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My New Fanfic
« on: September 11, 2003, 02:38:31 pm »
Hello there! Here's a sneek peek of my upcoming fanfic series. PLEASE tell me if it's good, and if you have a name, PLEASE share it with me. Thanks, I hope you like it!

In a world of the future…
Comes a hero….
That will have to face his biggest fears….
And save the world….

(Insert Dramatic Music Here)

In the world of Aiyer (AY-ER), there are air pirates seeking treasure. Doing anything for it, stealing and killing. But there is one treasure that rules all treasures.  But it’s a dark treasure….
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SNEAK PEAK
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Ransom: They have to be stopped!
Fores: Yes, but unless you have an idea, share it with us.
Ransom: -Sits back down- Well, we are not alone in our alliances.
Fores: Whom do you suggest we call? The Thunders? The   Rogues? We aren’t so lucky in our friends.
Ransom: Well then, we will have to fight them by ourselves. But I do know of someone to call.
Ivan: Who? Anything we can use is always useful in these times.
Ransom: We can go to the Pirates Guild, and see who’s available.
Ivan: Who would be brave enough to face them?
Ransom: I know, there is one brave enough pirate, Enyan Luthos!
Enyan: Ahhh, what a beautiful day! Nothing like going for a ride in the airship.
Daven: Yay!
Enyan: Hmmm, what’s that? Son, go inside your cabin.
Daven: Why?
Enyan: Just do it!
Enyan: An airship, why is it coming straight at us?
-Airship stops-
Fores: Let’s go! –Fores’ crew drops down-
Enyan: What do you want?
Fores: Greetings Enyan, I am the leader of Scythes.
Enyan: Aye, the Scythes, I’ve heard some bad things about you, also some good.
Fores: We have come to ask you something. We need to attack the Black Moon.
Enyan: I’m not stupid, Fores. Your crew wouldn’t stand a chance with the your crew in the shape they’re in!
Fores: Insolent fool! If you won’t go, we will have to make you!
Fores: Ivan, go to the cabin.
Ivan: Yes sir.
Enyan: No!
Fores: Ah, so there is something valuable in there.
-CABIN-
Ivan: Hmm, what should I get? Wait, what’s that sound? –Hears Daven breathing-
Ivan: -snicker- Here’s something good.




EDIT: I'm gonan stop making fanfics, well, becasue 1) A LOT of work if you make your own thing to make up the whole world and all the characters and junk
2) NO ONE gives me feedback. That's all.
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