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« on: September 06, 2004, 01:43:32 pm »
I don’t own Invader Zim or anything of the sort, just THIS STORY


Thanks to Squid Bro and Patricksquare Pants so far for your comments. I shall continue very soon.


Chapter 1:
Everything was going well expect but all of a sudden while watching Invader Zim, Gir comes out of the TV. " GIR wants a cookie” I panicked and gulped.
" Shhure", I said going into the kitchen.
I took no second to ask what the ::Dolphin Noise:: he was doing here. I hand him a cookie, and when I gave it to him, I noticed he ate my stuffed animal. I screamed and dropped the cookie.
" What the ::Dolphin Noise:: do you think your doing", she screamed looking at the stuffed animal.
" That was my favorite stuffed animal!!!!", I yelled
" Kristen to old for stuffed animals", Gir said while laughing.
Gir started to run towards my room.
" No!!!!!!!!!", I yelled.
Gir crazily went to my room and I saw him destory everything all in one second.
" ::Dolphin Noise::, your fast", I schreeched.
“ Your realize how much stuff costs”, I said.
Gir ignored me and stood there.
“ What are you doing know”, I yelled. I was furious.
Quietly and Quickly Gir said “ Bow down to the gust of wind”
I looked where he was looking. A gust of wind came forward blowing real hard.
Barbie dolls without heads appeared on the floor and I almost had stepped on one.
“ Oh my… that’s so horrible yet why would I care”, I said.
The gust of wind blew again.
” Know your turn”, it said.
“ My turn”, I said panicking.
The gust of wind blew harder and harder within every second, I tried to hold on to something.
Then the gust of wind appeared to kill me and Gir. A little blood from our flesh spilt on the carpet.
For eternity the spirit of the wind killed various people.
 

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« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2004, 03:40:16 am »
8/10 but that wasn't scary

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« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2004, 06:56:32 pm »
A family was just sitting there minding there own business in the backyard having a barbeque when suddely a strong wind blew.
" That's pretty weried", Samathra said confused.
" Does wind usually display in the weather", her friend Gloria said.
" Ahh I don't think so", Samathra said confused at the question.
" You live here so...", said Samathra.
Gloria was about to ask her another question when she was dazed.
Then moments later she was brought back up to the surface.
" Samathra Rachel Headerbonds are you listening", said Samanthra's mother.
" Don't use that name, it sucks", she said saddened.
" You ignored your father", she said.
" Oh ya I know how he gets", Samathra said then realizing what she said.
" Oh sorry Dad", said Samathra scopping up corn from her plate.
" We're gonna know make Japanesse Fish", her father declared.
" And so thats what I didn't listen to", said Samathra mad.
" Dad, everybody knows Fish is so not cool anymore", Samathra said.
A wind blew again knocking over the barbeque, the father dodge getting hurt.
" Dammit", he yelled.
" We better eat inside and as for the fish we'll have it another day", her father declared saddened.
Samathra could feel relief
" But since when is food cool anyways", said her father outradged.
" I don't know Dad your embrassing me", said Samathra.
Another wind blew
" Ok inside everybody", he said and everybody rushed in the house.
Samathra and Gloria watched from the family room's window, everything was being knocked down. The trees, the fence, everything expect there house. When the wind was finally cleared they all stepped outside.
" What in the ::Dolphin Noise::", Samathra declared.
" Watch your mouth...", said Samathra's mother.
" Mom that's so not cool anymore", said Samathra.
" Since when were bad words cool", said her mother.
" I don't know your embrassing me", she cried.
" I sure don't get you", said Gloria.
" I guess I'll take that as a compliment", said Samathra.
" Ya whatever", said Gloria.
" Will you guys shut your yap, its a nice day, I better see some pushups", said his dad.
" Pushups!!!!", the two girls screamed.
The dad laughed
" Just kidding"
But then suddenly...

Comments please!!!!!!!!! Even ones telling me that I suck!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #3 on: September 08, 2004, 07:13:57 pm »
Was Great.

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« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2004, 08:32:28 pm »
I liked it, but, it broke a rule. 1 of the most important rules IMO.

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« Reply #5 on: September 09, 2004, 03:53:43 am »
BOO!2/10

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« Reply #6 on: September 09, 2004, 08:09:07 am »
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BOO!2/10
Eh..you gotta have imagination...8.3/10

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« Reply #7 on: September 11, 2004, 08:14:00 pm »
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LOL I thought I was gonna cry if people say this sort of thing but I'm laughing.  

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« Reply #8 on: September 16, 2004, 05:13:15 pm »
What's IMO. Nice story!

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« Reply #9 on: September 16, 2004, 05:15:59 pm »
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What's IMO?
In my opinion.

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« Reply #10 on: September 16, 2004, 05:19:09 pm »
Oh, thanks. Nice story. When is part three coming?

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« Reply #11 on: September 16, 2004, 10:24:59 pm »
i liked it before, and I like it now. 8.5/10.......can't wait.

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« Reply #12 on: September 17, 2004, 04:21:30 pm »
I'll write more soon  :biggrin:
Why didn't it cover up all the swearing words through ?  :huh: