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« on: August 24, 2004, 11:12:25 am »
"THE KRABBY PATTY COOK-OFF!!!!!"[/size]
(This spot was originally to tell when this will be done, but now it is to so you that the first part of THE KRABBY PATTY COOK-OFF!!!!! is complete. Part 2 will be done soon. Most likely today or tommorow. So, I hope you enjoy! Scroll down a bit for the story)
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« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2004, 11:13:12 am »
Okay. Sounds cool.
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« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2004, 11:14:11 am »
thanks. I just want this one to be really good.
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« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2004, 11:31:59 am »
"THE KRABBY PATTY COOK-OFF!!!!!"[/size]

 TIME: 7:00 A.M.
 “ Almost done, just need to stop watching TV and get to Spongebob house!” Patrick said to himself.

LOCATION: SPONGEBOB’S HOUSE
 “Were is he?” Spongebob asked himself.
 Patrick came running through the door, yelling: “HERE I AM, HERE I AM, HERE AM!!!!!!!!!!!”
 “What took you so long?” asked Spongebob.
 “I was only 4 minutes and 15.23 seconds late late,” Patrick said.
 “Since when do you know math, Patrick?” SB asked.
 Pat replied: “Since I picked up this book.”
 Spongebob then pointed out: “Uhh, Pat that’s a Barnacle Jones Mystery Book Toddler book.”
 Pat then said sadly: “Oh” “Your mean”
SB said: Oh, I’m sorry Pat, I didn’t mean it that way.”
Pat replied: "I know, I was just jokin’”
“RIGHT!!!!!! Now, Let’s go, we gonna be late for my day at the Krusty Krab, and your first day as 2 month apprentice to me,” Spongebob told Pat.
“All right, let’s go!!” Pat shouted.
 TO BE CONTENUED…….
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Well, what do you think? Part 2 will be coming. Part 3 should start the cook-off. Feel free to PM, if i take to long on this. Trust me, this Fan-Fic, WILL be getting better.
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« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2004, 12:38:08 pm »
OK, here it is PART 2. If you read these PLEASE reply with what you think, evenb it is negative.
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THE KRABBY PATTY COOK-OFF[/size]
PART 2

LOCATION: At the Krusty Krab.

 "Ok, EMPLOYEEEES, Let's go down the basic work scedule. First, you do what you normally do, Squidward. And Now, Pat, And Spongebob. Pat, You will follow Spongebob through everey order, . Take any order Spongebob here, gives you. And just so you know, Your not gettin' any of me money," explained Krabs.
 "Ok, Pat, Let's go into the kitchen," Spongebob said.
 "Ouch!!!" Pat loudly yelled.
 "What's wrong Pat?"
 "I burned my hand," he replied.
 "How, you weren'nt even manning the grill. You weren't even near the grill, you were sitting on a chair," Spongebob explained.
"I burned it on this, see, theres even a slip of paper on it and evreything"
 "Pat, you didn't burn your hand"SB said.
[NOTE: For the rest of these PART i will right this is script form]
 Patrick: I didn't.
 SB: No, You stuck you hand on the sign-up sheet for the Krabby Patty Cook-Off!
Pat: No.
SB: Yes.
Pat:No...Way.
SB: Yes!! You know what this means...
PAT: Yeah.... THE BIGGEST LUNCH OF MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SB: No. That i couod acully compete in a competion to make Krabby Pattys.
Pat: Ohhh, cool.
SB: Let's go sign up somewhere since this paper is all messed up.
Pat: Ok!
LOCATION: GOO LAGOON
TIME: Noon, Spongebob's lunch break.
 SB has five minutes to get back to the Krusty Krab, or HE'S FIRED!!!!!!!!!
SB: Ok, Ok, Ahh, here it is. (Mumbling to himshelf) Spongebob Squarepants.
Pat: (Mumbling to himshelf also) Patrick Star
SB: Uh, Pat, you aren't a frycook you can't enter.
Pat: Ah, but this paper says aprentices allowed.
SB: Oh, Ok, then.
SB: Oh no, I only have 4 more minutes to get back to the Krusty Krab!
Spongebob and Patrick went to Mrs. Puff's boating school, got his liscense and took a boatmobile.
SB: Let's go.
Spongebob was swirving into tons of buildings and people but missed them by one centimmeter. He arrived at the Krusty Krab with still 3 minutes, and 34 seconds left. Mrs Puff came by and took his driver's liscencse away.
SB: Well i'm all ready for the games tommorow.
Pat: Me too.
TO BE CONTENUED.....
Well, what do you think so far. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post your reveiews.
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« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2004, 02:40:48 pm »
Pretty good so far.
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« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2004, 02:51:49 pm »
Thank you. Part 3 will come soon.
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« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2004, 12:50:26 pm »
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Thank you. Part 3 will come soon.
I can't wait!!!
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« Reply #8 on: August 26, 2004, 10:03:43 am »
Wow, thanks.
 All the parts in Italics are said by that French Narretor (Exept the title)
For now on, this fan-fic will be done in script form.
 Okay, here it is Part 3!:

