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Title: Plankton Strikes Again
Post by: Squidward Tentacles on October 15, 2004, 08:55:50 am: My first fan comic, involving Plankton trying to get the patty. It's pretty bad, but I'm making it for fun.

I wrote Karen out as she would be too hard to draw. :tongue:
Title: Plankton Strikes Again
Post by: Spider-Boogie on October 15, 2004, 09:54:40 am: Quote
My first fan comic, involving Plankton trying to get the patty. It's pretty bad, but I'm making it for fun.

I wrote Karen out as she would be too hard to draw. :tongue:
Actually, it's pretty good.
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Post by: IceFox on October 15, 2004, 07:24:33 pm: Yeah, that wa spretty good, espedciallly the animation. Make mmore.
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Post by: Rabble on October 15, 2004, 08:11:05 pm: I love the Picture Where plankton is holding A lrabby patty He looks Awsome Cartoony 8/10
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Post by: ssj4gogita4 on October 16, 2004, 12:06:23 am: Wow...thats better than my drawings :)

Do more of those. Those are funny
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Post by: Squiddy on October 16, 2004, 05:32:07 am: 6/10

It was okey, but it wasn't very funny.
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Post by: Patricksquare Pants on October 16, 2004, 11:01:09 am: Quote
My first fan comic, involving Plankton trying to get the patty. It's pretty bad, but I'm making it for fun.

I wrote Karen out as she would be too hard to draw. :tongue:
Make More 9/10 :biggrin:
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Post by: 1luke12 on October 16, 2004, 01:09:54 pm: The story is not perfect, but the drawings were great!
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Post by: BiggerSquarierSpongier on October 16, 2004, 02:35:32 pm: How was Karen hard to draw? Just make a square with a squiggly line.
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Post by: Squidward Tentacles on October 16, 2004, 03:14:26 pm: I'm gonna continue this story, expect a new page every so often, the plot will be Plankton has a new invention (well, an upgrade from his machine in Plankton!), the Ingrediamatron, and with help from an unsuspecting Patrick, Plankton finds his way into the Krusty Krab Kitchen, where he manages to take a Patty.

EDIT: Page 2 is up. Drawing Patrick is not my strong point, neither is comedy, really. Expect a couple more parts.
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Post by: Squiddy on October 16, 2004, 07:20:13 pm: Quote
The story is not perfect, but the drawings were great!
Ya. The drawings are awsome.

But the script could use some working on.
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Post by: IceFox on October 16, 2004, 11:45:28 pm: The drawings are nice, and this one was funnier, I like the part were Plankton is reading the Guide To Steal Secret Formuals
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Post by: Squidward Tentacles on October 17, 2004, 04:07:38 am: I'm half way through page 3 at the moment.

If anyone has a plot they'd want me to make, either write it in this thread or PM me, I'd be glad to make more comics after this one!

Thanks for the praise and the critisism - the critisism will help me improve.

EDIT: Page 3 is up! It's not finished yet, though. I hope this part is slightly funnier.
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Post by: 1luke12 on October 17, 2004, 05:44:22 am: Hey, this is great! The pictures look almost perfect!
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Post by: Squidward Tentacles on October 17, 2004, 06:40:04 am: Thanks, 1luke12.

Page 4 is here, Page 5 will be the final part (probably).
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Post by: 1luke12 on October 17, 2004, 07:06:05 am: This is just getting better and better...
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Post by: spongey675 on October 17, 2004, 07:32:51 am: 2/10 not very funny and too short.
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Post by: Patricksquare Pants on October 17, 2004, 09:16:01 am: I Want Know What It Is Make More.
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Post by: 1luke12 on October 17, 2004, 10:11:18 am: I can't wait to see how this ends.
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Post by: IceFox on October 17, 2004, 11:43:24 am: Thhis is very great. I rreally like it. Also, when this is done, I think you should make one that is just a Spingebbo comic, with differnet episodes with different stories. Patrick in #3 I thinkn it was, reminded me of Science Court, and how threy did the animaton. Anyways, good job, like 1Luke12 said: It Keeps Getting Better And Better!!!!!
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Post by: Squidward Tentacles on October 17, 2004, 01:46:58 pm: Part five is here, and it finishes the Plankton Strikes Again story.

I'm planning a one page, six frame comic, where Sponge and Pat buy some Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy drink. Sounds boring, but there's a twist.

