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« on: September 18, 2004, 07:18:57 pm »
Chapter 1 Intro.

Time: 3:36
Location: Squidwards house.


July 14th 2004

Squidward was Whatching His favorite Show, "How to get Hair"
Tv: And the reason how to get hair is..
Squidward: Yes Yes..
Tv: Sorry for the Interuption but A "Master thief" Has stolen THe most Valube Thing from the krusty Krab. The golden patty... The suspects Are: Flats,
Patrick Star, Spongebob SquarePants ,  Squilllaim Fancyson , Ms.Puff, And Scooter

TV: All of the suspects Were Near the krusty Krab The time Of the Crime.
Tv: And the Vitctim.. Plankton The Most hatrid person of the Krusty Krab Knocked out Hes being taken to the Hospital.  If anyone Finds who Did this wins a award of 1000 bucks! And now Back  to your Normal Show.

Tv: And that is the Best way to find Hair.
Squidward:NOOOOOOOOOOO
TV: but if you turn in 1000 bucks you get your very own free Hair.
Squidward: I must Get that Hiar!!  *Runs in closet gets Sherlok holmes Clothes and jumps out of window*

End Of chapter One

Chapters Will be longer This is just the Intro
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« Reply #1 on: September 18, 2004, 07:23:33 pm »
Heh...I love mysteries kinda stories O_o;;

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« Reply #2 on: September 18, 2004, 08:31:16 pm »
Chapter 2  Interviews (part 1)

Time : 3:49 PM

Location : Patricks House


July 14th 2004

Squidward was going to inter-view each and very one of the suspects asking questions then he would look for clues.

Suspect 1: Patrick Star

Squidward knocks on Patrick's Rock

Patrick: Squidward!!! whats with the clothes?

Squidward: Hey! Don't Insult the Squid's Clothes

Patrick : Ok.

Squidward: Right. Now Patrick Where were you last night at the Crime.

Patrick: Crime What crime??? I did nothing I didn't Steal the Ice cream!!

Squidward: Patrick Calm down  I meant when the Golden Patty Was stolen

Patrick: Golden Patty?? Sounds Good I'm gonna go steal it!

Squidward: Patrick!!

Patrick  : Sorry

Squidward: Now where were you last night

Patrick : Well... i was at the krusty Krab I order A double krabby patty Supreme it was good very good Did i mention it was good? anyway it was good and it was also good

Squidward: Patrick!!!

Patrick: Oh yea  And while I was gonna eat my patty Somone Knocked The patty right out of my hand! I took it and went home *points to patty* ansd thats it

Squidward: Hmm your  stupid Story is Ok I'll take it for now... *Goes checks patty* Hmm this patty has No finger Prints... Spongebob and Patrick Are cut out for this Clue But they won't get away so easy.

*Walks out of door *


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« Reply #3 on: September 18, 2004, 08:37:20 pm »
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Chapter 2  Interviews (part 1)

Time : 3:49 PM

Location : Patricks House


July 14th 2004

Squidward was going to inter-view each and very one of the suspects asking questions then he would look for clues.

Suspect 1: Patrick Star

Squidward knocks on Patrick's Rock

Patrick: Squidward!!! whats with the clothes?

Squidward: Hey! Don't Insult the Squid's Clothes

Patrick : Ok.

Squidward: Right. Now Patrick Where were you last night at the Crime.

Patrick: Crime What crime??? I did nothing I didn't Steal the Ice cream!!

Squidward: Patrick Calm down  I meant when the Golden Patty Was stolen

Patrick: Golden Patty?? Sounds Good I'm gonna go steal it!

Squidward: Patrick!!

Patrick  : Sorry

Squidward: Now where were you last night

Patrick : Well... i was at the krusty Krab I order A double krabby patty Supreme it was good very good Did i mention it was good? anyway it was good and it was also good

Squidward: Patrick!!!

Patrick: Oh yea  And while I was gonna eat my patty Somone Knocked The patty right out of my hand! I took it and went home *points to patty* ansd thats it

Squidward: Hmm your  stupid Story is Ok I'll take it for now... *Goes checks patty* Hmm this patty has No finger Prints... Spongebob and Patrick Are cut out for this Clue But they won't get away so easy.

*Walks out of door *


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« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2004, 08:52:29 pm »
Its a masterpiece.  

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« Reply #5 on: September 18, 2004, 08:59:32 pm »
Thanks pepoles You all get a chance TO find out who did it Closey Find out the Clues

Chapter 3 interviews (part 2)

TIME: 4:00 PM

Location : Ms. Puffs Boating school

Squidward: After my last reports I got some infomation from patrick Not very good info But its worth it man i will never interview Him again.

Squidward: Well mabye if he wasn't So stupid i would get more... *hits head on poll*

Squidward: Why am I asking myself these questions Why did i run into a poll why am I wearing these Bad clothes After this this will be my next case.

*Arrives at Boating School*

Suspect: 02

Ms. puff : Squidward??

Squidward: Ms. Puff ... I am here for the latest Crime..

Ms.Puff : *sweats*

Squidward: you swear to tell all the truth?? and that stuff

Ms.puff: Yes

Squidward: And you know if you Lie I will hunt you down

Ms.Puff *sweats more* Well Ok..

Squidward: Did you hapen to knock somthing Out Of Patricks hand last night?

Ms.puff: No i didn't

Squidward: Did you see Who did it?

Ms.puff: Yes it was Flats He was Mad about getting A bad drink Seems Spongebob was goofing Off.

Squidward: Hmm makes Sense  One more Q, Give me An A

ms.puff : Give you a what?

Squidward: Sorry It is the clothes One more question. What were you doing last night

Ms. puff: I was in the bathroom At first once i came out i saw flats come in and Knock the patty out. I thought things would get nasty So then I left.

Squidward: Your Story checks Out...

*leaves*

Squidward: So far i heard that Patrick's Krabby patty Was knocked Out by Flats  But that was because spongebob was goofing off. I will next InterView spongebob To try to get some Dirt On scooter I will get my hair I will *runs into poll*

squidward: After this I am bruning these clothes..

End of chapter 3
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« Reply #6 on: September 18, 2004, 09:05:28 pm »
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Thanks pepoles You all get a chance TO find out who did it Closey Find out the Clues

Chapter 3 interviews (part 2)

TIME: 4:00 PM

Location : Ms. Puffs Boating school

Squidward: After my last reports I got some infomation from patrick Not very good info But its worth it man i will never interview Him again.

Squidward: Well mabye if he wasn't So stupid i would get more... *hits head on poll*

Squidward: Why am I asking myself these questions Why did i run into a poll why am I wearing these Bad clothes After this this will be my next case.

*Arrives at Boating School*

Suspect: 02

Ms. puff : Squidward??

Squidward: Ms. Puff ... I am here for the latest Crime..

Ms.Puff : *sweats*

Squidward: you swear to tell all the truth?? and that stuff

Ms.puff: Yes

Squidward: And you know if you Lie I will hunt you down

Ms.Puff *sweats more* Well Ok..

Squidward: Did you hapen to knock somthing Out Of Patricks hand last night?

Ms.puff: No i didn't

Squidward: Did you see Who did it?

Ms.puff: Yes it was Flats He was Mad about getting A bad drink Seems Spongebob was goofing Off.

Squidward: Hmm makes Sense  One more Q, Give me An A

ms.puff : Give you a what?

Squidward: Sorry It is the clothes One more question. What were you doing last night

Ms. puff: I was in the bathroom At first once i came out i saw flats come in and Knock the patty out. I thought things would get nasty So then I left.

Squidward: Your Story checks Out...

*leaves*

Squidward: So far i heard that Patrick's Krabby patty Was knocked Out by Flats  But that was because spongebob was goofing off. I will next InterView spongebob To try to get some Dirt On scooter I will get my hair I will *runs into poll*

squidward: After this I am bruning these clothes..

End of chapter 3
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« Reply #7 on: September 18, 2004, 11:08:58 pm »
Very nice. This has inspred me to make a new forum game, don't worry, I will give you credit! 100000000000000/10!!!!

