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Spongefan123

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My cool fanfic
« on: July 02, 2005, 10:17:31 am »
This is my first fanfic. Please rate out of 10.
SB= spongebob
ST=Squidward Tenticles
PS= Patrick Star

Chapter one: Rock 'n' Roll Squidward

*Camera zooms in Spongebob's window to his bed where he is sleeping.*
*Alarm sounds*
SB: *yawns* What a great day. The birds are singing, the sun is shining bright, And Loud Rock music is pounding in my tender and fragile ear holes......wait, rock 'n' roll? where could that be coming from? *looks through his window to Squidward's house* WOAH!!! Squid is in a band? *Spongebob walks over to squidwards house and knocks*
ST: What do you want Spongebob?
SB: Erm....I was just wondering............*eyes turn really shiney* CAN I BE IN YOUR ROCK BAND!!!!???? PLEEEAAAASSSEEE?????
ST: What rock band?
SB: I saw you playing guitar in a band with Mrs. Puff and Mr. Krabs.
ST: What are you talking about? Rock 'n' roll is horrible and barbaric!
*Patrick rides past the screen in a gigantic viking boat bearing a sword*
PS: Did someone say barbaric??!!!
*Sponge and Squid stare*
ST: ok....................................

TO BE CONTINUED...

1luke12

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My cool fanfic
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2005, 01:09:07 pm »
That is not a bad fan-fic for a first one. I give it 7.5/10.