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Which of the following fan-fics is best?

1. "Mario and the Golden Yoshi 2" by Sponge-Tron_X
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2. "Spongey to the End" by JackWhite2000
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« on: November 13, 2004, 04:30:51 am »
Here it is, the finals! Please read the following two fan-fics and vote. On Wednesday morning, I will announce the winner. Then, you'll vote a little different by replying votes so I don't need to make another topic. After these two, two more will compete. Then, the winners from each will face each other in the voting showdown. People who entered may vote for themselves.

1. Nominee 1

MARIO AND THE GOLDEN YOSHI]2!!
BY: Super_MArio_King(ML Username)
BY: Sponge-Tron_X(SZ Username)



2 weeks after Bowser's plot was foiled by the mini-yoshis
Bowser has just found out that he was scared of mini-yoshis, so he is ready for revenge...

LOCATION: Revenges 'R' Us Store

Bowser: I would like a Build Your Own Revenge Kit, please.
Clerk: He you go. That would be $300000000000000000.00.
Bowser:WHAT?!?!?!?!?! I mean I uhm a um uhh misplaced my ummm uhh uhh ummuh umuh...
Clerk: Wallet.
Bowser: Yeah um wallet.
Clerk: Well your in luck, today we give anything out for one red rose and sunflower.
Bowser: Will you take pink?
Clerk: Yep.

Location: Yoshi's House
Mario and Yoshi are talking when all of a sudden...
Bowser kicked open the door, carring something that looked like the FLUD Master in Super Mario Sunshine, exept it was 200X Bigger! He shot goo all over the house and then ran off.
Pretty soon, all of Mario Land was filled with goo. Bowser held a big speech, and all of Mario Land attended, exept Mario who got arrested by Bowser's henchmen after the speech.
Bowser has just agreed to clean up the goo to become in charge of Mario Land.
LOCATION: JAIL
Mario: I need to get out of here and save Mario Land. Wait iv'e got an idea!! Umm uhh, officer may i have my one phone call.
Officer: Sure. BETTER BE QUICK!!!!
Mario: Uhh, thanks.
Mario calls Yoshi, and starts the mumbling the plan.
LOCATION: BIG SHOWDOWN ARENA
Bowser has just agreed to battle Mario in a final showdown. All of the other people in Mario Land are frozen in the audience.
Bowser pulled out his 50000000000 shooter laser and started firing at Mario. Mario was using a shield, and at the end of Bowser's turn his shield blew into tiny pieces.
[/i]Bowser: (Laughing) Your Turn.
Mario: I will use my lifeline.
Bowser: Very well, whom do you want out of the frozen audience box.
Mario: Yoshi. He knows what to get.
Bowser: Gaurds, FREE YOSHI!!!!!!!!!!!
Yoshi: I'll be right back Mario.
1 second later...
Yoshi: I'm back.
Mario: That was fast. Did you bring the you-know-what?
Yoshi: Right inside the back pack.
Mario puts on the back pack and reaches into it...
Mario: An Egg Mcmuffin with cheese????????????????????????
Yoshi: I was hungry. Reach in again.
Mario again reaches into the bag, and pulls out...
Bowser: THE GOLDEN YOSHI!!!!!!!!
YOSHI: THE GOLDEN YOSHI!!!!!!!!
Guards: THE GOLDEN YOSHI!!!!!!!!
Audience (Trying to speak): THE GOLDEN YOSHI!!!!!!!!
Billions of Mini-Yoshis came flying out a bowser ran off screaming!!!
All of the people were then freed.
Mario: The Mini-Yoshi's saved the day...AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hope You Like It!
-Sponge-Tron_X

2. Nominee 2

Note: This will have a good ending filled with life.