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« Reply #8 on: September 18, 2004, 11:38:52 pm »
Chapter 4  Inteviews (final part)

TIME: 4:28 PM

Location: The krusty Krab

Suspect 03

*goes to spongebob*

Spongebob: Hey squidward Finish those arons?

Squidward: Wrong episode

Spongebob: Oh yea this is the crime episode oh yea.. The Person who did It was..

Squidward: Spongebob!

Spongebob: Oh.. Riiight

Squidward: Watever. Spongebob   Where were you last night

Spongebob: here of Corse Making krabby patty's

Squidward: Is it true That you gave flats a wrong soda

spongebob: He said some kinda Soda we didn't have it so i gave him Dr kelp

Squidward: is it true That ms. Puff ran out of the Building?

Spongebob: No ms. puff was still here

Squidward: You know any thing about scooter?

Spongebob: Yea scooter was there he was on table 30 the last table

Squidward: Do you know what he was doing?

Spongebob: I don't know he was just eating

Squidward: Do you know any thing else About the Golden Patty?

Spongebob: Well I know one thing It is guarded By many Lasers Only two Pepole coulda gone through that

Squidward: Who?

Spongebob: I don't Know! waht is this 30 Minutes?

Squidward: No its sherlok homles

Spongebob: SO thats why you wear those Bad clothes

Squidward: Don't Rub it in

Spongebob: Ok .. there still bad

squidward: Well your story is ok .

*leaves*


Squidward: Good facts out of spongebob THough i asked Way too many questions

* Scooter is walking by*

Suspect 04

Squidward: Scooter!

Scooter: Dude?

Squidward: Where were you last night?

Scooter: Well Dude i was like  eating at the krusty krab on table 30 (his werid laugh)

Squidward: Why were you at the last table?

Scooter: It was a big commetion Dude and I don't wanan be in the middle Dude...

Squidward: What about ms. Puff did she really leave?

Scooter : No dude She left but came back in 50 seconds Later dude..

Squidward: What about patrick?

Scooter: Well after His patty got knocked off he  ran into the kitchen

Squidward: What was Spongebob doing:

Scooter: Well dude he was like just not doing his job

Squidward: ok your free to go

Squidward: So i have mny clues now Patrick patty was knocked Down and he ran into the kitchen

Ms. puff was in the bathroom Then Ran out and came Back

Spongebob was goofing off and not doing his job

Scooter Was eating on table 30 because he was scared of being in the middle

Flats complaned about getting the Wrong Soda and knocked patricks patty

Squidward: Flats i gotta inter view Him then i search for clues..

Goes to Flats house*

Suspct 05

Squidward: Flats

Flats: Yea shrimp

Squidward: Squid.. Now where were you last night

Flats : Krusty krab hat sponge gave me the wrong Soda

squidward: He Complained he didn't Have that soda what soda did you ask for?

Flats: Dr. Kelp

Squidward: Ok

Flats: These questions Are making me mad wanan butt kicking?

Squidward: *runs*

Squidward: So I say there all lieing But like in the Board Game  "Hint" I will come to an end Sooner or later..

*hits poll*

Squidward: I'M GONNA KILL YOU POLLS!! *kicks*

Squidward:........... *screams*

End of chapter 4.
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« Reply #9 on: September 18, 2004, 11:45:31 pm »
Nice story! Was that the end of the story, or the end of the interveiews.

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« Reply #10 on: September 18, 2004, 11:53:50 pm »
It was the End of part one out of 3  
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« Reply #11 on: September 18, 2004, 11:57:17 pm »
Ohhhhh. i get it. This is gonna be a long fan-fic. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST!!!!!!
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« Reply #12 on: September 19, 2004, 12:22:47 am »
Yahh is good.  

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« Reply #13 on: September 19, 2004, 06:38:14 am »
Great fan-fic! Oh, by the way, can I make a suspection on who stole it?

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« Reply #14 on: September 19, 2004, 10:16:36 am »
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Great fan-fic! Oh, by the way, can I make a suspection on who stole it?
Yea at the end you all get one chance to find out Well I'm starting the next chapter



Chapter 5 Searching for clues

TIME:  6:47 Pm

Location: Krusty krab


*Squidward tries to open front door*

Squidward: Its locked..  Wait a minute I forgot to interview Sqi8llaim ahh who cares I'll get some dirt on him.

Squidward: *jumps on top of the roof and jumps down*

Squidward:  *checks mr.Krabs office*

Voice 1: Haha We stole the Stupid krabs Patty for good we made a fortune

Voice 2 : Yea... And were gonna steal all his money too...

Squidward: Not on my wahtch. * slowy steps* *trips*

Voice 1 and 2: Lets get outta here!!!

Squidward: Hmmm who were those voices *Checks around office* Wait tthe droped a dollar... *checks*  This dollar has a fin on it and the other side has fingers...

Suddely A note comes poping out.

*reads*

Dear Squidward dude.. Its scooter Dude.. I Can help you on this case I am getting blackmail to tell fake stuff Dude they said they would break ever surfboard I had Dude!!!! From that dude scooter dude.


Squidward: So scooter is being framed..And spongebob Or patrick was the first voice. and Ms. puff Squillaim or Flats.. Or scooter He may be lieing but i will have to find out..

Squidward: This chapter is over But... *tries to rip off clothes*

Squidward: Ack! there stuck Do i have to wear these for the whole fan fic!!

End Of chapter 5

Btw this is a Ten chapter Fan fic And its my 5th One i ever made
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« Reply #15 on: September 19, 2004, 10:19:46 am »
The plot is thickening...that means it's getting better!

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« Reply #16 on: September 19, 2004, 10:48:42 am »
Chapter 6 Searching For clues (part 2)

Time: 8:00 PM

Location Krusty krab

Squidward: I'm gonna ask some more questions Back to ms. puff

*goes to house*

Ms.puff: *Sweats*

Squidward: So Ms. puff.. you Didn't tell the truth you came back didn't You.

Ms.puff: Well Uh  Yes I did Okay! But i didn't take the patty I am getting blackmail.

Squidward: Scooter Is getting black mail too  Do you know anyone esle?

Ms. puff: No one else

Squidward: Okay I'm gonna check your house a bit.

*finds dairy*

Squidward: July 14th 04 I was one of the suspects For the crime Of Only 4  pepole knew the code But i can prove that I and Scooter Are innocent.


Squidward: Hmm .. Scooter and Ms.puff are free to go.

*leaves*


Squidward: So farI have Spongebob Patrick Flats And squillaim As the guilty I will shorten this down to one.... In the next chapter I need some Food anyway *goes to Open and close (In and out)*

End Of Chapter Six

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« Reply #17 on: September 19, 2004, 11:26:28 am »
AWSOME!!!! Can't wait for the rest!
(BTW: Are you Darkyoshi at ML?)

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« Reply #18 on: September 19, 2004, 11:33:10 am »
nice fanfic can't wait for part 7

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« Reply #19 on: September 19, 2004, 11:33:24 am »
Yea i am I'm changing My name Soon To darkyoshi

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« Reply #20 on: September 19, 2004, 11:45:36 am »
Cool. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST!!!

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« Reply #21 on: September 19, 2004, 12:10:40 pm »
Chapter 7 Day 02 (part 1)

TIME: 7:00 AM

Location: Open And close

I awake at open and close I fell asleep here What am I Where aim I Do i need to see a doctor about talking to my self Nobody Knows..

Squidward: I need To see Mr. Patrick Again...

*goes to patricks Rock*

Patrick: Hey squidward!!

Squidward: Uhh hey?? Now patrick I gotta Ask you some questions

Patrick: Ok.  What is with the clothes Is that some kinda of Mermaid Man and barncle Boy suit?

Squidward: Sherlock Holmes

Patrick: Who?

Squidward: Never mind that So patrick What did you do after you came back home with your patty

Patrick: *drolling*  You say somthing? Oh right the question..... What was it again?

Squidward:  If you lisen you will get a Lolli Pop

Patrick: Whoo hoo!! Ok Ok after my patty was knocked out I went home But then I saw somone walking by there sheos Made one annyoing Noise.

Squidward: Annoying Huh?  well did you ever come back to the krusty krab?

Patrick: No.. But I went  to sandy's House last night Squillam Fancyson Was sneaking around With some kind Of Thing Who knows.

