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Offline 1kenny

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The Making Of The Spongebob Movie
« on: December 25, 2003, 06:12:05 pm »
SB and Pat are sitting down watching TV
Tv: be the 100th caller and win a chance to be in your own Movie! call now at 555-2095
Sb:pat dial the number!
pat: ok
ring ring
Pat: i want a large pepperoni pizza please.
Phone: congrat u r the 100th caller!
pat:sorry i wanted pizza
Phone:welcome to movie pizza palce you won a 100 pizzas and a chance to b in ur own movie!
Pat:spongebob we won!
SB and pat break in a victory dance.pat throws phone like football on grown
SB: pat why did u throw the phone
Pat:they said if i throw the pone i win!
SB:tarter sauce!
Pat:no they are pepperoni pizzas not tarter sauce
Sb: pat get out!
do u like it so far?  
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SS4Gohan

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The Making Of The Spongebob Movie
« Reply #1 on: December 25, 2003, 06:13:11 pm »
No not really. But that's just my opinion
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djwit_atie

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« Reply #2 on: December 25, 2003, 07:00:20 pm »
ummmm srry kenny but it SUX
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Patrick

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« Reply #3 on: December 26, 2003, 09:09:24 am »
Ok, Kenny, I have some stuff to tell you. You don't have to take these suggestions, but they will make your fanfic better.
1)Spell check your blasted fanfic!!
2)Are you that lazy to write it in script form?
3)Make it longer, and not a fanfic you can write in a couple of minutes.

Oh, and to answer the question "Do you like it so far?". No. I don't.

Sorry, 1kenny, but I give it a 3/10.
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« Reply #4 on: December 27, 2003, 05:38:38 am »
it is ermmm ummmm no comment
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