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foulpattie

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« on: May 22, 2004, 07:44:22 pm »
This isn't meant to be good. It's an experiment. Somethings won't make sense and won't seem very spongey.


One day spongebob is arm wrestling a teddy bear
Spongebob: Wahhhhhh. Errrrrrrrrrrrrr (patrick walks in)
Patrick: Sup spongebob my man! (sponge gets distracted and the teddy bear brakes his arm off)
Patrick: WooT! Lets go ride Quads!
Spongebob: Lets bring Squidward.  
(Squids house) knock knock  
Pat & Sponge: Come quading with us!  
Squidward: no way man!
Pat handcuffs Squidward
Pat: Your coming  
(Quad in desert)
Sponge: 3 people on 1 quad!
They start off at 80 mph.
(Squidward turns green and starts barfing all over the place)

Next part coming soon! Like tomarrow.

I know it's no good you don't have to tell me that. It's actually really fun though. I want to finish it though.
 

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« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2004, 10:34:09 pm »
Best fanfic in existence!!1

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« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2004, 10:44:28 pm »
good work foulpattie! :biggrin:  

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« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2004, 03:13:07 am »
What's quadding?

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« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2004, 04:36:54 am »
it means quadd biking


anyway since its not suposed to be spongey its good

cant wait to see (read) more of it

 

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« Reply #5 on: May 23, 2004, 08:45:00 am »
ha i can't believe people like it so far. I'll make a new chapter.  

Chapter 2

Squidward: Stop! (Squid gets made and pushes Spongebob and patrick off. Squid takes the controls and runs over spongebob)  
Squidward: Who's having fun now! (squidward turns around and trys to run over patrick. but patrick's gerth is too much.)
Squidward: Wahhhhhh! (The quad is smashed by pats gut and squidward goes flying off)  
Spongebob: Pat! Our quad is totaled.
Patrick: What are we gonna do now?
Spongebob: We'll keep walkng till we reach a town. (Squid gets mad at pat and wipes barf on him)  

Chapter 3 coming soon!

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« Reply #6 on: May 23, 2004, 09:30:09 am »
It still pwns!

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« Reply #7 on: May 23, 2004, 10:21:44 am »
It's pretty funny. I like the
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Squidward: no way man!
Pat handcuffs Squidward
Pat: Your coming
part.

I should post that on SpongeZone fan fiction Spider-Boogie and I made....even though it's not good.
Mr. Krabs: Do you smell it..that smell...a kind of smelly smell...a smelly smell that smells smelly. Anchovies.
Squidward: What?
Mr. Krabs: ANCHOVIES!
Anchovies: MEEP, MEEP, MEEP.

I probably won't be on here too much being in college and all. I will try to pop on every once in a while though to share my thoughts.

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« Reply #8 on: May 23, 2004, 12:23:17 pm »
funny stuff foulpatty

and it dosnt matter if its good or not meep as long as its readablle

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« Reply #9 on: May 23, 2004, 02:36:59 pm »
I have another finished fanfic that blows away this fanfic. Really it's that good. If you want to read it PM and i'll send it to you. I recomend you do.  

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« Reply #10 on: May 23, 2004, 03:42:29 pm »
Blows this one away?? I gotta see this!!!1

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« Reply #11 on: May 23, 2004, 03:46:27 pm »
i like this one a lot. maybe instead of getting lots of pms just make another topic on it

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« Reply #12 on: May 23, 2004, 03:55:02 pm »
i've posted it here before. buts it's been a very long time. Like august. I'll probably eventually post it here again.  

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« Reply #13 on: May 23, 2004, 04:15:11 pm »
I realy liked that fanfic I had to PM you for

its realy great

 :biggrin:  :biggrin:  :biggrin:  :biggrin:  :biggrin:

I cant wait till part 2

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« Reply #14 on: May 23, 2004, 04:20:04 pm »
*Goes on intercom and turns up speakers all the way*
ALL PEOPLE SEND A PM TO FOULPATTIE REGARDING HIS FANFIC.
READ IT ALL THE WAY.
THAT IS ALL...

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« Reply #15 on: May 23, 2004, 04:38:14 pm »
thanks everyone. I put alot of work into that.  

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« Reply #16 on: May 23, 2004, 07:29:05 pm »
its really awesome. i cant wait for more

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« Reply #17 on: May 24, 2004, 07:18:19 am »
That one you sent through PM was great!
Mr. Krabs: Do you smell it..that smell...a kind of smelly smell...a smelly smell that smells smelly. Anchovies.
Squidward: What?
Mr. Krabs: ANCHOVIES!
Anchovies: MEEP, MEEP, MEEP.

I probably won't be on here too much being in college and all. I will try to pop on every once in a while though to share my thoughts.

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« Reply #18 on: May 24, 2004, 09:25:31 am »
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thanks everyone. I put alot of work into that.
it shows you put a lot of work into the bikini botom rock botom war

its really great

I stayed up most of the night reading it when I recived it (till 2 I think)

foulpattie

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« Reply #19 on: May 24, 2004, 02:02:43 pm »
so you kept re reading it. LOL!  

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« Reply #20 on: May 25, 2004, 11:50:33 am »
yeah

read it 3 times befor I fell asleep at my keyboard

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« Reply #21 on: May 25, 2004, 03:15:20 pm »
its cool And its better than the experimentle one

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« Reply #22 on: June 16, 2004, 01:53:27 pm »
This Is Kinghashpatrick, Writer Of The Quickly Popular Spongebob Poem
"Patrick" And This Fanfic Is GOOD!

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« Reply #23 on: June 16, 2004, 01:58:05 pm »
Quote
This isn't meant to be good. It's an experiment. Somethings won't make sense and won't seem very spongey.


One day spongebob is arm wrestling a teddy bear
Spongebob: Wahhhhhh. Errrrrrrrrrrrrr (patrick walks in)
Patrick: Sup spongebob my man! (sponge gets distracted and the teddy bear brakes his arm off)
Patrick: WooT! Lets go ride Quads!
Spongebob: Lets bring Squidward.  
(Squids house) knock knock  
Pat & Sponge: Come quading with us!  
Squidward: no way man!
Pat handcuffs Squidward
Pat: Your coming  
(Quad in desert)
Sponge: 3 people on 1 quad!
They start off at 80 mph.
(Squidward turns green and starts barfing all over the place)

Next part coming soon! Like tomarrow.

I know it's no good you don't have to tell me that. It's actually really fun though. I want to finish it though.
It was ok. Sort of boring. And it wasn't really that great because you didn't use quotation marks. -_-"  

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« Reply #24 on: June 16, 2004, 02:02:11 pm »
it sux. but it's kinda funny. Bikini Bottom War 2 is underway. I've typed about 500 words so far. I'm shooting for 3,000. I'ts gonna be tough making it by the deadline. Here is the prologue if anyone is intrested.

Prologue: 2 weeks have passed since Planktons defeat.  The citizens have tried to go back to their normal lives but much of their town lies in ruins. The Krusty Krab is being rebuilt. Yet something is still wrong.  Gary hasn’t been seen since after Plankton’s defeat. Spongebob decides to search for him along with sandy. But what they find surprises them. And what they find beneath the surface will change the fate of Bikini Bottom forever… or maybe just a couple of days.  One thing is certain… The fate of Bikini Bottom has not yet been decided.