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« Reply #15 on: October 21, 2004, 05:00:42 pm »
Chapter 6: The Crew

Xero: Heres the base.

Spongebob: Shiny....

Unknow creature In tall pointy hat: Hey Xero Whos the Sponge?

Xero: This is spongebob Anthor one to help us destory Plankton

Vivi: Nice to meet you i'm Vivi my power is black magic


Spongebob: Wha?

*Fire burstes in front of spongebob*

Vivi : do you know now?

Spongebob: Whoa..

Vivi: And this is

Spike: Eh i can introduce myself...

Vivi:  :rolleyes:

Spongebob: Whats your power?

Spike: *Spikes come out of his body*

Spongebob: This is getting creppy, But will us four stop plankton?

Xero: Thers Ekio

Spongebob: Who?

Vivi: Shes Asleep Wake her up and you'll be sorry.

Spongebob: Really

Vivi: He'll be sorry.

End of chapter
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« Reply #16 on: October 22, 2004, 03:56:46 pm »
8.5/10...this is cool

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« Reply #17 on: October 22, 2004, 05:14:29 pm »
Chapter 7: The town of Alexandra Part one of 15

Ekio: Get out of my room!

Spongebob: I got beat up...

Vivi: I warned you..

Spongebob: So you wasn't joking

Spike: Welcome to the real world.

Xero: Enough joking around its time to get some money.

Eiko: Money???

Xero: yea I heard theres a torment Of Fighters at Alexandra

Spongebob: Alexandra?

Vivi: Home Town. Its been blown up about 5 times now

Spongebob: Is that safe?

Vivi: Don't worry. Much

Ekio: Fighters Eh? So we got 5 chances To win.

Xero: Yep 100,000 Gil

Vivi Ekio and Spike : 100,000 Gil!!!??!?

Spongebob: Gil?

Everyone but spongebob: *Laughs*

Spongebob: Very funny

Xero: Hah its money.

Spongebob: ooh

Xero: Anyways lets get to the boat and Please don't let plankton Find us again.

Spongebob: boats were invented?

Xero: Plankton rules this world everything is made again in your time.

*In boat*

Ekio: Vivi how much longer been driving for about 2 hours.

Vivi: 6 miles.

Ekio: Never should of asked..

* On mountain on road*

The pain: So erh I'm just sopposed to be look out

The _____ (can't figure out who yet): Hey your the sniper.

The pain: True.

*boat drives*

The pain: That was easy. *shoots wheel*

Spongebob: The pain?

Xero: The pain.

*Boat explodes everyone Flies to Alexandra*

The pain: Is that possible??

*at Alexandra*

Ekio: Well, There goes  5,000 Gil Now we need a new boat.

End of chapter

I plan this to Be more Of a book than a fan-fic mabye about 60-100 chapters
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« Reply #18 on: October 22, 2004, 07:07:55 pm »
wow that long?woah!

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« Reply #19 on: October 23, 2004, 09:48:19 am »
Its long cause its sorta like an rpg This will last long pepole.

Preiview For my  next Fan-Fic: Who framed Squidward Tentacles Coming Winter 2004




Chapter 8: The town of Alexandra Part two of 15

Xero: eh anyway lets find Some Tickets to get in.

Spike: What titckets you never mentioned Tickets.

Xero: Hey i forget things when your car blows up and you go flying

Xero: Anyway Lets check town I'll Go To the Booth, Spongebob Go into that bar, Ekio Go into the reasturant, Spike check out the battle arena.

Everyone: Ok.

*Following Spongebob*

Spongebob: so this is the bar seems safe.

*opens door*

Thugs: Whats this sponge doing here?

Spongebob: Uh-oh....

Thugs: Lets get him!

*Meanwhile back at the hill*

The Pain: So we shot them what now?

The ________: Theres some Tournment In Alexandra I bet they went there Go there and Beat them.

The Pain: No problem.

*aims at ground shoots and flys towards town*



*following Ekio*

Ekio: I been waiting like 15 minutes do they have more than 1 waiter...

Waiter: Heres your menu.

Ekio: Hmm lets see.  Breakfast lunch and Dinner. Hey waiter Did this menu take 12 Seconds to make?

Waiter:if you don't like it leave..

Ekio: Eh..

Person: Need a ticket huh I can get you a solid 4 But you must choose one mentor , Me Or the Others. Bring your friends to all of us then come back.

Ekio: That was Oddly Scepific.

*heads to booth*

End of chapter 8
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« Reply #20 on: October 24, 2004, 05:59:28 am »
still 10/10!

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« Reply #21 on: October 25, 2004, 05:08:30 pm »
Chapter 9: The town of Alexandra Part three of 15

Battle!

The thugs Launch 5 punches.
Spongebob asorbs them all
Thugs: What the?
Spongebob: Oh yeah i'm a sponge!
Spongebob Slices the first thug.
hug one Got Owned and Colllasped.
thug two ran away
Battle Won!
Spongebob Leveled Up. Spongebob's level is now 5.

Mentor 2: Claping*

Spongebob: Who are you?

Mentor2 : Mentor 2 the others will talk to you about mentor 1 and 3 head to the ticket booth

Spongebob:ok....

*following spike*

Annocer: Hey Kid youu fighting In this tournment?

Spike: Yeah I guess.

Annoucer: Okay but sign this its that were not responsible if you go flying.

Spike: Err..

Mentor 3: Don't worry about him

Spike: Who are you?
 Mentor 3: Mentor 3 eh i wont explain i really hate my job. go to the ticket booth already.

Spike: Keeps getting werider

*at ticket booth*

Everyone but Xero: Hey Xero some mentor guy told us to come here and tell you we need to pick one of them.

