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« Reply #15 on: August 21, 2004, 12:52:52 pm »
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This fanfic has the worst plot...ever. Why would homestar and spongebob fight. It would be stupid. It's not even their personalities. Most of these "Insert name here VS insert name here" things are dumb. Someone just appears and they start fighting for no reason.
im thinkin of strong bad sttartin the fight

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« Reply #16 on: August 21, 2004, 12:58:43 pm »
Strong Bad against Mr. Krabs or Squidward or Flats or someone like them would be good!

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« Reply #17 on: August 21, 2004, 01:02:54 pm »
I wanna be in it.

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« Reply #18 on: August 21, 2004, 01:05:59 pm »
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I wanna be in it.
pm me and tell me what you wanna be

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« Reply #19 on: August 21, 2004, 01:19:53 pm »
Done and doner.  :original:  

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« Reply #20 on: August 21, 2004, 01:26:28 pm »
Ch2 SZ beginning

           Galaxies away from bikini bottom in the sponge zone we find megapat0099
A well-trained bounty hunter trying to open a door to another website “GAH!!!!!”
He yells. “Stupid door won’t break” MP Says. So jackwhite2000 the warrior sees him Struggling a so he draws his sword and starts swinging at the door ZZZBOOSH!!! Spongebob and the others appear in front of them “holy crap” says MP “my blood hurts” says JW “AHHHHHHHHHH” yelled Squidward “Where are we, I DON’T WANNA DIE!!!!” “SHHHH, they might here us dude” says scooter “WHO!!!” says Squidward
Scooter points at MP and JW “I know! Well sneak up behind them and bag them and saw there limbs off HAHAHA!!!” says Plankton “I know!” says Patrick “maybe
They speak Japanese, AHOLA SENOR!!!” “Patrick every one knows that’s German.” Said Spongebob
 
ill add you other people in later

i abreveiated the names they were tiring to type im runnin outta ideas
help

well wacha think

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« Reply #21 on: August 21, 2004, 01:29:47 pm »
It's GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #22 on: August 21, 2004, 01:31:59 pm »
Its okay. 6/10

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« Reply #23 on: August 21, 2004, 01:32:02 pm »
yay im alittle more than bareable

I need more chacters
 
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« Reply #24 on: August 21, 2004, 03:10:59 pm »
No offense, but this story stinks majorly.
April Fool: I'm the April Fool. What's up with that?
Timmy: It's official, this guy sucks. I wish he was somewhere else!
*Poof!*
Timmy: Where'd you guys poof him to?
*Both fairies give evil smiles*
April Fool: I never asked for this!
Jorgen: Shut up, or I'll have Chuck Norris roundhouse kick you in the face again!

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« Reply #25 on: August 21, 2004, 03:14:12 pm »
I will love to see how horribly this'll turn out.

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« Reply #26 on: August 21, 2004, 03:36:58 pm »
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I will love to see how horribly this'll turn out.
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No offense, but this story stinks majorly.

Don't say that!!!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #27 on: August 21, 2004, 03:50:15 pm »
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I will love to see how horribly this'll turn out.
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No offense, but this story stinks majorly.

Don't say that!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeah, how exactly are you going to make me? Are you gonna call me a name. Oh no! </scarcasm>

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« Reply #28 on: August 21, 2004, 07:33:40 pm »
Tip: Plan the story out before you start writing it. Don't make it up a;ong the way unless you are a extremly god writer (which you aren't). Practice.

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« Reply #29 on: August 22, 2004, 12:18:57 pm »
I think it is pretty good.