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SpongeBob SquarePants => Easter Island Head => Topic started by: Rabble on October 06, 2004, 07:48:13 pm
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Its over.
Chapter 1: The big Mistake Part 1 (Intro) .
Spongebob: I made the Bigest mistake ever, I don't think i can reverse it.
Spongebob: Its was peaceful 16 years ago But the fait of The earth Is over.
Spongebob: I will tell you this sad tale what Happend.
The year is X199 August 14th
Spongebob(Narrotor): One Night Spongebob was sleepy in his bed Until Something came down.
CRASH!
Spongebob: What was that! *exits house*
Spongebob: Could it be? Is that the Magic Pencil?
Patrick: Hey spongebob was that you I heard a .. ITS THE MAGIC PENCIL!
Spongebob: Yea but what could it be doing down here again?
Patrick: I don't Know but Lets Draw Some Pictures!
Spongebob(Narrotor): And that was horrible Mistake Number 1.
End of chapter.
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7/10. MAKE MORE!!!! Please...
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8/10. It ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!! Make more.
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8/10 its awsome please make more
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I find that way to short to be a chapter. Check your spelling too.
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I find that way to short to be a chapter.
Eh most my Intros Are short cause there Intros Not really a chapter More like a pre-Chapter most cahpters will be short Cuase this story is very long
Chapter 2: The Big mistake part 2
Spongebob(narrotor): From where I left off it was horrible mistake number One lets find out why.
Spongebob: Uhh waht do you want to draw?
Patrick: Well lets make it somthing special like something magic.
Spongebob: like what ice cream?
Patirck: Oh yea.
Spongebob: YEA!
Spongebob(narrotor): Then came The little One. Plankton.
Plankton: Whats with the big pencil.
Spongebob: No reason..
patrick: Its magic! you can do anything with it!
Plankton: Anything? *steals* *draws Rocket and balstes away*
Patrick: I told you to make some ice cream.
Plankton: (evil laugh) With this Doo hickey I can Steal the Krabby patty Fourmla!
Plankton: But why should I draw This? I could draw i time mahcine to go back in time and Take over the world!
Spongebob: Never!
Plankton: you can't stop me you fool. I already made the time machine!
Patrick: Oh yea! throws rock.
Machine: Timee machine activated History Of the world is now ready.
Plankton: Oh real nice!
Spongebob: *jumps after Plankton they both get sucked into the machine*
Machine: Time travel activadeted.
Spongebob(narrotor): That was horrible mistake Number 2
The year is now 160X
Spongebob: Where am I?
Stranger In robe: I am the one TO tell you that.
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I find that way to short to be a chapter.
Eh most my Intros Are short cause there Intros Not really a chapter More like a pre-Chapter most cahpters will be short Cuase this story is very long
Chapter 2: The Big mistake part 2
Spongebob(narrotor): From where I left off it was horrible mistake number One lets find out why.
Spongebob: Uhh waht do you want to draw?
Patrick: Well lets make it somthing special like something magic.
Spongebob: like what ice cream?
Patirck: Oh yea.
Spongebob: YEA!
Spongebob(narrotor): Then came The little One. Plankton.
Plankton: Whats with the big pencil.
Spongebob: No reason..
patrick: Its magic! you can do anything with it!
Plankton: Anything? *steals* *draws Rocket and balstes away*
Patrick: I told you to make some ice cream.
Plankton: (evil laugh) With this Doo hickey I can Steal the Krabby patty Fourmla!
Plankton: But why should I draw This? I could draw i time mahcine to go back in time and Take over the world!
Spongebob: Never!
Plankton: you can't stop me you fool. I already made the time machine!
Patrick: Oh yea! throws rock.
Machine: Timee machine activated History Of the world is now ready.
Plankton: Oh real nice!
Spongebob: *jumps after Plankton they both get sucked into the machine*
Machine: Time travel activadeted.
Spongebob(narrotor): That was horrible mistake Number 2
The year is now 160X
Spongebob: Where am I?
Stranger In robe: I am the one TO tell you that.
Different. 10/10
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This penciel thing sounds like Frankendoodle???