Sponge To The End

We come to Bikini Bottom on a soon to be tradgic day. "Good mornig Bikini Bottom!!" said Spongebob, unaware of what would happen that week. "Meow." said Gary. "Hey, Gary!! How 'bout breakfeast?" asked Spongebob. "Meow!" replied Gary in a hungry voice. They had breakfast that mornig as usual. "Guess what Gary! Today's my day off!!" "Meow." "Yes, you can stay home and watch the Dukes of Hazard marathon." After breakfast, Spongebob cleaned up. "I'm going over to Sandys house." said Spongebob, going out the door. When he got there, he was shocked when he found her house with a big hole in it and Sandy dead. There was a note that said "Spongebob: You won't stop my revenge!!" "AHH!!!" yelled Spongebob. He ran to Krusty Krab, strait into Mr. Krabs office and was shocked again; for Mr. Krabs was dead!! Anathor note said "You're getting closer! Try to guess my next victim!!" Spongebob franticly heard an "AHH!!" from Squidward. Spongebob read another note that said "P, G, P, P, S." Spongebob ran to Patricks house and found him like the others. He Franticly ran home and fond Gary dead. He ran to Mr. Krabs house to tell Pearl, but she was dead! Spongebob, asuming it was Plankton, ran to the Chum Bucket and found Plankton dead. He ran home crying and on his mirror was written in red "Soon!" Then, Spongebob went to the only person he knew could help him: The Flying Dutchman. He got to his ship, and Th Dutchman was outraged. "They're not supposed to die for 50 more years!!" The dutchman agreed to help Spongebob. Then, they found out who had killed everybody: The Strangler. The Dutchman, however couldn't take his life because he had stolen the Trident of Neptune. The Dutchman explained to Spongebob that he would need another ghost to help him. Spongebob agreed to give his life, only if The Flying Dutchman gave all of them their life back afterwards. He agreed and Spongebob became a ghost and helped The Dutchman defeat The Stragler. They did it, and The Dutchman kept his promise. The next week, a Parade was held in Spongebobs and The Flying Dutchmans honnour.

THE END.


There they are; please vote if you can!
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« Reply #1 on: November 13, 2004, 04:57:54 am »
i'm saying spongey to the end

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« Reply #2 on: November 13, 2004, 11:37:16 am »
What happned to Sb And Pat Find Atlantis?

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« Reply #3 on: November 13, 2004, 11:56:44 am »
He's only posting those two right now. He's posting mine and whoever else's fan fics on Wednesday and people will vote between them by posting rather than a poll.

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« Reply #4 on: November 13, 2004, 11:58:30 am »
Yeah, I found that out right after I posted.

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« Reply #5 on: November 13, 2004, 04:07:25 pm »
Go to www.FanFiction.net if you want to read the un- edited version of Spongey till the End.

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« Reply #6 on: November 14, 2004, 05:14:44 am »
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Go to www.FanFiction.net if you want to read the un- edited version of Spongey till the End.
It was edited?

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« Reply #7 on: November 14, 2004, 04:19:18 pm »
Ya, the original is more violent. I cut out how they died in the USB version.

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« Reply #8 on: November 15, 2004, 06:12:53 pm »
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Ya, the original is more violent. I cut out how they died in the USB version.
Thank you, we wouldn't want younger kids reading something like that.

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« Reply #9 on: November 16, 2004, 02:25:37 am »
I thought the other verison was better and isn't"the youngest member on USB 8?

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« Reply #10 on: November 16, 2004, 02:30:02 pm »
Anyway, this is the last day to vote, at least that would be counted. Please vote!

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« Reply #11 on: November 17, 2004, 02:44:03 pm »
Ok ,so round one is over. Sponge-Tron_X, you have not won, but still did a great job. Below attached is your certificate. Here is round two: simply reply your vote. Sunday morning is the cut-off.

Here they are!

"Master Thief" By Evilspongee

Master Thief is name of the Fan-Fic

Chapter 1 Intro.

Time: 3:36
Location: Squidwards house.


July 14th 2004

Squidward was Whatching His favorite Show, "How to get Hair"
Tv: And the reason how to get hair is..
Squidward: Yes Yes..
Tv: Sorry for the Interuption but A "Master thief" Has stolen THe most Valube Thing from the krusty Krab. The golden patty... The suspects Are: Flats,
Patrick Star, Spongebob SquarePants , Squilllaim Fancyson , Ms.Puff, And Scooter

TV: All of the suspects Were Near the krusty Krab The time Of the Crime.
Tv: And the Vitctim.. Plankton The Most hatrid person of the Krusty Krab Knocked out Hes being taken to the Hospital. If anyone Finds who Did this wins a award of 1000 bucks! And now Back to your Normal Show.

Tv: And that is the Best way to find Hair.
Squidward:NOOOOOOOOOOO
TV: but if you turn in 1000 bucks you get your very own free Hair.
Squidward: I must Get that Hiar!! *Runs in closet gets Sherlok holmes Clothes and jumps out of window*

End Of chapter One

Chapter 2 Interviews (part 1)

Time : 3:49 PM

Location : Patricks House


July 14th 2004

Squidward was going to inter-view each and very one of the suspects asking questions then he would look for clues.

