Topic: Plankton's Best Plan Yet

[1kenny]

Plankton was in his lab eating breakfast.
Plankton: These holographic pancakes are good!
Comp. wife: they're 100% holgraphic
Plankton: i got a new plan!!
Comp. wife: calm down! rember what happened last time?
Plankton: i know but what im going to do is---
loud racket
comp. wife: that is good.
cut Sb house
Sb: mmm.. kelp crunch how good.
(crunch!)
Sb: what's this look its a wish shell. what shold i wish for? oh yea i whis it was yesterday!!!
Sb was in his room waking up
ringggg
Sb: gary, where's the phone?
Gary: meowwwww
Sb: thanks gary.
Mr.krabs was on the phone
Mr. krabs: Sb i want you to wake up at 4:30am and meet me at Downtown.
Sb: okay where?
mr.krabs: at high rise. see you tomomorw.
(end of part 1)




Do you like it so far?

[spongepat369]

Pretty good, captures the feel of the show, but not one bit funny.  Honestly, I don't like any of these fanfics, but yours is one of the best so far.

[Patrick]

yes, we know you're trying to start a commition, now, go away and fetch me a banana.

[Guest_foulpattie]

Pretty good, captures the feel of the show, but not one bit funny.  Honestly, I don't like any of these fanfics, but yours is one of the best so far.

hey this is foulpattie but i don't feel like loging in now but dude go read my fanfic about the bikini bottom war.

[spongepat369]

Oh, OK!

[SS4Gohan]

Now you know how bad kenny's is

-SS4Gohan

[spongepat369]

Yeah.  I do, but its still OK.

[SS4Gohan]

Yeah... it's good, but not compared to foulpattie's...

-SS4Gohan