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Squidward Mysteries, Case 05
« on: March 09, 2005, 05:36:20 pm »
I haven't done a squidward fan-Fic in a long time, they have mostly been spongebob:

Prologue
Time: 2:00 PM
Day: March, 9, 2005

Squidward: Call me Squid, Squidward, Private eye, I solve mysteries, But you Should have known that or your an idiot, Yeah i'm a cop, A good one, Why am I talking to myself? I will solve that soon.

Squidward: I was Sitting in my office with some peace and tranquility, Intill She came in, There goes my Talking to my self thing.

*Squirrel infringes*
Squidward: She had a(n) raincoat on, Sorta brownish, A hat, and a Lolly-Pop In the mouth she looked like she had something important to say, Oh goody.

Sandy: Your a private eye?
Squidward: No, I'm just a janitor.
Sandy: No funny biz Squidward, We got a real case here, I need to hire somone good, Somone like you.

Squidward: So whats the case?
Sandy: Well, A Young fish was kidnapped today.
Squidward: And the parent?
Sandy: Dead, It looks like she was shot but nobody knows and thats where you come in, You Find the missing child.
Squidward: Any..Money in it?
Sandy: I'll give you 100.
Squidward: You got a deal.
Sandy: Bye Detective Don't dissapoint me.
*Leaves*

Squidward: Its go time.
Spongebob: That was a really corny line dontcha think?
Squidward: Out of here! This is My Episode!

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Chapter Over.

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« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2005, 06:46:51 pm »
You have a great imagination!!!!!! I would buy it if it were a book.  :biggrin:

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« Reply #2 on: March 10, 2005, 06:12:13 am »
Hmm...why is Sandy so interested? *du dun dun!*

Keep going, I like it.

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« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2005, 02:58:14 pm »
Chapter 1....... The missing body.
Time: 2:10 PM
Day: Same as last day.

Squidward: I jumped into my boat and jumped into the car.
Squidward: My boat was cooler than your moms boat, it was nice shiny and blue, I like blue.
Squidward: I was driving through the park everything seemed normal, Trees, Trees, Evergreen Trees, people walking by, sky was blue...as normal.

Squidward: I kept driving intill I saw the trees, A part of the trees, Dead, No leaves just dull, Dead...

Squidward: I stoped the car and checked out the area, the grass changed green to brown as I walked through.

Squidward: I saw a girl she was sitting on a rock next to a painting, she most likey painted it, except she wasn't painting

Squidward: Ma'am? are you ok?

Girl: *cough cough* *Gasping for air for a while*

Squidward: She fell over, I ran over there to see what was wrong, I was late, too late, she was, dead, dead, something in her hand a drawing I snatched it from her hands.

Squidward: A normal Blank sheet of paper, nothing on it nothing, Nothing, I called the police on my cellphone, they came speeding down

Cop 1: Whats the problem detective?
Squidward: I was Driving in my car when i saw the girl pass out and die.
Cop 2: Strange... this is the very same girl who was kidnapped yesterday.

Squidward: I was too late, the child and mother were,

Cop 1: Dead, Hes dead meat whoever did this.
Cop 2: We will investigate stick with us while we find some clues.

Random Cop: HEY! Guys! I found something.
*Everyone turns*

End...Of...Chapter...1.
« Last Edit: March 10, 2005, 04:30:11 pm by Evilspongee »

DennisLuvr

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« Reply #4 on: March 10, 2005, 04:27:48 pm »
Yay! This is pretty good...

edso

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« Reply #5 on: March 11, 2005, 08:35:59 am »
Can I have some links to your other fanfics?

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« Reply #6 on: March 12, 2005, 09:44:15 am »
Chapter 2

Time:  2:30 PM
Day: Same Day

Cop 3: This paper... Writting is on it!
Squidward: That paper? I checked it last time it was blank.
*Checks paper*
Leave this area now...
Cop 1: Why would it say something like that?
Squidward: It doesn't make sense the girl just dies and a paper appears in her hand.
Cop 3: Hm I.....*Cough cough*
Cop 2: What the? Bob! Are you ok?
Cop 3: *Gaspes for air, Falls over*

Squidward: Just like that, Bob fell,Fell,to his death, It made no sense but a paper was in Bob's hand,

Squidward: We better Leave We could Be next.

*Everyone leaves*

Squidward: I left the area leaving the paper behind A mistake, A big Mistake, Mistake.

*Girl wakes up*

Girl: Those fools don't know that I'm killing them. * Some Paint-Like goo thing jumps out of the body and Leaves*

*Girl Falls Down again*

*At office*

Sandy: Your saying that pepole just died and a paper somehow got into their hand?
Squidward: Thats what I'm saying
Spongebob: That doesn't make a lick of a sense.
Sandy: Spongebob is right why not take to the park?
Squidward: .... I have a bad felling but Ok.

Squidward: I thought going back could of been the worse thing we did But... Well, I'll just keep telling the story...

End of Chapter 2

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« Reply #7 on: March 12, 2005, 10:30:43 am »
...Ok. Ignore my question.

Good story. 8.99/10

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« Reply #8 on: March 12, 2005, 12:50:46 pm »
Very Creative.

I liked it.

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« Reply #9 on: March 14, 2005, 07:01:06 pm »
It's good so far, keep writing.

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« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2005, 02:36:00 pm »
O_o Forgot about this.


Chapter 3....

Time: 3:21 PM
Day: Same Day

Squidward: We left the office and went down the hallway, we came closer to the stairs...But something wasn't right. We took a few steps the stairs collasped.

Squidward, Spongebob Sandy: *Srcreams*

Squidward: We fell for about 6 feet wehn we got down the impact on the ground almost killed us.

Spongebob: Where are we?

Squidward: I don't know but I knew something was wrong here.



Squidward: A big light flashed on us,a light so bright I had to close my eyes, the others did the same, Suddenly we were hit. I tried opening my eyes..It was dark....Dark..was I dead?

Squidward: I saw nothing but darkness for 7 minutes untill my eyes finnaly opened, I looked around spongebob and sandy were gone I was alone, I tried moving I was stuck, I looked down and saw a was tied to silver metal chains. There was a  Red door on the north side of the room, On the south and east there was nothing, But on the west...There was a red button, looked like anything could activate it. I thought for a moment, Then I spit torwards the button, I hit the buttton and I was free, But a Flying turret came snooping around, I bet it was checking if the master let me go. I ran torwards the west door, The machine was on the right. I steped back a bit and the wall turned. I was on the other side of the wall. I searched the room, and saw.....

End of chapter