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Chapter 3: So eh Whats going On
Stranger in robe: You only Get 3 Questions........ So choose Wisely.....
Spongebob: Where Am I?
Stranger In robe: It is 160X AD at Bikkini Bottom
Spongebob: Where Is plankton?
Stranger in robe: Trying to take over the world at EAST of here
Spongebob: Whats his plan!
Stranger In robe: To refix the Time machine To go to a place
Spongebob: What place!
Stranger in rbe: I wont tell you You used your 3 questions Bye.
*dissapers*
Spongebob: WAIT..... East East.. I must GO to the East
End Of Chapter 3
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Much mystery.
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Chapter 4: Slice And Dice
Spongebob: Bikkini Bottom.. It sure was Sppoky In the past. but I'm Safe Right?
Spongebob (Narrotor): This Is Not a horrible mistake. Its a Good Mistake Number 1.
Thing With Dagger: Würfelmensch..! *attacks*
Spongebob: *Backflips Out of way* * Tie sliced in half*
Person: here! Take this it will destory the Demon *throws staff*
Demon: *Tries To Slash spongebob*
Spongebob: Hits dagger with staff* Jumps And Spins And Attacks* Drills Hole in demon Demon is Tame*
person: Good work.
Spongebob: Who are you And why was I fighting A demon?
Person: So you not From this Time?
Spongebob: No I am Not tell me wahts going on.
Person: Plankton. He rules His world In your time You are From I Persume he came Here. You must Have been In the Time Portal Too But he Got here much faster. A few seconds Can Even Be a few years. And He and Him And his Demons Enslave us all. you Must Help us.
Spongebob: I see And who are you.
Xero: My name Is Xero.
End Of chapter.
(Oh and its Xero Not a typo)
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Chapter 4: Slice And Dice
Spongebob: Bikkini Bottom.. It sure was Sppoky In the past. but I'm Safe Right?
Spongebob (Narrotor): This Is Not a horrible mistake. Its a Good Mistake Number 1.
Thing With Dagger: Würfelmensch..! *attacks*
Spongebob: *Backflips Out of way* * Tie sliced in half*
Person: here! Take this it will destory the Demon *throws staff*
Demon: *Tries To Slash spongebob*
Spongebob: Hits dagger with staff* Jumps And Spins And Attacks* Drills Hole in demon Demon is Tame*
person: Good work.
Spongebob: Who are you And why was I fighting A demon?
Person: So you not From this Time?
Spongebob: No I am Not tell me wahts going on.
Person: Plankton. He rules His world In your time You are From I Persume he came Here. You must Have been In the Time Portal Too But he Got here much faster. A few seconds Can Even Be a few years. And He and Him And his Demons Enslave us all. you Must Help us.
Spongebob: I see And who are you.
Xero: My name Is Xero.
End Of chapter.
(Oh and its Xero Not a typo)
It intriges the mind.
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pretty good
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Chapter 5: The Pain
Xero: So, Do you accept?
Spongebob: Yes yes i do
Xero: Okay hold still.
Spongebob: Eh?
Xero: Its A demon ganutlent It sucks out there souls And gives you power to level up your weapon.
(http://www.kt.rim.or.jp/~ckm-wata/oni_musha/Pictures2/gauntlet3.jpg)
Spongebob: Ooh shiny.
Xero: Lets head to the base
Plankton: Not so fast you will All die! The pain Snipe them!
The Pain: Yes master. i will snipe their faces off till the brains ooze out of their ear.
(https://www.kamikazcomics.com/shop/images/jawa%20gun.jpg)
Batlle!
*Bang*
spongebob jumps out of way
Xero Shoot fireballs out of his hand
Uses gun to asorb it shoot out 10 fire balls
Hits spongebob and Zero twice
Spongebob Throws staff.
Hits the Pain.
the Pain back flips 7 times then once more but this time really high
*bang
Shoots xero and misses
the bullet Bounces off the wall hit xero in the back.
Xero: ahh crap! My Spine!!!
The pain: Baby...
Spongebob Uses Tech Slice And Dice!
Slashes The Pain
Blood gushies out.
