SpongeBob: Here it is, Video Game Bottom!
Patrick: Never heard of it!
SpongeBob: Want to find intresting video games?
Patrick: YES!!!!!
(they go in)
SpongeBob: Look Patrick!
Patrick: What?
SpongeBob: It says a Mermaid Man And Barnacle Boy video game was just released 1 hour ago!
Parick: Let's go ask where it is!
SpongeBob: Hi Troy!
Troy(the cashier): Hi boys!
Patrick:Do you have that new Mermaid Man And Barnacle Boy video game?
Troy: It's right next to you.
SpongeBob:Oh look Patrick! It's the new Mermaid man and Barnacle Boy Video game!
Patrick: Have anymore?
Troy: No. SpongeBob got the last one.
SpongeBob: How do you know my name?
Patrick(crying): NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the last ONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SpongeBob: No big deal Patrick. They'll have it someday. Oh wait. How about if you come to my house tomorrow, and play the mermaid man and barnacle boy video game at my pineapple!
Patrick: Yeah!!!!!
Troy: OK OK boys. That cost 15 dollars.
Patrick: I have 10!
SpongeBob: I have 5!
(they pay and then go home.)
SpongeBob: Good night Gary.
Gary: Meow.
(tomorrow at 7:00 AM)
(patrick rings the door bell)
Door Bell: Ding Dong!
SpongeBob: Why are you here Patrick? I just woke up!
Patrick: Ok i'll wait.
(2 hours later)
SpongeBob: Let's play!
Patrick: I call Barnacle Boy!
(they go play)
SpongeBob: Ok. How do you start this thing?
Gary: Meow.
SpongeBob: Gary!
(Gary gives SpongeBob directions)
SpongeBob: Ok let's play.
Patrick: OK!!
SpongeBob: It's me(Mermaid Man) and you(Barnacle Boy) vs. ManRay and the Dirty Bubble.
Patrick: Can we play now?
When I get 2 replies, i'll make the next part. Will Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy(SpongeBob and Patrick) defeat ManRay and the dirty Bubble? Read and find out!
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it was pretty good.8/10
:angry: Huh? why would you 2 be so mean to my fanfic? If you go to any of my topics/polls, I want you to be NICE. I'm 7 years old, the youngest member of the Forums.
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I wasn't being mean necessarily, I was really just offering constructive criticism. If I didn't like your story, I don't think I'll say "Oh wow amazing!"
-Banana
Why does EVERYBODY hate my fanfic? I want you to be NICE. Just for that, I don't want ANYBODY to rate my fanfic. Why? Because everybody hates it! So please don't say anything like this "I didn't like this fanfic" or, I'll rate it a 0/10! Say things like this. "I loved your fanfic!" Or like " I'll rate it a 10/10!"
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I liked your fic.
Why does EVERYBODY hate my fanfic? I want you to be NICE. Just for that, I don't want ANYBODY to rate my fanfic. Why? Because everybody hates it! So please don't say anything like this "I didn't like this fanfic" or, I'll rate it a 0/10! Say things like this. "I loved your fanfic!" Or like " I'll rate it a 10/10!"
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I liked your fic.
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YES,YES,YES!! It worked!
What worked?
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That post I posted last week.
I'm confused with you man.
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I mean Post #17.