It is kind of hard to understand, so 8/10.
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Thank you, ti89titanium, for taking it easy on me. bub1028, you really didn't need to do all that, but thanks. The_Man, I appreciate your honesty.
OK, it was bad. I'd just never written a fan-fic before. Believe it or not, writing fan-fics isn't easy. If I don't get any more good reviews I'll close this topic. Again, thanks.
If you've read this fan-fic and haven't yet replied, do so. I'd appreciate it. :sleep:
If you only want good reviews, why are you asking for honesty? They won't help you get better at all. And I suggest that you stop with all the colors.
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why? they add more description to the story. They make certain lines be distinguished and related to certain characters.