Topic: Spongebob Meets The Simpsons

[weird_4]

Well, to anwer your question Evil Sponge, yes this is my first fan fic. But hopefully by the end of this fan fic, you guys will appoligise to me for saying that I wasn't funny and I'll try to make you guys laugh. But in order for me to make you guys laugh, post somthing funny someone should do like for example, Homer drooling.

[The Bydo]

There is absolutely no logic in your post whatsoever.

[Rocko]

This is not that funny, and this would never happen on The Simpsons unless it was a Tree House of Horror episode.

[weird_4]

Actually, it is the Tree House of Horror. Just one part of it.

[weird_4]

Chapter 10: The Big Good-Byes

Marge:Spongebob, do you think you should go back into your own body and go back to your own world?
Bart(Spongebob):Well shouldn't everybody else?
Marge:Well, yeah.
Bart(Spongebob):Maybe we should have one more last dinner before the gang goes back to Bikini Bottom.
Marge:Well, that's a great idea indeed.
(Later that night)
Fast food drive person:Welcome to Krusty Burger may I take your order?
Homer(Patrick):Yeah I'll have the UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....................................
(3 centurys later)
Homer(Patrick):UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.......................
Fast food drive person:Did you know that I'm already dead?!
(Meanwhile at home)
Marge:So how was your day Bart?
Spongebob(Bart):I got fired.
Bart(Spongebob):YOU GOT ME WHAT!?
Spongebob(Bart):I'm sorry!
Squidward(Lisa):I got Squidward famous!
Lisa(Squidward):And I got you rich. But I want you have have my $10,000,000,000,000,000,000.
Squidward(Lisa):OH GOODY!
Patrick(Homer):I saw a cloud that looked like a Crab. MMMmmmmmmmmmm Crab.(drools)
Homer(Patrick):I got you fired.
Patrick(Homer):YOU GOT ME WHAT! WHY YOU LITTLE!!!!!
(Patrick(Homer) strangeles Homer(Patrick))
(30 minuets later)
Spongebob and gang:BYE EVERYBODY!
Simpson's:BYE SPONGEBOB!
The End

[IceFox]

The Bydo, I remember when I first srtaed out my Krabby-Patty Cook-Off, No One Like It, But As It Went On, People Started Liking It. I think this fan-fic could turn out great, if he/she does it vcarefully. I haven't thought it was that funny, but I have  afew suggestions:
-Take Time. There Is No Need To Rush.  Quality takes Time!
-Plan Out. Sometimes this helpful, sometimes not. It helps some poeple, but makes everything worse for thwers. it makes things worse for me, or at least when writting fan-fics.
Other than that, thats pretty good. I have one suggestion though. gary should have switcyhed with Snowball II.