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Offline Daniel

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« on: July 21, 2004, 02:30:43 pm »
CHAPTER 1:    Going to Work


BANG! BANG! BANG! "Good morning Gary! Good morning World!
(Narrator voice) 10 seconds later. "I'm Ready! I'm Ready! I'm Ready!"
 Rock Opens and "Hi Spongebob" "O, hey Patrick.
I'm going to work. Wanna come?" "Sure!" So Spongebob and Patrick go to the Krusty Krab, Were Mr. Krabs sends them, Squidward, and Sandy on a mission.
Then Spongebob said "Shouldn't we call Sandy First?" "Great idea! I'll send Squidward."
1 hour later, Sandy and Squidward come back and Sandy says "Howdy, Partner! Where you want us to go?" "I want you to go to Thong Bottom. It's in the Atlantic ocean. Then all Four Say "Thong bottom!?" Krabs "Yes."
Sandy" I'll go get my lasso rope." Spongebob "I'll go Take gary to My folks." (Narrator voice) 1 hour later. Krabs "Be off!!!"  



WHat do you think so far?
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« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2004, 02:40:37 pm »
BORING  :sleepy:  
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« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2004, 02:41:51 pm »
It will get Better :biggrin:  
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« Reply #3 on: July 22, 2004, 10:00:23 am »
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BORING  :sleepy:
You got any better flames than that?
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« Reply #4 on: July 22, 2004, 10:26:00 am »
heres some more


CHAPTER 2: THE ADVENTURE BEGINS


They had been going a while when Patrick said "I'm Hungry!!"
"Shut yer blabbing and look for food, barnecle head!" said Sandy. Then Spongebob and Patrick found the legendery Mt. Krabby Patties!! Then they called Sandy and Squidward, and they all had a krabby patty feast. After that, they  set up camp. They were woke up by the sun, and started off again. They came to first of 20 landmarks. The came to a good start, when they saw a GIANT sea monster!!!


What should happen next? pm me if you have any ideas! :original:


 
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« Reply #5 on: July 22, 2004, 10:46:33 am »
C-.

That's my grade for this story so far.
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« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2004, 02:03:11 pm »
They started running away from it, then Sandy got an idea and Lassoed it, and killed it. And they cotinued on, until they got close enough to the mark, a 20 mile long bush. Sandy said "This is says to jump through the leafless part of the bush. But wheres that?" Then they started looking until they found it.
 "Well, I guess i go first." said Spongebob.  When he through, he said " Hey this is easy!?" Then went Squidward, then Sandy. And then, Patrick got stuck. So, they pulled, and pulled, and pulled. Then they flew into the Pit of Doom.


Please pm me if u have any ideas
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