Suspect 1: Patrick Star

Squidward knocks on Patrick's Rock

Patrick: Squidward!!! whats with the clothes?

Squidward: Hey! Don't Insult the Squid's Clothes

Patrick : Ok.

Squidward: Right. Now Patrick Where were you last night at the Crime.

Patrick: Crime What crime??? I did nothing I didn't Steal the Ice cream!!

Squidward: Patrick Calm down I meant when the Golden Patty Was stolen

Patrick: Golden Patty?? Sounds Good I'm gonna go steal it!

Squidward: Patrick!!

Patrick : Sorry

Squidward: Now where were you last night

Patrick : Well... i was at the krusty Krab I order A double krabby patty Supreme it was good very good Did i mention it was good? anyway it was good and it was also good

Squidward: Patrick!!!

Patrick: Oh yea And while I was gonna eat my patty Somone Knocked The patty right out of my hand! I took it and went home *points to patty* ansd thats it

Squidward: Hmm your stupid Story is Ok I'll take it for now... *Goes checks patty* Hmm this patty has No finger Prints... Spongebob and Patrick Are cut out for this Clue But they won't get away so easy.

*Walks out of door *


End Of chapter

Thanks pepoles You all get a chance TO find out who did it Closey Find out the Clues

Chapter 3 interviews (part 2)

TIME: 4:00 PM

Location : Ms. Puffs Boating school

Squidward: After my last reports I got some infomation from patrick Not very good info But its worth it man i will never interview Him again.

Squidward: Well mabye if he wasn't So stupid i would get more... *hits head on poll*

Squidward: Why am I asking myself these questions Why did i run into a poll why am I wearing these Bad clothes After this this will be my next case.

*Arrives at Boating School*

Suspect: 02

Ms. puff : Squidward??

Squidward: Ms. Puff ... I am here for the latest Crime..

Ms.Puff : *sweats*

Squidward: you swear to tell all the truth?? and that stuff

Ms.puff: Yes

Squidward: And you know if you Lie I will hunt you down

Ms.Puff *sweats more* Well Ok..

Squidward: Did you hapen to knock somthing Out Of Patricks hand last night?

Ms.puff: No i didn't

Squidward: Did you see Who did it?

Ms.puff: Yes it was Flats He was Mad about getting A bad drink Seems Spongebob was goofing Off.

Squidward: Hmm makes Sense One more Q, Give me An A

ms.puff : Give you a what?

Squidward: Sorry It is the clothes One more question. What were you doing last night

Ms. puff: I was in the bathroom At first once i came out i saw flats come in and Knock the patty out. I thought things would get nasty So then I left.

Squidward: Your Story checks Out...

*leaves*

Squidward: So far i heard that Patrick's Krabby patty Was knocked Out by Flats But that was because spongebob was goofing off. I will next InterView spongebob To try to get some Dirt On scooter I will get my hair I will *runs into poll*

squidward: After this I am bruning these clothes..

End of chapter 3

Chapter 4 Inteviews (final part)

TIME: 4:28 PM

Location: The krusty Krab

Suspect 03

*goes to spongebob*

Spongebob: Hey squidward Finish those arons?

Squidward: Wrong episode

Spongebob: Oh yea this is the crime episode oh yea.. The Person who did It was..

Squidward: Spongebob!

Spongebob: Oh.. Riiight

Squidward: Watever. Spongebob Where were you last night

Spongebob: here of Corse Making krabby patty's

Squidward: Is it true That you gave flats a wrong soda

spongebob: He said some kinda Soda we didn't have it so i gave him Dr kelp

Squidward: is it true That ms. Puff ran out of the Building?

Spongebob: No ms. puff was still here

Squidward: You know any thing about scooter?

Spongebob: Yea scooter was there he was on table 30 the last table

Squidward: Do you know what he was doing?

Spongebob: I don't know he was just eating

Squidward: Do you know any thing else About the Golden Patty?

Spongebob: Well I know one thing It is guarded By many Lasers Only two Pepole coulda gone through that

Squidward: Who?

Spongebob: I don't Know! waht is this 30 Minutes?

Squidward: No its sherlok homles

Spongebob: SO thats why you wear those Bad clothes

Squidward: Don't Rub it in

Spongebob: Ok .. there still bad

squidward: Well your story is ok .

*leaves*


Squidward: Good facts out of spongebob THough i asked Way too many questions

* Scooter is walking by*

Suspect 04

Squidward: Scooter!

Scooter: Dude?

Squidward: Where were you last night?