The pain: Haha Nice slice there rookie i'll be back for you and the baby here. *dissapears*
Spongebob: ....
Xero:.....
Spongebob and Xero: Freaky.
End of chapter
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10 /10 oh yeah this is awesome
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Chapter 6: The Crew
Xero: Heres the base.
Spongebob: Shiny....
Unknow creature In tall pointy hat: Hey Xero Whos the Sponge?
Xero: This is spongebob Anthor one to help us destory Plankton
Vivi: Nice to meet you i'm Vivi my power is black magic
(http://www.shell.linux.se/simon/gif%20bilder/ff9%20bilder/vivi.jpg]http://www.shell.linux.se/simon/gif%20bild...bilder/vivi.jpg)
Spongebob: Wha?
*Fire burstes in front of spongebob*
Vivi : do you know now?
Spongebob: Whoa..
Vivi: And this is
Spike: Eh i can introduce myself...
Vivi: :rolleyes:
Spongebob: Whats your power?
Spike: *Spikes come out of his body*
Spongebob: This is getting creppy, But will us four stop plankton?
Xero: Thers Ekio
Spongebob: Who?
Vivi: Shes Asleep Wake her up and you'll be sorry.
Spongebob: Really
Vivi: He'll be sorry.
End of chapter
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8.5/10...this is cool
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Chapter 7: The town of Alexandra Part one of 15
Ekio: Get out of my room!
Spongebob: I got beat up...
Vivi: I warned you..
Spongebob: So you wasn't joking
Spike: Welcome to the real world.
Xero: Enough joking around its time to get some money.
Eiko: Money???
Xero: yea I heard theres a torment Of Fighters at Alexandra
Spongebob: Alexandra?
Vivi: Home Town. Its been blown up about 5 times now
Spongebob: Is that safe?
Vivi: Don't worry. Much
Ekio: Fighters Eh? So we got 5 chances To win.
Xero: Yep 100,000 Gil
Vivi Ekio and Spike : 100,000 Gil!!!??!?
Spongebob: Gil?
Everyone but spongebob: *Laughs*
Spongebob: Very funny
Xero: Hah its money.
Spongebob: ooh
Xero: Anyways lets get to the boat and Please don't let plankton Find us again.
Spongebob: boats were invented?
Xero: Plankton rules this world everything is made again in your time.
*In boat*
Ekio: Vivi how much longer been driving for about 2 hours.
Vivi: 6 miles.
Ekio: Never should of asked..
* On mountain on road*
The pain: So erh I'm just sopposed to be look out
The _____ (can't figure out who yet): Hey your the sniper.
The pain: True.
*boat drives*
The pain: That was easy. *shoots wheel*
Spongebob: The pain?
Xero: The pain.
*Boat explodes everyone Flies to Alexandra*
The pain: Is that possible??
*at Alexandra*
Ekio: Well, There goes 5,000 Gil Now we need a new boat.
End of chapter
I plan this to Be more Of a book than a fan-fic mabye about 60-100 chapters
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wow that long?woah!
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Its long cause its sorta like an rpg This will last long pepole.
Preiview For my next Fan-Fic: Who framed Squidward Tentacles Coming Winter 2004
(http://img83.exs.cx/img83/610/WhoframedSquidwardtentacles.jpg)
Chapter 8: The town of Alexandra Part two of 15
Xero: eh anyway lets find Some Tickets to get in.
Spike: What titckets you never mentioned Tickets.
Xero: Hey i forget things when your car blows up and you go flying
Xero: Anyway Lets check town I'll Go To the Booth, Spongebob Go into that bar, Ekio Go into the reasturant, Spike check out the battle arena.
Everyone: Ok.
*Following Spongebob*
Spongebob: so this is the bar seems safe.
*opens door*
Thugs: Whats this sponge doing here?
Spongebob: Uh-oh....
Thugs: Lets get him!
*Meanwhile back at the hill*
The Pain: So we shot them what now?
The ________: Theres some Tournment In Alexandra I bet they went there Go there and Beat them.
The Pain: No problem.
*aims at ground shoots and flys towards town*
*following Ekio*
Ekio: I been waiting like 15 minutes do they have more than 1 waiter...
Waiter: Heres your menu.
Ekio: Hmm lets see. Breakfast lunch and Dinner. Hey waiter Did this menu take 12 Seconds to make?
Waiter:if you don't like it leave..
Ekio: Eh..
Person: Need a ticket huh I can get you a solid 4 But you must choose one mentor , Me Or the Others. Bring your friends to all of us then come back.
Ekio: That was Oddly Scepific.
*heads to booth*
End of chapter 8
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still 10/10!
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Chapter 9: The town of Alexandra Part three of 15
Battle!
The thugs Launch 5 punches.
Spongebob asorbs them all
Thugs: What the?
Spongebob: Oh yeah i'm a sponge!
Spongebob Slices the first thug.
hug one Got Owned and Colllasped.
thug two ran away
Battle Won!
Spongebob Leveled Up. Spongebob's level is now 5.
Mentor 2: Claping*
Spongebob: Who are you?
Mentor2 : Mentor 2 the others will talk to you about mentor 1 and 3 head to the ticket booth
Spongebob:ok....
*following spike*
Annocer: Hey Kid youu fighting In this tournment?
Spike: Yeah I guess.
Annoucer: Okay but sign this its that were not responsible if you go flying.
Spike: Err..
Mentor 3: Don't worry about him
Spike: Who are you?
Mentor 3: Mentor 3 eh i wont explain i really hate my job. go to the ticket booth already.
Spike: Keeps getting werider
*at ticket booth*
Everyone but Xero: Hey Xero some mentor guy told us to come here and tell you we need to pick one of them.
Ekio: eh. Dehjavu.
Xero: Riiiight Now what mentor do you guys want?
Spongebob: Well,
Ekio: ONE
Xero : One it is.
Spongebob: .....
*at reasturaunt*
Mentor One: Good choice my friends heres your tickets sorry about this but..
*Hits out of Roof*
Mentor one: See ya at the Tournment!
Spike: Nice choice..
Ekio: Oh shut it.
Spongebob: Is it me or do you guys Get hit and go flying every 12 seconds?
End of chapter
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This penciel thing sounds like Frankendoodle???
Of course it is.
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Chapter 10: The town of Alexandra Part Four of 15
Spongebob narrotor: So.... We were flying once again. THis time headed for the big games Which was a challenge for me. Well here it goes.
Spongebob: So i just noticed where is Vivi?
Ekio: Uhh where Did Vivi go?
Annocer: 10 more minutes For singing in.
Vivi: Hey, Sign me in i wanna fight
Annocer: Go get them little guy.
Vivi: Yeah.. watever..
Ekio: Odd very odd Well we found Vivi
Spike: Life what can you say.
*Everyone hits the fence*
Xero: Ekio you never voting again.
Ekio: Yeah, Even i agree to that.
Annoucer: Well anyone of you wanna sign up?
Xero: You guys go i'll be betting
Annoucer: Ok the tourment is up please wait in the booth.
*Tournment Starts*
Annoucer: Hello everyone and Welcome To the Alexandra Tourment Please enjoy the chips, Bet on your own risk, and enjoy the show. Our current Fighters today are;Spongebob, Ekio,Spike,Vivi,Smegal,Zack.Evilspongee,And the Pain
Xero:The pain and Evilspongee, boy there in trouble.
Annoucer: And the Bracket is: Spongebob Vs Smegal, Ekio vs Zack Spike Vs: Evilspongee and The pain vs Vivi.
Spongebob narrotor: Entering this was Good mistake number 2 and Horrible Mistake number 4.
End Of Chapter
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Different than most fan-fics.
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Chapter 11:The town of Alexandra Part Five of 15
Battle One!
Spongebob: 157 hp. Techs: 1 spells: 0 Vs Smegal: 94 hp Techs: 0 Spells:1
Spongebob Jumps into the air and throws his staff, But smegal chatches it.
Semgal attacks with spongebob's staff and Hits him. 12 hp taken
Spongebob pucnhes smegal i nthe face and disarms the staff . 30 Hp taken
Smegal eyes turn dark red and fire circles Spongebob. 7 hp taken plus burns
Spongebob goes crazy.
Spongebob uses Slice and Dice.
Smegal body was slashed Severly And smegal starts bleeding. Smegal Collasped.
Spongebob Gained 12 hp
Annoucer: Spongebob Wins Round one and Moves on to the Semi finals!
Evilspongee: The Kids good.
The pain: Come on Anyone can beat smegal.
Evilspongee: But our Side lost this time.
The Pain: Your up next go take him out.
Evilspongee: Peice of pie, Cake, Watever.
Battle Two!
Evilspongee 264 Hp Techs: 1 Spells: 3 Vs Spike 112 Hp techs: 1 Spells: 0
End of Chapter :ph34r:
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11/10 has gotten even better!
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Chapter 12:The town of Alexandra Part Six of 15
Spike: Die! (Spike come out from his body)
Spike slashes but misses
Evilspongee: Work on the aim....
Evilspongee used Darkness falls.
*A huge orb comes down going to smash spike*
Spike: What the.......
Spike lost 250 hp.
Spike collasped.
The pain: Childs play.
Annoucer:Erh evilspongee advances
*In the crowds area*
Mentor 1: Ouch hes gonna feel that in the morning
Xero: ........ *kicks mentor one*
Annoucer: This next battle is a crappy battle which doesn't need to be shown but you can whatch the humillation if you want Go home and wahtch this later anyways Ekio won and Zack. well lets say hes gonna have a nice trip to the Emegency room.
End Of Chapter
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Sorry for Double post
Chapter 13:The town of Alexandra Part seven of 15
Battle Four.
The Pain 200 hp spells: 1 techs:1 Vs Vivi 150 Hp Spells: 2 Techs: 0
The Pain: Are you ready to die.
Vivi: uh...
The pain Jumps on top of a pillar and shoot in the sky
Vivi Eyes turn Blue And Ice shoots out of them.
The pain falls Down and hits the ground bouncing up and down
The pain went Pshyco
The pain grabs vivi, Kicks him shoots him up and the bullet from the sky came down slamming vivi to the ground.
Evilspongee: *Smirks*
*crowd area*
Mentor 1: Your team is geting killed quite fast.
Xero: I said shut up!
Mentor 1: *rolls eyes* Poor Fool
Xero: I heard that.
Mentor 1: You say somonething?
Spongebob narrotor: Yeah well we will come back to that stuff later i'll be telling you A new story.
End Of chapter.
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remaing great 11/10
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Chapter 14: The War
In a land where the Evil Skarr Invade the Army of soldiers a war has begun.
Soldier 76: Commader! the skarr are here with.... *laser shoots right through Him*
Soldier 12: Everyone Engage All rocket launchers!
*many rocket launchers hit Skarr Machines*
Commander: Send the Droids now!
Solider 102: Yes sir. *looks at sky* What the **** .
* An star keps falling down and impacts the ground*
Commader: A Escape pod?
*the espace pod turns into a Huge robot.
Solider 500: I Shoulda went to college!!!!!!
The huge robot shoots out many Skarr and starts Bombing the area*
Commander: Retreat!!
*In the base*
Solider 346: ....... Just because i'm blind doesn't mean i can't be good in the army.
* starts walking trips over bottle*
Soilder 346: Ouch. Whats was that?
* a werid fairly like creature flys out*
Frazzly Razzly: I'm Razzly a fairy from Pallot.
(http://www.ffextreme.com/cc/characters/razzly.jpg)
Soldier 346:Theres No such things as fairys.
Razzly:In this world there are.
Soilder 346: We aren't on earth?
Razzly: Well Its a long story but i'll talk about that later, So your blind?
Soilder 346: A drag huh?
Razzly: *Smiles* Shoots a little light at 346
Solider 346: I Can
Commander: See Over there! the skarr are going to bomb us all!
*heres footsteps*
Soilder 40: What is that?
Soilder 346 jumps into the air*
Commander: Soilder 346 Your blind waht are you doing?
Soilder 346: Not anymore
Sponebob narrotor: Sorry about the skip! bathroom break!
End of chapter.
End OF Episode I