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« Reply #15 on: October 05, 2004, 05:58:54 pm »
And How Come You Did Not Use The Spirtes I Asked You To Use

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Use Paint Next Time.

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« Reply #16 on: October 06, 2004, 08:51:55 pm »
I will use paint, and i couldn't get the spirites to save to a disk, to transfer to the computer with Photoshop.

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« Reply #17 on: October 17, 2004, 08:45:41 am »
.9/10 too short,bad art  
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« Reply #18 on: October 19, 2004, 02:39:23 pm »
ooooooooo......CRASH!!! Part Three is coming soon........

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« Reply #19 on: October 19, 2004, 02:41:36 pm »
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ooooooooo......CRASH!!! Part Three is coming soon........
Will you use those sprites?

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« Reply #20 on: October 19, 2004, 03:10:35 pm »
I hope you don't mind if I unofficialy screw your comic.

I couldn't even tell what the cripes was going on. After a couple of minutes I finally figured out that in the first panel, it was a present. Then it took me another minute to make out what it said. Then, in the second panel some white block appeared, with some text, which was typed in all blasted capitals! Then in the third panel some spiral magically appeared. Oh joy. Now onto the fourth panel. Two white things start talking, and end the sentance with the best punctuation I've ever seen. Half a dozen question and exclamation marks. Then in the fifth panel, Spongebob (which looks like a slice of pizza), is getting sucked into the spiral. The drawing was so bad you had to point out that it was Spongebob, you should never have to do that. Then you end the first "issue" with the classic "To Be Continued", except is was spelt wrong.

Now for the second issue. It starts off with this green scribble, with this yellow square with black lines all over it, that's supossed to resemble arms etc. Then some yellow square with colours in it appears, followed by some talking. Then there's some black X, for some reason. IN the next panel, you were to lazy to draw the boss, so you just ut a blob of grey that's supossed to be the boss' shadow. Then Spongebob says something, and it ends. You spelt continued wrong again.

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« Reply #21 on: October 19, 2004, 04:33:16 pm »
Ok, here it is: PART THREE!!!!!! It should maybe be better:


Dark Yosi, did you say Part Two is bad or Photoshop 2 is bad. We don't have Photoshop 2, we have Photoshop Elelements 2.0, they are diiferent. I agree, Part 2 really sucks, Part III is pretty good in my opinion, and part 4 should be really great.

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« Reply #22 on: October 19, 2004, 04:56:08 pm »
I'm to lazy to write a Screwing Review right now. But why, why did you have to put this stupid "Cortex Strikes Back" thing. GAGH! My advice: Learn how to draw, then retry. Also, don't do a stupid plot, don't make spelling mistakes etc. Part III isn't good, at all. It's way sub-par to other comics and stuff.

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« Reply #23 on: October 19, 2004, 05:17:14 pm »
Ok. Sorry.  

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« Reply #24 on: October 19, 2004, 05:30:26 pm »
Grapics:  used the smae picture over and over for spongebob. why the heck is crash bandicoot Here? where the heck is he a big blank white place?  2/10

Story: It doesn't make a lick of a Sense you can't kill that with a battery 1/10

Spelling: Check it 5/10
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« Reply #25 on: October 19, 2004, 05:34:43 pm »
Ok, he din't kill it with a battery, he removed it's battery. 2nd, Crash is ther because Spongebob will be in Crash Bandicoot 2, notice it says: Sponge Bandicoot 2., SB is there in place of Crash. And i just use that same one, because it is pretty good, and it'll be easy tpo make Sb be holding stuff.

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« Reply #26 on: October 21, 2004, 04:26:31 am »
story 2/10 stupidest..story..ever
graphics .5/10 horrible graphics!
spelling 3/10 not very good speeling check it
character looks -1,000 the characters look like crud!