Squidward: What about Flats?

Patrick:  Well he probbly Was still at the krusty Krab then..

Squidward: anything esle.

Patrick: Hm..................................... Hm........... Nope wait!............... hm... nope

Squidward: I am crossing Mr. Patrick Off the List here. We Have Spongebob Flats ANd Squillaim One of them Did it and THis squids gonna find out.....

End Of chapter Seven
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« Reply #22 on: September 19, 2004, 12:19:10 pm »
Nice. 100000000000000000000/10!!! But, one thing ZOI don't understand, whos Flats?

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« Reply #23 on: September 19, 2004, 12:21:01 pm »
woot! this is good!

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« Reply #24 on: September 19, 2004, 12:40:20 pm »


Sponge tron X this is Flats




Chapter 8 Day 02 (final Part)

Time:  10:00 AM

Location: Ms. puff boating School

Squidward: I was happy About all the Info I gotten From patrick Today but its not over till the Fat Squid Dances.

Squidward: Fat squid dances.. Remind Me to never say that again..

*sees Flats*

Flats: Hey squid wanna butt kick?

Squidward: Wanna jail throw in?

Flats:.....

Squidward: Now flats Do you know who coulda done The crime

Flats: Yea it wasn't Me probbly That rich guy and the Sponge

Squidward: Yes so do you know ANy oter things that could Of happend The night of the crime?

Flats: Nope

Squidward: Do you know if there working togther?

Flats: Them work togther? That a horrible chance

Squidward: Hmm so  then who esle did It?

Flats:  Well there was a code Only one person can solve But I don't know which the code was Mean and somtimes nice Has a bad pair Of Lice.

Squidward: Lice? WHat kinda Code is that

Flats: Hey I don't have all the awnsers

Squidward: Ok you case Is Checked Out.

Yes It takes A special Kind of squid to Do this Job

Squidward Maaster Private Eye..

End of Chapter 8
 

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« Reply #25 on: September 19, 2004, 12:48:47 pm »
the suspense is killing me i know you just did the 8th chapter but can you make #9 now?
 

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« Reply #26 on: September 19, 2004, 12:49:22 pm »
I gotta think lol

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« Reply #27 on: September 19, 2004, 03:08:10 pm »
lookin' good!

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« Reply #28 on: September 19, 2004, 05:45:48 pm »
My fan- Fic will be 9 chapters attuly But i will be making More fan-fics just differnt cases

Its the spongebob Crime Mysters Featured by Squidward.

Final Chapter: Who did it

Time: 6:30 Pm

Location: Krusty Krab

Squidward; I came to and Conclusion and the final To suspects are Spongebob..
And Squillam Who did it? I kind find that out. But Can you??

Who do you think who did the crime? a few pepole say who And i will finish

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« Reply #29 on: September 20, 2004, 03:43:14 pm »
Patrick said he heard "annoying footsteps" That must mean Spongebob. Since I can't tell if the Patty was stolen then, I can't say if it was the Sponge or Squilliam. Squilliam was at Sandy's (I think) AFTER Patrick sat for a while. I think it was Squilliam.

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« Reply #30 on: September 20, 2004, 04:09:39 pm »
Obviously, Squilliam snuk in and stole the golden patty when nobody was looking.

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« Reply #31 on: September 20, 2004, 06:11:54 pm »
definetly squilliam

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« Reply #32 on: September 20, 2004, 06:40:05 pm »
Chapter 9: Who did it (final part)

And Who did it? Sqillaim fancyson..

He was a The greedyest snob ever.. He wanted to get so rich he choose TO steal the golded patty. He tryed to Frame Spongebob By blackmailing Some of the suspects He stole one of Spongebob's Shoes From his closet to make his Annyoing Foot steps

Squillaim Has been senataced to Court and will be in jail for 3 days.


End Of fan-fic


Next fan Fic: Report Of missing Citzen. Squidward Private Eye cases Number 02.
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« Reply #33 on: September 22, 2004, 04:50:36 am »
I knew it!

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« Reply #34 on: September 22, 2004, 09:47:43 pm »
That was the BEST FAnfic EVA!  infinate/10

can't wait till next mystery