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Jackie-Boy

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The first draft of my new song.
« on: May 26, 2005, 04:04:18 pm »
Here's a song I wrote after a recent tragedy in my family. I lost a loved one, and someone told me pain is eased when you translate it into song. So that's what I've done. It doesn't rhyme, but no one ever said it was required. Everyone, keep him in your thoughts and prayers.

Where have you gone?
You’re missing from my life
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
No one can replace you
No one can ever try
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
Please come back home
Before I shrivel into nothing
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
Without you I’m just
Five short of a six-pack
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
Mr. CD case
MISTAH
SEE
DEE
CAAAAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!

Chrono

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The first draft of my new song.
« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2005, 04:07:26 pm »
Short but s'good. I think you should have cut down on the Cd Case part at the end.

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The first draft of my new song.
« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2005, 04:08:01 pm »
Genius! COMPLETE, and UTTER....GENIUS!

Yeah. So I'm sorry for your loss and stuff...I think I'd die if I lost my CD case. Yours had your CDs in it too. That really sucks. But I have an iPod and it's better and now I'm rubbing it in your face, haha! No, just kidding. My condolences to you and your family/friends.

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The first draft of my new song.
« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2005, 05:37:57 pm »
I know how you feel.

Sheldon J. Plankton

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The first draft of my new song.
« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2005, 04:39:31 am »
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I swear, that could have came right out of Weird Al's notebook.