Topic: My New Improved Spongebo Fic

[weird_4]

I know. So I can fix my fan fic for spelling errors.

[GIR]

Sorry about the double posting.

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you just double posted again.

[Sponge-Bob]

weird_4 banned from Spongezone.....

[SS4Gohan]

Haha that fool said "Sorry about the double posting" and then he triple posted! lmao

Anyways, he's not banned... what are you talking about? People don't get banned for that, just warned.

Pretty good fic, not too funny, but SpongeBob-ish. But you're stealing some lines from other episodes, which isn't good. Be original.

[IceFox]

Sean wants you to use the edit button for the reasons you said, and to just add the new chapters to those posts, i think.

[Rabble]

Haha that fool said "Sorry about the double posting" and then he triple posted! lmao

Anyways, he's not banned... what are you talking about? People don't get banned for that, just warned.

Pretty good fic, not too funny, but SpongeBob-ish. But you're stealing some lines from other episodes, which isn't good. Be original.

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Some Do. Think about this Double posting Saying Sorry Quad Posting 3 times Then Posting 17 Times in a row then saying i will never do it again and Do it 12 More times in the same topic.

[weird_4]

What am I supposed to do? Do a new chapter once every week?

[weird_4]

Chapter 8: All's Well That Ends Well

Spongebob: That was a close one Patrick.
Patrick: Aren't we going to go on the bounce house of mystery?
Spongebob: I don't think it's the bounce house of Mystery anymore.
Patrick: Then why does the sign say that?
Spongebob: Patrick, there's no sign.
Patrick:Then how come on the top it says bounce house?
Spongebob:(sighes) Come on Pat. Let's go on the bounce house.
(3 seconds later)
Spongebob:WOW PAT! I feel as if we were in Mermaid Man and Barnicle Boy.
Patrick: LET'S GET READY TO RUMBLE!
Spongebob: LOOK! IT'S OUR ARCH NEMMISIS, MAN RAY!
Patrick:YOU'RE MAN RAY? DIE MAN RAY!
Spongebob: No Patrick!
(BAMMMMMMM!)
Spongebob: WHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
Patrick: Hey Spongebob! I found that spider you don't like.
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET IT AWAY FROM ME!
Patrick:Oh come on Spongebob. It's just a spider.
Spongebob:EWWWWWWWWWWWWW PATRICK!
Patrick:Spongebob. Just touch it!
Spongebob:NEVER!
Patrick:We could be here all day if you want to!
Spongebob:NO MATTER HOW LONG IT TAKES! I'M NOT GOING TO TOUCH THE SPIDER!
Fish: Hey guys, the park is closing on its final day.
Patrick:Did you meet this awsome spider. I named it Harry.
Fish:Well aren't you cute.
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Patrick:Well you see, my friend here doesn't like spiders and I told him that if he touches it, that we'll leave the park.
Fish:Good idea. You guys can stay here as long as you want!
Spongebob:PLEASE PATRICK!
Patrick:Look Spongebob, I'm even touching him! He won't bite! Besides, you're a Sponge.
Spongebob:Fine. I'll touch it!
(poink!)
Spongebob:There I touched it! Now can we go?
Patrick:Now you have to lick it.
Spongebob:BUT PATRICK!
Patrick:I was joking.
Spongebob:Phew!
Patrick:You have to eat it.
Spongebob:Fine.
(GULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPP!!!)
Spongebob:Ahh... Much better.
Stay tuned for Chapter 9.

[weird_4]

