in my mind that wanted to be typed out. Alas, here they are.

When I made these, the only requirements that I used were 5-7-5 for syllable layout. The other was (and I used it as often as I could) was an implementation of some reference to nature or a season.

Also, when I wrote these, I wasn't quite in a stable frame of mind. Some will make perfect sense, some you'll be like "WTFLOLBBQTIME", and some may make you think of me as a genius poet (or so people on other forums have told me).

The view is so grand
from atop the cloud mountain
He will be coming

I walk to market
Gunshots echo down the streets
The leaves fall softly

The love that was lost
can always be found again
She lives in Venice

Always cold hard steel
was once a flaming liquid
Start the fire within

A day at the beach
has never solved life's problems
The sun burns my face

Time wasted cries softly
for it will never be had
Rain goes down the sewer

Despite appearance
ice is still water at heart
Time will melt all snows

Night is never dead
with the sky-held moon and stars
Darkness begs for light

Time is but a flake
on the fresco at the church
The artist hates it

The darkness of space
is only dark to those that
want the dark to stay

The tinted rosebuds
fall quietly to the ground
The frost does its job

The gentle giant
wishes only to be loved
Please: fear not his size

Without this paper
would my mind's creations flow
Into my eyes so?

The fish's movement
relaxed yet completely tense
Water flows swiftly

The shiver down my
spine reminds me that i am
a marked man for life

The haiku is to
poetry just as wingspan
is to bird study

One three five seven
The odd are not odd at all
We started with one

Biology tries
to make the beauty something
our heart objects to

History passes
in the instant you read this
How interesting

Bright colored coral
mystefies the dumb body
Beauty replaced pain

The girl that i love
loves me, but only for the
physical aspect

Is love made in the
mind body or soul? I must
ask a shipmaker

Procrastination
kills the strongest of nations
Your life is ending

Dogwood tres spend their
lives looking beautiful for
a moment in time

The killer's wide eyes
know no method of restraint
They will pierce your soul

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Re: Haiku
« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2007, 10:28:58 am »
The view is so grand
from atop the cloud mountain
He will be coming
That's a good one.

The love that was lost
can always be found again
She lives in Venice
Venice, here I come. :P

Is love made in the
mind body or soul? I must
ask a shipmaker
Shipmaker...?

Anyway, they were all good. I love haikus.  ^_^

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Re: Haiku
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2007, 01:11:51 pm »
Nice work there Vulture. ;)
Haiku is quite hard...I preferre to write poetry.
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Re: Haiku
« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2007, 07:52:34 am »
lalala wrote a few more last nite at 4am


Fall in a six pack
And toast the glorious dead
They will not come home

I am here today
From soul to Seoul, I blend in
Am I Korean?

I'm like a pencil
with erasers on both ends
always forgetting

A watermelon?
A panda with a sad face.
Like her more than bread!

peaches and airplanes
i walk a watery road
splash! I love peaches.