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« on: September 07, 2004, 03:35:55 pm »
Here is the list of the characters:

Spongebob Parker/Spider-Sponge
Sandy-Jane Watson
Patrick Osborne (The kid, not the dad)
Dr. Squidward Octavious/Doc Squid
J. Jonah Krabs

And Grandma Squarepants as Aunt May

Ch. 1

Spongebob was on his scooter, going as fast as he could. He managed to get to Pizza Castle. "Parker, you're late again!" Mario exclaimed as Spongebob got off the bike."Where have you been?" I've been - busy" Spongebob said as he tucked his Spider-Sponge suit more into his pocket. "Well, you need to deliver these pizzas in five minutes or your square pants are fired" Spongebob grabbed the pizzas, ran out to the alley, and changed to his suit. Seconds later, a square sponge in a suit emerged and swung across downtown. He swung past the sign for Sandy Jane's new play and the Bikini Times building. Unfortunately, he couldn't get there in time. Spongebob only can turn to his photography skills.

Don't worry, it will get much better. It's fun if you visualize the story in your head. What do you think so far? :unsure:
« Last Edit: September 11, 2004, 05:19:56 pm by 1luke12 »

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« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2004, 03:49:13 pm »
Make it longer. Don't post four sentances and call it a chapter. Spend time on it. It was ok.

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« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2004, 04:06:02 pm »
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Make it longer. Don't post four sentances and call it a chapter. Spend time on it. It was ok.
Thanks for the tip. I have decided to redo the chapter soon.
« Last Edit: September 07, 2004, 04:42:16 pm by 1luke12 »

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« Reply #3 on: September 09, 2004, 08:11:52 am »
HAHAHAHAHA. I love how you made them as the characters

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« Reply #4 on: September 09, 2004, 12:44:53 pm »
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HAHAHAHAHA. I love how you made them as the characters
Me too!

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« Reply #5 on: September 10, 2004, 01:57:48 pm »
You also stole my name........

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« Reply #6 on: September 10, 2004, 02:04:58 pm »
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HAHAHAHAHA. I love how you made them as the characters
Me too!
me three!! :tongue:  

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« Reply #7 on: September 10, 2004, 02:14:40 pm »
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You also stole my name........
Who stole your name and how?

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« Reply #8 on: September 10, 2004, 02:38:16 pm »
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You also stole my name........
Who stole your name and how?
 :glare: yeah! i was wondering too!

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« Reply #9 on: September 11, 2004, 09:10:08 am »
I already made a fanfic about this.....

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« Reply #10 on: September 11, 2004, 10:33:08 am »
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I already made a fanfic about this.....
 :ohmy: That's right!

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« Reply #11 on: September 11, 2004, 05:17:50 pm »
You did? Sorry, I didn't realize someone did it already. I won't continue it then.
« Last Edit: September 11, 2004, 05:19:05 pm by 1luke12 »

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« Reply #12 on: September 12, 2004, 02:51:35 pm »
Just change the name and plot....

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« Reply #13 on: September 12, 2004, 02:57:34 pm »
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I already made a fanfic about this.....
When was this?  :huh: