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Squidward Tentacles

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« on: October 15, 2004, 08:55:50 am »
My first fan comic, involving Plankton trying to get the patty. It's pretty bad, but I'm making it for fun.

I wrote Karen out as she would be too hard to draw.  :tongue:
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« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2004, 09:54:40 am »
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My first fan comic, involving Plankton trying to get the patty. It's pretty bad, but I'm making it for fun.

I wrote Karen out as she would be too hard to draw.  :tongue:
Actually, it's pretty good.
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« Reply #2 on: October 15, 2004, 07:24:33 pm »
Yeah, that wa spretty good, espedciallly the animation. Make mmore.
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« Reply #3 on: October 15, 2004, 08:11:05 pm »
I love the Picture Where plankton is holding A lrabby patty He looks Awsome Cartoony 8/10  
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« Reply #4 on: October 16, 2004, 12:06:23 am »
Wow...thats better than my drawings :)

Do more of those. Those are funny
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« Reply #5 on: October 16, 2004, 05:32:07 am »
6/10

It was okey, but it wasn't very funny.
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« Reply #6 on: October 16, 2004, 11:01:09 am »
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My first fan comic, involving Plankton trying to get the patty. It's pretty bad, but I'm making it for fun.

I wrote Karen out as she would be too hard to draw.  :tongue:
Make More 9/10  :biggrin:  
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« Reply #7 on: October 16, 2004, 01:09:54 pm »
The story is not perfect, but the drawings were great!
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« Reply #8 on: October 16, 2004, 02:35:32 pm »
How was Karen hard to draw? Just make a square with a squiggly line.
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« Reply #9 on: October 16, 2004, 03:14:26 pm »
I'm gonna continue this story, expect a new page every so often, the plot will be Plankton has a new invention (well, an upgrade from his machine in Plankton!), the Ingrediamatron, and with help from an unsuspecting Patrick, Plankton finds his way into the Krusty Krab Kitchen, where he manages to take a Patty.

EDIT: Page 2 is up. Drawing Patrick is not my strong point, neither is comedy, really. Expect a couple more parts.
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« Reply #10 on: October 16, 2004, 07:20:13 pm »
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The story is not perfect, but the drawings were great!
Ya. The drawings are awsome.

But the script could use some working on.
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« Reply #11 on: October 16, 2004, 11:45:28 pm »
The drawings are nice, and this one was funnier, I like the part were Plankton is reading the Guide To Steal Secret Formuals
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« Reply #12 on: October 17, 2004, 04:07:38 am »
I'm half way through page 3 at the moment.

If anyone has a plot they'd want me to make, either write it in this thread or PM me, I'd be glad to make more comics after this one!

Thanks for the praise and the critisism - the critisism will help me improve.

EDIT: Page 3 is up! It's not finished yet, though. I hope this part is slightly funnier.
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« Reply #13 on: October 17, 2004, 05:44:22 am »
Hey, this is great! The pictures look almost perfect!
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« Reply #14 on: October 17, 2004, 06:40:04 am »
Thanks, 1luke12.

Page 4 is here, Page 5 will be the final part (probably).

 
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