Great Job, Spongey34. You fanfic was great. I liked it how you were able to fit some real lines from the tv show into the story, like how on TV, Patrick said "Some People are blistfully unaware of how dumb they really are... Uhhhhhh", and in your story, you said that patrick was blistfully unaware of how dumb he really was. I just kinda wish the ending had more than Plankton just giving up, but i did like the very last paragraaph of how plankton learned his lesson. Great job.