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Offline Squiddy

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« on: November 10, 2004, 07:26:08 pm »
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   Misunderstood, Unknown, experience is not needed by some to experience what they did not know in the first place.
   Enjoyment within, yet sorrow at appearance. The spectator knows better then the player in this game, and still in chips away at by soul every passing day.
   One does not know how to feel in a parricide when thy own friends betray thee. Happy nor sad, nor angered, nor yet raged but yet apathetic state. So thy feel no sorrow, thy feel no anger, thy feel only what thy want to feel, the pleasure that comes from its shy presents, the beauty that lies within its shallow name, the glory of all that is glorious. Pondering alas, if thy spectator knows thy self, alas, let thy own self be true.


Something I wrote in five minutes or less. :tongue:
   
 
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« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2004, 08:00:27 pm »
You are like Squidward a lot. (Not to be mean, I mean how you write and stuff)
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« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2004, 08:43:54 pm »
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   Misunderstood, Unknown, experience is not needed by some to experience what they did not know in the first place.
   Enjoyment within, yet sorrow at appearance. The spectator knows better then the player in this game, and still in chips away at by soul every passing day.
   One does not know how to feel in a parricide when thy own friends betray thee. Happy nor sad, nor angered, nor yet raged but yet apathetic state. So thy feel no sorrow, thy feel no anger, thy feel only what thy want to feel, the pleasure that comes from its shy presents, the beauty that lies within its shallow name, the glory of all that is glorious. Pondering alas, if thy spectator knows thy self, alas, let thy own self be true.


Something I wrote in five minutes or less. :tongue:
I like your writing. Very intelligent usage of words.

I take alot of time figuring out writing a poem.. I'm not so poetic.
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« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2004, 04:34:20 am »
LOL..

That what it is soppuse to be like, alot of times sometimes has to tell you the meaning of the poem before you get it.

And, I am like Squidward, I hate everything, I like more mature people, and I always seemed to be depressed, LOL!
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« Reply #4 on: November 11, 2004, 11:31:51 am »
i like it. I like your word choices, they are fun 2 read. :biggrin:  
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« Reply #5 on: November 11, 2004, 01:57:35 pm »
Thanks.

Vocab is very important in literature!
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« Reply #6 on: November 13, 2004, 09:25:22 am »
we should have a poetry/story corner of the newspaper
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« Reply #7 on: November 13, 2004, 10:01:26 am »
9/10

Great Vocabulary you chose your words very wisely  
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« Reply #8 on: November 13, 2004, 01:02:34 pm »
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   Misunderstood, Unknown, experience is not needed by some to experience what they did not know in the first place.
   Enjoyment within, yet sorrow at appearance. The spectator knows better then the player in this game, and still in chips away at by soul every passing day.
   One does not know how to feel in a parricide when thy own friends betray thee. Happy nor sad, nor angered, nor yet raged but yet apathetic state. So thy feel no sorrow, thy feel no anger, thy feel only what thy want to feel, the pleasure that comes from its shy presents, the beauty that lies within its shallow name, the glory of all that is glorious. Pondering alas, if thy spectator knows thy self, alas, let thy own self be true.


Something I wrote in five minutes or less. :tongue:
wow thats really long! it's impressive!
i like your poem (even though i don't really get it)
« Last Edit: November 13, 2004, 01:02:48 pm by xdragonsb »
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« Reply #9 on: November 15, 2004, 06:19:55 am »
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   Misunderstood, Unknown, experience is not needed by some to experience what they did not know in the first place.
   Enjoyment within, yet sorrow at appearance. The spectator knows better then the player in this game, and still in chips away at by soul every passing day.
   One does not know how to feel in a parricide when thy own friends betray thee. Happy nor sad, nor angered, nor yet raged but yet apathetic state. So thy feel no sorrow, thy feel no anger, thy feel only what thy want to feel, the pleasure that comes from its shy presents, the beauty that lies within its shallow name, the glory of all that is glorious. Pondering alas, if thy spectator knows thy self, alas, let thy own self be true.


Something I wrote in five minutes or less. :tongue:
wow thats really long! it's impressive!
i like your poem (even though i don't really get it)
How is it good if you don't get it?
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« Reply #10 on: November 16, 2004, 02:33:16 am »
7/10,just descent
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« Reply #11 on: November 17, 2004, 11:38:10 am »
Did you even understand it?
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