Anyway, here's part five ...
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Post by: Sb129 on October 17, 2004, 03:08:54 pm: That was good! Patrick:Did you say something butt?
You should join angelenes~dreams' Tales from Bikini Bottom website dedicated for SB art & fanfic!
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Post by: 1luke12 on October 17, 2004, 04:44:53 pm: Great way to end it.
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Post by: spongey675 on October 18, 2004, 04:51:48 am: 3.2 got a little better
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Post by: Patricksquare Pants on October 18, 2004, 10:33:57 am: Make The Next One.
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Post by: IceFox on October 18, 2004, 02:53:51 pm: That was cool anfd yeah, you should kjoin Tales From Bikki Bottom, it's pretty cool. Nice fan-comic. I like how at the end, you put all of them.
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Post by: spongey675 on October 18, 2004, 06:04:19 pm: Quote
Make The Next One.
no!help me!
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Post by: Squidward Tentacles on November 12, 2004, 09:09:13 am: OK, the Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy comic has been created and can be seen at my new website Spongebob Comics (http://www.freewebs.com/spongebobcomics). Critisise or compliment!
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Post by: Patricksquare Pants on November 12, 2004, 12:27:19 pm: You Draw Spongebob Really Good.
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Post by: IceFox on November 12, 2004, 01:44:36 pm: I agree, you draw him really well. I only have one suggestion:
Put a copyright place on the btoom of the screen, like: I Do Not OwnSpongebob. I Did Not DCreate him WEither. And that stuff.
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Post by: Sponge-Bob on January 07, 2005, 01:39:43 pm: please make a sequl! 9.5/10
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Post by: copycat136 on January 08, 2005, 06:58:48 pm: I liked it. Spend a little more time making it more funny.
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Post by: IceFox on January 09, 2005, 09:58:26 pm: I would really like to see more.
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Post by: rtsap on February 07, 2005, 06:40:21 pm: it was funny and interesting. Good story.
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Post by: Rabble on February 07, 2005, 06:51:35 pm: Hold the phone... It said the Krabby patty forumula Just a sponge added So? How did plankton Lose?
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Post by: Squidward Tentacles on February 08, 2005, 08:39:55 am: The sponge in the Patty was Spongebob's hand from where Plankton cut it off earlier. The chopped-off hand ended up in the Patty and absorbed the secret ingredient.
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Post by: IceFox on February 13, 2005, 10:58:25 pm: Make More Please, Or Maybe Some More On SpongeBob Comics, your website.
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Post by: Sponge-Bob on February 14, 2005, 04:39:51 am: It Dissapered.
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Post by: IceFox on February 14, 2005, 10:33:37 am: Yeah, i just realized that. There is no more SpongeBob Comics. make a new forum and site dedicated to your SpongeBob Comics, like BiggerSquarrierSpongier made a forum for Jack the Bum.
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Post by: Sponge-Bob on February 14, 2005, 01:39:57 pm: Quote
Yeah, i just realized that. There is no more SpongeBob Comics. make a new forum and site dedicated to your SpongeBob Comics, like BiggerSquarrierSpongier made a forum for Jack the Bum.
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Yeah he's right
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Post by: weird_4 on February 15, 2005, 07:55:30 am: He sure is. Keep up the good work.
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Post by: israelsponge on February 25, 2005, 01:42:24 pm: how there is enogh place? just 14.94!
i can't put the pictures that i want!
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Post by: Sb129 on February 25, 2005, 06:19:59 pm: Cool I need to post how good I can draw to.Then I'd be known as a good artist like old Angelene & Squidward Tentacles.
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Post by: Thomas on March 04, 2005, 01:34:45 pm: Quote
no!help me!
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I'de like to see you do better. :biggrin:
Well done with it! I'de give it an 8, it's plot is really good, characters are bang on, drawings look very very good for the program used (was it paint?) and my only suggestion is to make it longer.
The ending was great, the sponge hand! :tongue:
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Post by: IceFox on March 04, 2005, 04:26:29 pm: Im known as a bad artist. Im not half bad or half good, im in betwween by hand and a pen or pencil. I really like this and I really hope fopr more.
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Post by: Squidward Tentacles on April 14, 2005, 11:32:50 am: Yeah, I got rid of the site as no-one hardly went on it - here's the other comic I made, I'm thinking of making a looooooong comic, a parody of The Incredibles.
(http://img104.exs.cx/img104/4239/mmbb7ap.jpg)

EDIT: They're all made in Paint, Sarah
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Post by: IceFox on April 14, 2005, 05:28:46 pm: Good work!
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Post by: weird_4 on April 15, 2005, 04:23:27 pm: Nice drawings. Have you ever thought of being an artist when you grow up? Keep up the good work.
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Post by: Patricksquare Pants on April 16, 2005, 08:56:15 pm: Quote
Yeah, I got rid of the site as no-one hardly went on it - here's the other comic I made, I'm thinking of making a looooooong comic, a parody of The Incredibles.
(http://img104.exs.cx/img104/4239/mmbb7ap.jpg)

EDIT: They're all made in Paint, Sarah
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I Like It 10/10
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Post by: weird_4 on April 17, 2005, 10:34:12 pm: Me to. I really like it.