"THE KRABBY PATTY COOK-OFF"[/size]
PART 3[/size][/font]

PAT: Well, Spongebob, let's go home and get a good nights rest.
SB: Okay, Pat.
Krabs: I see you two boys signed uo for the Krabby Patty Cook-Off. There's no doubt you will win.
SB and Pat: Gee, thanks Mr. K.
The two boys walk back to Spongebob's house and start training. The tome is 4:00 PM.
SB: 101. 102.
PAT: 1. 2.
2 Hours Later....
Pat: 3. (Breathing very hardly) Spongebob...let's...give....this.....a...ressssssst.
SB: OKAY!!! Let's go to sleep. Heres your Sleeping Bag, and heres my sleaoping bag.
They fell asleep almost instantly. The next morning, SB was waiting for Pat. Then SB relized that the games were all the way in the small town of New Shell City, 600 miles away!!!!!!!
SB: I have no driver's liscense, how will we get there? It will take 9 hours if i can drive. But, I CAN'T!!!! Wait, Iv'e got it!!!
Pat: Got what?
SB: Just follow me.
They packed all there things, and.....STOWED AWAY IN SQUIDWARDS NEW CAR!!!!!!
SQUIDWARD: Now, time to see what this car can do!
10 minutes later......
SQUIDWARD: And, we are here... THE NEW SHELL CITY STADIUM!!!!!
SB and PAT hopped out of the trunk. There luggage was taken to the GRAND SHELL HOTEL!
SQUIDWARD: SPONGEBOB, WHAT WERE YOU DOING IN MY TRUNK!!!!!!
SB and Pat run off
The Games Announcer (A.K.A.: Fisher): OK. LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!!!!!
TO BE CONTENUED.......[/B[/u][/color][/size]
Well, what do you think so far? The reason that Squidward is there is because he was forced to come by Krabs. Part 4 will be coming soon.
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« Reply #9 on: August 26, 2004, 10:56:14 am »
Let me just aask you guys something.
When this one is complete, should I make sequal?
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« Reply #10 on: August 26, 2004, 11:30:56 am »
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Let me just aask you guys something.
When this one is complete, should I make sequal?
Of course!
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« Reply #11 on: August 26, 2004, 12:52:10 pm »
Thanks. Expect Part 4 either today or tommrow.
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« Reply #12 on: August 27, 2004, 10:56:55 am »
OK, sory for double posting, but here it is:
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THE KRABBY PATTY COOK-OFF!!!!![/size]
PART 4

SB: I'm so exited! I have been waiting aproximitly 20 days 12 hours and 15 seconds.
PAT: But you just signed up yesterday.
SB: That doesn't mean I don't know abput this.
FIsher: OK. Get ready contestants for Game One.... THE KRABBY PATTY TOSS!!!!
SB: I'M READY IM READY IM READY!!!!!!!!!
PAT: Let's begin these games!
Fisher: And toss!
Pat eats the first patty, and only gaines twelve points because inside that patty was the golden flag, wich automaticly awards you 12 points, and you can NOT be disqualifid in the first round.
SB: w00t!!!!! I got it into the bucket withought it blowin' up!!!
Scooter: It landed in the sphere bucket grill. WOOHOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Squidward: How did I get surrounded by such losers?
Krabs: I'm payin' ya, aren't I.
Squidward: Uhhh, NO!
Fisher: It looks like all three contesteants are going to the next game. It seems that Patrick Star, has captured the Golden Flag, so he stays in...for now.
SB: I can't wait for the next event.
Pat: Me neither.
Fisher: And now the next game..... CAPTURE THE PATTY!!!!!!!
SB: I'm onna capture your patty, Scooter.
Pat: I'm gonna capture your patty Squilliam.
Squilliam: Uhhh, this isn't the Richer than Gates Games. NOOOO!!!
Fisher: It looks like we have a new contestant, Squilliam Fanysoon!
Squidward: WHTAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
SB: Wow, good to see a new contestant.
Squidward: You know what, i'm gonna join these games, Just to prove to Squlliam, that I am capibale of  doing  something better than him.
Krabs: Good. I've always despised that Fancysonn. HE HAS MORE MONEY THAN ME!!!!!
Fisher: And it looks like we have another new last-minute contestant.....
TO BE CONTENUED....
Well, what do you think. Sorry i double posted. I worked for about an hour on this one. Maybe a half-hour. SO, do you guys like it?
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« Reply #13 on: August 27, 2004, 01:20:50 pm »
Thats pritty good! :cool:  
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« Reply #14 on: August 28, 2004, 06:04:50 am »
can't wait til' part 5
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