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« Reply #15 on: September 19, 2004, 10:19:46 am »
The plot is thickening...that means it's getting better!

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« Reply #16 on: September 19, 2004, 10:48:42 am »
Chapter 6 Searching For clues (part 2)

Time: 8:00 PM

Location Krusty krab

Squidward: I'm gonna ask some more questions Back to ms. puff

*goes to house*

Ms.puff: *Sweats*

Squidward: So Ms. puff.. you Didn't tell the truth you came back didn't You.

Ms.puff: Well Uh  Yes I did Okay! But i didn't take the patty I am getting blackmail.

Squidward: Scooter Is getting black mail too  Do you know anyone esle?

Ms. puff: No one else

Squidward: Okay I'm gonna check your house a bit.

*finds dairy*

Squidward: July 14th 04 I was one of the suspects For the crime Of Only 4  pepole knew the code But i can prove that I and Scooter Are innocent.


Squidward: Hmm .. Scooter and Ms.puff are free to go.

*leaves*


Squidward: So farI have Spongebob Patrick Flats And squillaim As the guilty I will shorten this down to one.... In the next chapter I need some Food anyway *goes to Open and close (In and out)*

End Of Chapter Six

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« Reply #17 on: September 19, 2004, 11:26:28 am »
AWSOME!!!! Can't wait for the rest!
(BTW: Are you Darkyoshi at ML?)

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« Reply #18 on: September 19, 2004, 11:33:10 am »
nice fanfic can't wait for part 7

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« Reply #19 on: September 19, 2004, 11:33:24 am »
Yea i am I'm changing My name Soon To darkyoshi

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« Reply #20 on: September 19, 2004, 11:45:36 am »
Cool. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST!!!

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« Reply #21 on: September 19, 2004, 12:10:40 pm »
Chapter 7 Day 02 (part 1)

TIME: 7:00 AM

Location: Open And close

I awake at open and close I fell asleep here What am I Where aim I Do i need to see a doctor about talking to my self Nobody Knows..

Squidward: I need To see Mr. Patrick Again...

*goes to patricks Rock*

Patrick: Hey squidward!!

Squidward: Uhh hey?? Now patrick I gotta Ask you some questions

Patrick: Ok.  What is with the clothes Is that some kinda of Mermaid Man and barncle Boy suit?

Squidward: Sherlock Holmes

Patrick: Who?

Squidward: Never mind that So patrick What did you do after you came back home with your patty

Patrick: *drolling*  You say somthing? Oh right the question..... What was it again?

Squidward:  If you lisen you will get a Lolli Pop

Patrick: Whoo hoo!! Ok Ok after my patty was knocked out I went home But then I saw somone walking by there sheos Made one annyoing Noise.

Squidward: Annoying Huh?  well did you ever come back to the krusty krab?

Patrick: No.. But I went  to sandy's House last night Squillam Fancyson Was sneaking around With some kind Of Thing Who knows.

Squidward: What about Flats?

Patrick:  Well he probbly Was still at the krusty Krab then..

Squidward: anything esle.

Patrick: Hm..................................... Hm........... Nope wait!............... hm... nope

Squidward: I am crossing Mr. Patrick Off the List here. We Have Spongebob Flats ANd Squillaim One of them Did it and THis squids gonna find out.....

End Of chapter Seven
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« Reply #22 on: September 19, 2004, 12:19:10 pm »
Nice. 100000000000000000000/10!!! But, one thing ZOI don't understand, whos Flats?

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« Reply #23 on: September 19, 2004, 12:21:01 pm »
woot! this is good!

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« Reply #24 on: September 19, 2004, 12:40:20 pm »


Sponge tron X this is Flats




Chapter 8 Day 02 (final Part)

Time:  10:00 AM

Location: Ms. puff boating School

Squidward: I was happy About all the Info I gotten From patrick Today but its not over till the Fat Squid Dances.

Squidward: Fat squid dances.. Remind Me to never say that again..

*sees Flats*

Flats: Hey squid wanna butt kick?

Squidward: Wanna jail throw in?

Flats:.....

Squidward: Now flats Do you know who coulda done The crime

Flats: Yea it wasn't Me probbly That rich guy and the Sponge

Squidward: Yes so do you know ANy oter things that could Of happend The night of the crime?

Flats: Nope

Squidward: Do you know if there working togther?

Flats: Them work togther? That a horrible chance

Squidward: Hmm so  then who esle did It?

Flats:  Well there was a code Only one person can solve But I don't know which the code was Mean and somtimes nice Has a bad pair Of Lice.

Squidward: Lice? WHat kinda Code is that

Flats: Hey I don't have all the awnsers

Squidward: Ok you case Is Checked Out.

Yes It takes A special Kind of squid to Do this Job

Squidward Maaster Private Eye..

End of Chapter 8
 

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« Reply #25 on: September 19, 2004, 12:48:47 pm »
the suspense is killing me i know you just did the 8th chapter but can you make #9 now?
 

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« Reply #26 on: September 19, 2004, 12:49:22 pm »
I gotta think lol

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« Reply #27 on: September 19, 2004, 03:08:10 pm »
lookin' good!

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« Reply #28 on: September 19, 2004, 05:45:48 pm »
My fan- Fic will be 9 chapters attuly But i will be making More fan-fics just differnt cases

Its the spongebob Crime Mysters Featured by Squidward.

Final Chapter: Who did it

Time: 6:30 Pm

Location: Krusty Krab

Squidward; I came to and Conclusion and the final To suspects are Spongebob..
And Squillam Who did it? I kind find that out. But Can you??

Who do you think who did the crime? a few pepole say who And i will finish

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« Reply #29 on: September 20, 2004, 03:43:14 pm »
Patrick said he heard "annoying footsteps" That must mean Spongebob. Since I can't tell if the Patty was stolen then, I can't say if it was the Sponge or Squilliam. Squilliam was at Sandy's (I think) AFTER Patrick sat for a while. I think it was Squilliam.