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Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Patrick on October 26, 2003, 03:51:09 pm

Oka,y yes, I have posted this before, but it was when the forum just began. And I want all te  new people to read it. It was my first fanfic I've ever written. I hope you enjoy it.
It's pretty short.



Patrick's Birthday


Spongebob: Okay everyone, when Patrick comes in here, everyone has to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

*Patrick walks in*
Everyone: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Patrick: For who?
Sandy: You!
Patrick: Really? WOW!
Spongebob: Time for presents!
Patrick: O-BOY!
Mr. Krabs: Well, I don’t really know you, but you’re a friend of Spongebob, so, here’s a penny!
Patrick: WOW!!
Mr. Krabs: Now give it back.
Sandy: Here Patrick! It's something from Texas!
Patrick: NEAT, A POINTY THING IN A POT!
Sandy: No, it's a cactus.
Patrick: MMMMMMM, lets eat it!
*Squidward tries to sneak out*
Spongebob: Squidward, wait! You haven’t given your present yet!
Squidward: Oh, umm *takes some sand off the ground* here Patrick.
Patrick: Wow, Thats just what I wanted! Where did u find it, I’ve been looking for it everywhere!
Spongebob: Finally, my turn, *tee-hee*, A WATCH!
Patrick: What is it?
Spongebob: A watch, it tells time!
*Patrick holds it to his ear* Patrick: No it doesn’t, it isn't saying anything!
Spongebob: Okay, see those hands? Those tell it!
Patrick: those aren’t hands Spongebob; maybe you should have been paying attention in class.
Spongebob: But I go to boating school and you’re not there!
Patrick: I know you have breakfast.
Spongebob: What?
*Everything’s quiet*
Spongebob: Time for CAKE! *Brings out cake* Time to blow out the candles!
Patrick: O boy! *Takes deep breath*
*candles go out*
Spongebob: Uh-oh, Squidward, you have the lighter, light the candles.
*He lights the candles*
*Patrick blows and spits on the cake and the cake goes flying into Squidward’s face*
Patrick: Oh well, it's getting late, my new watch says so!
*Watch says 1:00 p.m.*

The Next Day

*Patrick wakes up*
Patrick: O boy, my birthday!

 

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: foulpattie on October 26, 2003, 03:54:44 pm

Yes Its a classic.  

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: MEEP! on October 26, 2003, 03:57:23 pm

That was a good one Patrick.  :original:  

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Patrick on October 26, 2003, 03:58:57 pm

It's nothing compared to foulpatties Rock Bottom War though.

P.S. you have to empty your PM box foulpattie.

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: foulpattie on October 26, 2003, 04:07:11 pm

I'll do it now. Try sending whatever you were trying to send now.

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: SS4Gohan on October 26, 2003, 04:10:53 pm

I think I'm going to do that too with my first fanfic 'cause I think some people liked it unlike my other ones... It's more of a classic 'cause it was the very first fic ever posted on here

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: spongebobDF329 on October 26, 2003, 04:16:06 pm

Haha! That's really good! :happy: You should do another one like that!

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Starr2k3 on October 26, 2003, 05:44:42 pm

I have to say that is pretty good. Maybe not as good as others but good.

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Mr.Puff on October 26, 2003, 05:47:59 pm

lol thats a sweet story!

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Banana on October 26, 2003, 06:02:05 pm

(http://www.cleverwood.com/images/chess_bluepieces.jpg)

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Patrick on October 26, 2003, 06:24:59 pm

See the chracters saying what?

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: link533 on October 26, 2003, 10:23:03 pm

wow for a first fanfic that is really really good!!!!

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: SpongeBrain on October 27, 2003, 04:14:03 am

that as funy! :gun_bandana:   :clapping:

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: jikeleets on October 27, 2003, 02:57:43 pm

Thats really good! :biggrin:  

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Patrick on October 27, 2003, 03:03:42 pm

Thanks, it's way more feedback then when I first posted it.

Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: BobPantsSpongeSquare on October 30, 2003, 08:14:33 pm

Quote

that as funy! :gun_bandana:   :clapping:

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Title: Patricks Birthday
Post by: mr.+ea the[f.o.b] on November 03, 2003, 06:03:50 pm

nice funni!

Title: Re: Patricks Birthday
Post by: Banshee 1919 on August 25, 2007, 10:36:37 am

Sweet.