Scooter: Well Dude i was like eating at the krusty krab on table 30 (his werid laugh)

Squidward: Why were you at the last table?

Scooter: It was a big commetion Dude and I don't wanan be in the middle Dude...

Squidward: What about ms. Puff did she really leave?

Scooter : No dude She left but came back in 50 seconds Later dude..

Squidward: What about patrick?

Scooter: Well after His patty got knocked off he ran into the kitchen

Squidward: What was Spongebob doing:

Scooter: Well dude he was like just not doing his job

Squidward: ok your free to go

Squidward: So i have mny clues now Patrick patty was knocked Down and he ran into the kitchen

Ms. puff was in the bathroom Then Ran out and came Back

Spongebob was goofing off and not doing his job

Scooter Was eating on table 30 because he was scared of being in the middle

Flats complaned about getting the Wrong Soda and knocked patricks patty

Squidward: Flats i gotta inter view Him then i search for clues..

Goes to Flats house*

Suspct 05

Squidward: Flats

Flats: Yea shrimp

Squidward: Squid.. Now where were you last night

Flats : Krusty krab hat sponge gave me the wrong Soda

squidward: He Complained he didn't Have that soda what soda did you ask for?

Flats: Dr. Kelp

Squidward: Ok

Flats: These questions Are making me mad wanan butt kicking?

Squidward: *runs*

Squidward: So I say there all lieing But like in the Board Game "Hint" I will come to an end Sooner or later..

*hits poll*

Squidward: I'M GONNA KILL YOU POLLS!! *kicks*

Squidward:........... *screams*

End of chapter 4.

Chapter 5 Searching for clues

TIME: 6:47 Pm

Location: Krusty krab


*Squidward tries to open front door*

Squidward: Its locked.. Wait a minute I forgot to interview Sqi8llaim ahh who cares I'll get some dirt on him.

Squidward: *jumps on top of the roof and jumps down*

Squidward: *checks mr.Krabs office*

Voice 1: Haha We stole the Stupid krabs Patty for good we made a fortune

Voice 2 : Yea... And were gonna steal all his money too...

Squidward: Not on my wahtch. * slowy steps* *trips*

Voice 1 and 2: Lets get outta here!!!

Squidward: Hmmm who were those voices *Checks around office* Wait tthe droped a dollar... *checks* This dollar has a fin on it and the other side has fingers...

Suddely A note comes poping out.

*reads*

Dear Squidward dude.. Its scooter Dude.. I Can help you on this case I am getting blackmail to tell fake stuff Dude they said they would break ever surfboard I had Dude!!!! From that dude scooter dude.


Squidward: So scooter is being framed..And spongebob Or patrick was the first voice. and Ms. puff Squillaim or Flats.. Or scooter He may be lieing but i will have to find out..

Squidward: This chapter is over But... *tries to rip off clothes*

Squidward: Ack! there stuck Do i have to wear these for the whole fan fic!!

End Of chapter 5

Chapter 6 Searching For clues (part 2)

Time: 8:00 PM

Location Krusty krab

Squidward: I'm gonna ask some more questions Back to ms. puff

*goes to house*

Ms.puff: *Sweats*

Squidward: So Ms. puff.. you Didn't tell the truth you came back didn't You.

Ms.puff: Well Uh Yes I did Okay! But i didn't take the patty I am getting blackmail.

Squidward: Scooter Is getting black mail too Do you know anyone esle?

Ms. puff: No one else

Squidward: Okay I'm gonna check your house a bit.

*finds dairy*

Squidward: July 14th 04 I was one of the suspects For the crime Of Only 4 pepole knew the code But i can prove that I and Scooter Are innocent.


Squidward: Hmm .. Scooter and Ms.puff are free to go.

*leaves*


Squidward: So farI have Spongebob Patrick Flats And squillaim As the guilty I will shorten this down to one.... In the next chapter I need some Food anyway *goes to Open and close (In and out)*

End Of Chapter Six

Chapter 7 Day 02 (part 1)

TIME: 7:00 AM

Location: Open And close

I awake at open and close I fell asleep here What am I Where aim I Do i need to see a doctor about talking to my self Nobody Knows..

Squidward: I need To see Mr. Patrick Again...

*goes to patricks Rock*

Patrick: Hey squidward!!

Squidward: Uhh hey?? Now patrick I gotta Ask you some questions

Patrick: Ok. What is with the clothes Is that some kinda of Mermaid Man and barncle Boy suit?

Squidward: Sherlock Holmes

Patrick: Who?