Ekio: eh. Dehjavu.

Xero: Riiiight Now what mentor do you guys want?

Spongebob: Well,

Ekio: ONE

Xero : One it is.

Spongebob: .....

*at reasturaunt*

Mentor One: Good choice my friends heres your tickets sorry about this but..

*Hits out of Roof*

Mentor one: See ya at the Tournment!

Spike: Nice choice..

Ekio: Oh shut it.

Spongebob: Is it me or do you guys  Get hit and go flying every 12 seconds?

End of chapter

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« Reply #22 on: October 26, 2004, 05:08:50 pm »
Quote
This penciel thing sounds like Frankendoodle???
Of course it is.
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« Reply #23 on: November 02, 2004, 10:34:58 pm »
Chapter 10: The town of Alexandra Part Four of 15

Spongebob narrotor: So.... We were flying once again. THis time headed for the big games Which was a challenge for me. Well here it goes.

Spongebob: So i just noticed where is Vivi?

Ekio: Uhh where Did Vivi go?

Annocer: 10 more minutes For singing in.

Vivi: Hey, Sign me in i wanna fight

Annocer: Go get them little guy.

Vivi: Yeah.. watever..

Ekio: Odd very odd Well we found Vivi

Spike: Life what can you say.

*Everyone hits the fence*

Xero: Ekio you never voting again.

Ekio: Yeah, Even i agree to that.

Annoucer: Well anyone of you wanna sign up?

Xero: You guys go i'll be betting

Annoucer: Ok the tourment is up please wait in the booth.

*Tournment Starts*

Annoucer: Hello everyone and Welcome To the Alexandra Tourment Please enjoy the chips, Bet on your own risk, and enjoy the show. Our current Fighters today are;Spongebob, Ekio,Spike,Vivi,Smegal,Zack.Evilspongee,And the Pain

Xero:The pain and Evilspongee, boy there in trouble.

Annoucer: And the Bracket is: Spongebob Vs Smegal, Ekio vs Zack Spike Vs: Evilspongee and The pain vs Vivi.

Spongebob narrotor: Entering this was Good mistake number 2 and Horrible Mistake number 4.

End Of Chapter
 

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« Reply #24 on: November 03, 2004, 02:40:24 pm »
Different than most fan-fics.

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« Reply #25 on: November 07, 2004, 03:08:32 pm »
Chapter 11:The town of Alexandra Part Five of 15

Battle One!

Spongebob: 157 hp. Techs: 1 spells: 0  Vs Smegal: 94 hp Techs: 0 Spells:1

Spongebob Jumps into the air and throws his staff, But smegal chatches it.

Semgal attacks with spongebob's staff and Hits him. 12 hp taken

Spongebob pucnhes smegal i nthe face and disarms the staff . 30 Hp taken

Smegal  eyes turn dark red and fire circles Spongebob. 7 hp taken plus burns

Spongebob goes crazy.

Spongebob uses Slice and Dice.

Smegal body was slashed Severly And smegal starts bleeding. Smegal Collasped.

Spongebob Gained 12 hp

Annoucer: Spongebob Wins Round one and Moves on to the Semi finals!  

Evilspongee: The Kids good.

The pain: Come on Anyone can beat smegal.

Evilspongee: But our Side lost this time.

The Pain: Your up next go take him out.

Evilspongee: Peice of pie, Cake, Watever.

Battle Two!

Evilspongee  264 Hp Techs: 1 Spells: 3 Vs Spike 112 Hp techs: 1 Spells: 0

End of Chapter  :ph34r:
 

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« Reply #26 on: November 09, 2004, 01:37:17 pm »
11/10 has gotten even better!

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« Reply #27 on: November 11, 2004, 01:30:02 pm »
Chapter 12:The town of Alexandra Part Six of 15


Spike: Die! (Spike come out from his body)

Spike slashes but misses

Evilspongee: Work on the aim....

Evilspongee used Darkness falls.

*A huge orb comes down going to smash spike*

Spike: What the.......

Spike lost 250 hp.

Spike collasped.

The pain: Childs play.

Annoucer:Erh evilspongee advances

*In the crowds area*

Mentor 1: Ouch hes gonna feel that in the morning

Xero: ........ *kicks mentor one*  

Annoucer: This next battle is a crappy battle which doesn't need to be shown but you can whatch the humillation if you want Go home and wahtch this later anyways Ekio won and Zack. well lets say hes gonna have a nice trip to the Emegency room.


End Of Chapter
 

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« Reply #28 on: November 14, 2004, 02:59:12 pm »
Sorry for Double post

Chapter 13:The town of Alexandra Part seven of 15


Battle Four.


The Pain 200 hp spells: 1 techs:1 Vs Vivi 150 Hp Spells: 2 Techs: 0

The Pain: Are you ready to die.
Vivi: uh...
The pain Jumps on top of a pillar and shoot in the sky
Vivi Eyes turn Blue And Ice shoots out of them.
The pain falls Down and hits the ground bouncing up and down
The pain went Pshyco
The pain grabs vivi, Kicks him shoots him up and the bullet from the sky came down slamming vivi to the ground.
Evilspongee: *Smirks*
 
*crowd area*

Mentor 1: Your team is geting killed quite fast.
Xero: I said shut up!
Mentor 1:  *rolls eyes* Poor Fool
Xero: I heard that.
Mentor 1:  You say somonething?




Spongebob narrotor: Yeah well we will come back to that stuff later i'll be  telling you A new story.

End Of chapter.
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« Reply #29 on: November 16, 2004, 03:07:31 am »
remaing great 11/10