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Everything Else / Is This Good?
« on: June 23, 2004, 08:05:18 am »
my poem that i wrote, so uhh, is it good?
I think a Rose is represents love and life. The petals represent the love for one another. Love looks so innocent when it starts from the petals, so promising and soft. The touch of the petals can fool you thinking everythings going to be ok, even though its not. But when love moves downwards to the next level, you start to wonder if everythings going to be ok like it had in the begining. You feel unsure, now that you've moved into the green of the stem. But when love takes another step down, the thorns of a rose start to scare you. the lying and the lack of trust in your partner is making you sick. And every time you take another step downward with love, you get poked, scraped, and cut by the thorns. It's frightening you. You start running rapidly, and when you reach the end of the stem, you find no water that the rose is supposed to be drinking, which was the only way of keeping your relationship going. But now, that the rose is dying from thirst, shrivling up and being blown away, you relize that love, has to be perfect in order for there to be water for the rose, so your relationship can live on
p.s. these pics rock cmonkey!
I think a Rose is represents love and life. The petals represent the love for one another. Love looks so innocent when it starts from the petals, so promising and soft. The touch of the petals can fool you thinking everythings going to be ok, even though its not. But when love moves downwards to the next level, you start to wonder if everythings going to be ok like it had in the begining. You feel unsure, now that you've moved into the green of the stem. But when love takes another step down, the thorns of a rose start to scare you. the lying and the lack of trust in your partner is making you sick. And every time you take another step downward with love, you get poked, scraped, and cut by the thorns. It's frightening you. You start running rapidly, and when you reach the end of the stem, you find no water that the rose is supposed to be drinking, which was the only way of keeping your relationship going. But now, that the rose is dying from thirst, shrivling up and being blown away, you relize that love, has to be perfect in order for there to be water for the rose, so your relationship can live on
p.s. these pics rock cmonkey!