Chapter 10: The Troublemaker

Spongebob:Thank goodness that was over.
Patrick:I'll say. You ate the spider.
Spongebob:But it was gross!
Patrick:I think we should stay here all night.
Spongebob:Are you crazy Patrick?
Patrick:What did you call me?
Spongebob:Never mind Patrick.
Patrick:The guy said that we can stay here as long as we want to.
Spongebob:Maybe some other time.
Patrick:You don't want to because you're scared.
Spongebob:But what I said was that-
Patrick:Scaredy pants!
Spongebob:WHAT DID YOU CALL ME?
Patrick:HEY LOOK EVERYONE! IT'S SPONGEBOB SCAREDY PANTS!
(anymous laughter)
Fish guy:Dude. What's with the shouting?
Patrick:My friend here says that he can't handle to stay in a theme park all night.
Fish guy:I see what you mean. You guys stay here as long as you want to.
Spongbob(thinking):This can't be happening.
Fish guy:Have fun you 2.
(Spongebob gulps)
Patrick:Cheer up Spongebob. It can't get any better than this.
Spongebob:(thinking):This can't get any worser.
Patrick:There's a spider farm Spongebob.
Spongebob:Patrick! There's no way that I'm going to touch a spider!
Patrick:Well, I didn't say that you had to Spongebob.
Spongebob:Phew!
Patrick:But if you insist.
(Patrick lets the spiders free)
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Spongebob runs around the theme park screaming wildly, trying to avoid the spiders)
Spongebob:DON'T EAT ME! MY KIND ISN'T HEALTHY TO EAT! I TASTE BAD!
Spiders:?!
Spongebob:Huh?
Spiders:ROAR!
(The Flying Dutchman appears)
Flying Dutchman:WHAT IS GOING ON HERE?
Spongebob:Sorry Flying Dutchman sir but I have a bigger problem. Those spiders are trying to eat me alive.
Flying Dutchman:Spiders eh?
(Spiders disipear)
Spongebob:How did you do that?
Flying Dutchman:I sent them somewhere else.
Spongebob:Where?
Flying Dutchman:Davey Jones locker.
Patrick:Look what I found. I found a turantula!
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Flying Dutchman:You're on your own kid.
Spongebob:WE'RE NOT KIDS!
Stay tuned for Chapter 11.

[weird_4]

Chapter 11: The Return of Spongebob Scaredypants

Spongebob:GET IT AWAY FROM ME!
Patrick:What?? You said that you were scared of spiders. So I found this.
Spongebob:Did you ever happen to know that a turantula is a kind of spider?
Patrick:Uhhhh......... Can I have a hint?
Spongebob:Patrick! This isn't funny!
Patrick:If it was funny, I would be laughing right now.
Officer #1:HALT! You have the right to remain silent!
Spongebob:Patrick? What are you doing?
Patrick:.................
Officer# 1:I said quiet you!
Officer# 2:YEAH! SOMEONE HERE LET THE SPIDERS FREE!!
Spongebob:IT WAS PATRICK!
Officer# 1: I see. Mr Patrick Star, you are under arrest!
Patrick:.............................
Officer# 2: He's not saying anything.
(Officers use a stun gun on Patrick)
Officer# 1: What do you have to say now?
Patrick:................................
Spongebob:PATRICK! SAY SOMTHING!
Patrick:Ouch!
Spongebob:Please officers. Don't arrest my friend. He didn't mean to. All he wanted me to do was to touch a spider and eat it! Now, he wants me to touch the turantula. And I'm scared of spiders. So please don't arrest him.
Officer#1: I don't know.
Patrick:................................................................................
Officer#2: You can speak now son.
Patrick: WHO WANTS TO EAT THE TURANTULA I FOUND?
(Officers jump into their boat and drives quickly)
Patrick: Now here's someone to sing you a song Spongebob.
(Rock intro begins)
Some guy: (Sings Spongebob Scaredypants song)
Patrick: WHOOOOOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Stay tuned for Chapter 12.

[weird_4]

Why is noone replying?

[Rabble]

You still keep double posting Just edit it on the first post.

[weird_4]

I will.

[weird_4]

Chapter 12: The Great Escape

Spongebob:What's wrong with you Patrick? Are you trying to get me aressted?
Patrick:.........................................
Spongebob:The officers are gone now Pat.
Patrick:...................
(Spongebob uses a stun gun on Patrick)
Patrick:WHAT WAS THAT FOR?
Spongebob:The officers are gone Patrick.
Patrick:So???
Spongebob:So. We can leave. And besides, I have to go home and feed Gary before he eats the couch again.
Patrick:We're not leaving Spongebob and that's final!
Spongebob:But Patrick! I'm tired and I need my rest!
Patrick:Go sleep at Matress Land.
Spongebob:Are you sure we're supposed to be doing this?
Patrick:How many times do I have to tell you Spongebob? They said that we can stay here as long as we wanted to and we have to do that.
Spongebob:Who made you king of the park? You're on your own.
Patrick:WELL THAT'S FINE! I CAN STAY HERE AS LONG AS I WANT TO!
Spongebob:Fine!
(Spongebob jumps over the fence)
Patrick:Wow. This was a short episode.
Narrarator:Not yet you barnicle. We only have 15 minuets left.
Patrick:Darn! My watch stopped.
(Meanwhile, Spongebob was taking a bus ride home, until Spongebob saw a sign that read "You Are Leaving Bikini Bottom")
Stay tuned for Chapter 13.