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UltraSpongeyDude

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Break Me Apart
« on: August 23, 2005, 03:17:47 pm »
Hey! Im gonna post lyrics to a song that I made here. Im not sure if this is the right place to post it, so if its not then please move it!

Anyway, this is my first attempt at song lyrics. Im posting this because the idea has been stuck in my head for about 9 months, and I need to let it out. So here we go, hope you like it!

Break Me Apart
written by: UltraSpongeyDude

I know everything you do
I know all the pain you cause
The scars you left will never
You took away my ability to feel
(happiness)

Just break me apart
And put me together again
Just break me apart
You dont even know when to stop

Why do you kick me when im down?
Dealing blow after blow once i've finally healed?
I remember when you took all my happiness away
You havent stopped taking to this day

Just break me apart
And put me together again
Just break me apart
You dont even know when to start

Just break me apart
Put me together again
Just break me apart
You dont even know when

Just break me apart
Just break me apart
Just break me apart

Just break me apart
And put me together again
Just break me apart
You dont even know when to stop

Just break me apart
You dont even know when to stop

(I remember the day)

Just break me apart
You dont even know when to stop

(You took all my happiness away)

Just break me apart
(You havent stopped taking to this day)
Just break me apart
(Im taking all of it back today)
Just break me apart
Just break me apart


Please dont take these lyrics! Im starting a band and were going to use them! Anyway, hope you liked it! Please R&R :ph34r:
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« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2005, 04:38:24 pm »
If you ever get a record deal, be sure to mention in a song that I love yah.

Seriously. That was amazing.
« Last Edit: August 23, 2005, 04:38:48 pm by sponge_sweetie432 »
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it got too real

UltraSpongeyDude

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« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2005, 04:51:03 pm »
Thanks! Ill try to do that!
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« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2005, 06:08:52 pm »
That was so good you opened two threads for it. :biggrin: On a more serious note though I liked the lyrics. You should post the sound of the music that way I can associate better
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sponge monkey100

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« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2005, 06:52:25 pm »
OMG that was so freakin awsome!
ur way better at writing songs than I am!
that was so awsome
u really expressed ur feelings!
which was cool!
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weird_4

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« Reply #5 on: August 23, 2005, 08:26:03 pm »
That song was cool. 10/10.
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UltraSpongeyDude

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« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2005, 08:48:11 am »
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That was so good you opened two threads for it.

Sorry bout that! When I posted it, it said that flood control was enabled, so I had to go back and try posting again. I guess that something happened and it posted twice!

Anyway, thanks for your support everyone! :ph34r:
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eternal_sponge_lover

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« Reply #7 on: August 28, 2005, 12:59:53 pm »
10/10 nice lyrics.
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weird_4

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« Reply #8 on: August 31, 2005, 05:21:20 pm »
How does the tune go to it? It would be so cool if it was a real song.
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