Squidward: Never mind that So patrick What did you do after you came back home with your patty

Patrick: *drolling* You say somthing? Oh right the question..... What was it again?

Squidward: If you lisen you will get a Lolli Pop

Patrick: Whoo hoo!! Ok Ok after my patty was knocked out I went home But then I saw somone walking by there sheos Made one annyoing Noise.

Squidward: Annoying Huh? well did you ever come back to the krusty krab?

Patrick: No.. But I went to sandy's House last night Squillam Fancyson Was sneaking around With some kind Of Thing Who knows.

Squidward: What about Flats?

Patrick: Well he probbly Was still at the krusty Krab then..

Squidward: anything esle.

Patrick: Hm..................................... Hm........... Nope wait!............... hm... nope

Squidward: I am crossing Mr. Patrick Off the List here. We Have Spongebob Flats ANd Squillaim One of them Did it and THis squids gonna find out.....

End Of chapter Seven

Chapter 8 Day 02 (final Part)

Time: 10:00 AM

Location: Ms. puff boating School

Squidward: I was happy About all the Info I gotten From patrick Today but its not over till the Fat Squid Dances.

Squidward: Fat squid dances.. Remind Me to never say that again..

*sees Flats*

Flats: Hey squid wanna butt kick?

Squidward: Wanna jail throw in?

Flats:.....

Squidward: Now flats Do you know who coulda done The crime

Flats: Yea it wasn't Me probbly That rich guy and the Sponge

Squidward: Yes so do you know ANy oter things that could Of happend The night of the crime?

Flats: Nope

Squidward: Do you know if there working togther?

Flats: Them work togther? That a horrible chance

Squidward: Hmm so then who esle did It?

Flats: Well there was a code Only one person can solve But I don't know which the code was Mean and somtimes nice Has a bad pair Of Lice.

Squidward: Lice? WHat kinda Code is that

Flats: Hey I don't have all the awnsers

Squidward: Ok you case Is Checked Out.

Yes It takes A special Kind of squid to Do this Job

Squidward Master Private Eye..

End of Chapter 8

Final Chapter: Who did it

Time: 6:30 Pm

Location: Krusty Krab

Squidward; I came to and Conclusion and the final To suspects are Spongebob..
And Squillam Who did it? I kind find that out. But Can you??
And Who did it? Sqillaim fancyson..

He was a The greedyest snob ever.. He wanted to get so rich he choose TO steal the golded patty. He tryed to Frame Spongebob By blackmailing Some of the suspects He stole one of Spongebob's Shoes From his closet to make his Annyoing Foot steps

Squillaim Has been senataced to Court and will be in jail for 3 days.


End Of fan-fic

And...

SpongeBob and Patrick Find Atlantis
By BiggerSquarierSpongier

One Morning in Bikini Bottom

(SpongeBob's alarm clock rings)
SB: Oh, Boy! It's 6:00! Today's the Day!
(Hops out of bed and runs over to Patrick's house in his underwear)
SB: Patrick, wake up! Today's the Day!
(Patrick's rock lifts up)
Pat: Today's the day Squidward releases his debut album?
SB: No, silly! Today's the day of the Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy marathon starting at 8:00 A.M./7:00 A.M. central all leading up to a brand new episode at 8:00 P.M./7:00 P.M. central!
Pat: Oh.
SB: Let's go inform Squidward so he doesn't miss it!
(SpongeBob and Patrick run across the yard to Squidward's house but trip on a bottle)
SB: Ouch... Hey, what's this?
(SpongeBob pulls out an old tattered piece of paper)
SB: My Neptune, Patrick! Do you know what this is?!
Pat: It couldn't be.....
SB: It is.....
SB and Pat: SANDPAPER!
(Begin to dance and continue to do so for 14 and a half hours)
SB: Oh No! We missed the new episode of Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy!
Pat: Barnacles!
SB: Oh, well, at least we still have the sandpaper.
(Just the, the ground begins to shake, the sky turns red, and Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy emerge from over the horizon.)
MM: You missed our new episode! I thought you two were our biggest fan!
SB: But we are!
BB: Oh, no. A person who doesn't watch new episodes of us definitely isn't our biggest fan.
SB: But-
BB: NO BUTS! As punishment for this, you two are hereby kicked out of our fanclub.
(SpongeBob and Patrick's eyes shrink)
SB and Pat: WHAT?
BB: You heard me, you're out of the club.
(SpongeBob and Patrick stare at each other for a moment, then begin to cry.)
MM: Alright, boys, keep your undies on! I'm willing to give you one more chance.
(SpongeBob and Patrick immediately smile)
MM: I need you two to find my denchers. I lost them somewhere about twenty miles from town, and without them I can't eat.
SB: No problem, sirs! Let's go, Patrick!
(SpongeBob and Patrick run off)



