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patrick12q

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« on: June 24, 2005, 07:39:36 pm »
(a deep voice)THE YEAR 10 ZILLION AND 3,WERE DARK TIMES.DARK,DARK,TIMES.THE EVIL ZORON,HAS RULED,OH,WAIT,I MEAN HE HASN'T RULED ANY PLANETS,BUT PLANS TO IN THE FUTURE.HE ALREADY DESTROYED THE PLANET DIAREAH,HE ALSO DESTROYED THE PLANET WAKATTOILET.BUT THE PLANET MOO,TRIED TO DESTROY HIM ONCE AND FOR ALL.I SHOULD KNOW,I WAS THEIR.ZORON TURNED THE ROBO NINJA MONKEYS,EVIL CATS,SOLIDER RATS,AND SOME OF OUR OWN.THIS WAS THE YEAR.WHEN WE FAILED...

...(voice goes to normal)because they hired brain dead monkeys to be accepted as milky way warriors!!!!i can't believe this!!!!!(shows that he's a badly drawn stick people.with a line of badly drawn stick people and 2 flying heads.
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« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2005, 08:47:21 pm »
.... Can you repeat that? In English?
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« Reply #2 on: June 24, 2005, 09:16:45 pm »
A little less caps and you'll be speaking English my friend.
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GetInTheVanIHaveCandy

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« Reply #3 on: June 24, 2005, 11:29:02 pm »
Can I, can I buy weed off of you?
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patrick12q

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« Reply #4 on: June 25, 2005, 06:38:40 pm »
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Can I, can I buy weed off of you?
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geesh!that was just a star wars type intoro!but,oh,well.this cartoon is supposed to be wierd.
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Banana

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« Reply #5 on: June 25, 2005, 07:03:11 pm »
5/10.  Sort of dumb, but not awful.  Use a spell checker for the next part.

-Banana
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Sheldon J. Plankton

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« Reply #6 on: June 26, 2005, 04:27:19 am »
That was so stupid it was great! 9 1/2/10
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weird_4

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« Reply #7 on: June 28, 2005, 11:03:46 am »
That was kinda good. 4/10.
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patrick12q

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« Reply #8 on: June 28, 2005, 11:10:40 am »
general doo doo:crap for brains,what is the celetrol pact?

crap for brains:uhhhhhh....my names earl.

gen.doo doo:yeah,your hired!

crap for earl:yaaaaaaaaaaayy!!!!!

(jumps in a chickens mouth.the chicken flys away to earth.doo doo comes over to a flying head.)

doo doo:coffe edd,wheres the juice?

coffee edd:fsdjkkzdkeiudkkxjfcfjKjk!!!assjsfdhugbjfu::Dolphin Noise::jkm!!

doo doo:and i see you can't speak english.your fired!

(giant mongorfs come and throw him in a fire.)
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« Reply #9 on: June 28, 2005, 11:15:23 am »
Dude you really need to grow up and make these readable.
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Banana

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« Reply #10 on: June 29, 2005, 04:25:59 am »
Dude, read what I said in my post here and in the Bikini Bottom Fighting Match.  Try to make these things as readable, funny, and interesting as you can.  This was not particularly funny, and very confusing and strange.  Where did the chickens mouth come from?  You need more detail. 2/10

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patrick12q

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« Reply #11 on: June 30, 2005, 07:33:56 pm »
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Dude, read what I said in my post here and in the Bikini Bottom Fighting Match.  Try to make these things as readable, funny, and interesting as you can.  This was not particularly funny, and very confusing and strange.  Where did the chickens mouth come from?  You need more detail. 2/10

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yeah,you guys will definitly understand this in the comic version.
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weird_4

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« Reply #12 on: June 30, 2005, 07:38:26 pm »
Eh. I liked it. Great acctually. 10/10 even though it was un readible. Sorry dude. But I'm sure I'll like the comic version.
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patrick12q

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« Reply #13 on: June 30, 2005, 07:41:53 pm »
eh,i don't have a scanner,so i can't post it on here,but maybe on our site,we can animate it instead.
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