3 Days Later

Pat: We’ll never find Mermaid Man’s teeth now, SpongeBob. We’ve searched throughout the entire ocean.
SB: We can’t give up now, Patrick! If we don’t find it, Mermaid Man’ll-
Pat: I don’t give a barnacle about Mermaid Man! He’s just an old man with some stupid powers.
SB: You take that back!
Pat: Never!
(SpongeBob tackles Patrick and they begin to fight!)

Voice: Hold it, you jerks!
SB: Huh?
Voice: You ain’t allowed fightin’ in Atlantis!
SB: Atlantis? Who are you?
Voice: I am George Smekonnel. I am the security guard of Atlantis. Now, either stop fighting or get your tail-fins out of here.
SB: Atlantis? Wow….. Hey, have you seen some denchers around here?
George: Yah, I did. They’re just over that volcanic mountain, across that unstable bridge, through the giant clam feeding grounds, and right next door to the giant evil lawn gnomes.
SB:Okay, thanks!


(So SpongeBob and Patrick walk over to the top of the volcanic mountain to see what they can see.)

SB: Hey, Patrick, I think I see the bridge!
Pat: Wow, that looks really unstable!
SB: Yah, let’s go!

( They run down the mountain and as they approach the bottom, a giant geyser of lava shoots up from the ground)

SB and Pat: Oooooohhh…..
Pat: How’d they get the water to turn such a lovely shade of orange?

(The volcano erupts and large amounts of lava close in on SpongeBob and Patrick)

SB: Hurry, Patrick, we gotta get to that unstable bridge where it’s safe!

(They run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run until they finally reach the bridge)

SB: Phew! That was a close one!

(The bridge collapses and SpongeBob and Patrick begin to fall)

Pat: OH NO! WE’RE GONNA DIE, SPONGEBOB! AND THEN CLAMS WILL DEVOUR OUR FLESH AND LEAVE OUR BONES TO DECAY FOR EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER…
SB: Wait a second…

(Pulls out a bubble wand, dips it in the soap and blows a bubble big enough to surround him and Patrick)

Pat: Good job SpongeBob!
SB: Yah! Now we can just float past the giant clams and the evil lawn gnomes!

(So they fly over the giant clams and evil lawn gnomes and retrieve the teeth)

Pat: We did it, SpongeBob!
SB: Yah! Now let’s give them to Mermaid Man!

(A giant creature emerges from the ground)
SB: Huh?
Creature: I am Mecton, leader of the evil lawn gnomes. Put them teeth back before I am forced to scalp you!
SB: But we don’t have any hair!
Mecton: Oh…. Well…. Then I’ll grind yer bones to make me bread!
SB: But we don’t have any bones, either!
Mecton: Listen, punk, when a villain threatens to do something to you, you don’t contradict him. You fear him beyond the point of fear. Now shut up while I kill you

POW!
(Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy appear out of nowhere)

MM: Good job, son! We’ll take it from here.

(Mermaid Man takes out a large hammer it breaks the gnome)

BB: Well, kid, ya did it. And as much as I hate to say it, you’re an honest-to-goodness fan.
MM: In fact, we’re making you president of our fan club!
SB: Oh, boy, Patrick, president!
Pat: Let’s go inform Squidward!

(SpongeBob and Patrick run off)

FIN.
A Cheese Company Production.

There they are: vote!
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« Reply #12 on: November 17, 2004, 07:10:27 pm »
THATS AWSMOME! I Vote For Atlantis. The Cheese Production thing reminds me of an assigment my sister had for college, she toild me about. It said: A Cheesey Production, and then it hasd the camera paning along a HUGE ailse of cheese.

THANKS FOR THE CERTIFICATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #13 on: November 18, 2004, 04:41:21 am »
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THATS AWSMOME! I Vote For Atlantis. The Cheese Production thing reminds me of an assigment my sister had for college, she toild me about. It said: A Cheesey Production, and then it hasd the camera paning along a HUGE ailse of cheese.

THANKS FOR THE CERTIFICATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You're welcome! I'm glad that you like it.

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« Reply #14 on: November 19, 2004, 09:57:18 pm »
I vote for me.