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« on: May 23, 2005, 04:40:05 am »
Spongebob is an average sponge,and no 1 understands.Mom n Dad n Vicky always givin him commands! Vicky: Bed Sponge!!! The doom n gloom up in his room is broken instantly. By his magic little fish, They grant his every wish, 'Cause in reality ... They are his OddParents,
Fairly OddParents!
Wanda: Wands and wings!
Cosmo: Floaty crowny things!
(Chomp!)
OddParents, Fairly OddParents!
Really mod, pea pod,
Buff bod, hot rod!                                                                                                                 Spongebob:Pineapple(House turns into Pineapple),Scribbled clone(Doodlebob appears),Grandma's Cookies,ShellPhone,Hyper Snail(Giant Snail gives Spongebob an atomic wedgie)THAT CRIES AND WAILS!!!!(Hyper Snail sobs)OddParents, FairlyOddParents!
It flips your lid, When you are the sponge With Fairly OddParents!
Vicky: Yeah right! POP! (Cosmo and Wanda transform Vicky's head into ShellPhone)                                                                                                      PHEW! I'm exosted! let's take a break. I'm sticking to the original,Sponge n Pat always start the problem,This is the Nicktoon's Ultimate comic. I  call it  comic because im gonna make it a comic. Jimmy Neutron is also in this fan fiction story, in........weeeelllll........lessseee...CHAPTA 4!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2005, 01:42:00 pm »
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Spongebob is an average sponge,and no 1 understands.Mom n Dad n Vicky always givin him commands! Vicky: Bed Sponge!!! The doom n gloom up in his room is broken instantly. By his magic little fish, They grant his every wish, 'Cause in reality ... They are his OddParents,
Fairly OddParents!
Wanda: Wands and wings!
Cosmo: Floaty crowny things!
(Chomp!)
OddParents, Fairly OddParents!
Really mod, pea pod,
Buff bod, hot rod!                                                                                                                 Spongebob:Pineapple(House turns into Pineapple),Scribbled clone(Doodlebob appears),Grandma's Cookies,ShellPhone,Hyper Snail(Giant Snail gives Spongebob an atomic wedgie)THAT CRIES AND WAILS!!!!(Hyper Snail sobs)OddParents, FairlyOddParents!
It flips your lid, When you are the sponge With Fairly OddParents!
Vicky: Yeah right! POP! (Cosmo and Wanda transform Vicky's head into ShellPhone)                                                                                                      PHEW! I'm exosted! let's take a break. I'm sticking to the original,Sponge n Pat always start the problem,This is the Nicktoon's Ultimate comic. I  call it  comic because im gonna make it a comic. Jimmy Neutron is also in this fan fiction story, in........weeeelllll........lessseee...CHAPTA 4!!!!!!!!
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Sounds like a bad idea. Oh, and Dragon of Grief rocks.
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« Reply #2 on: May 23, 2005, 04:06:48 pm »
Mabye you got  it wrong? Your fan-Fic Sucks and Grief owns.
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« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2005, 06:17:39 pm »
Okay, first of all: IMPOSSIBLE TO READ(Like my fics). I know from expreince, it needs to be improved.

Also, Ty rocks! Maybe if he said he dislike you fic, so what? Don't say that on the board, I believe, it is called: Flaming.


Also, i don't like the plot.

So, yeah, basically 2/10, but keep working on it! It may improve!
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« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2005, 05:29:56 pm »
I agree with Sponge-Tron X. I bet that your comic will be a huge hit! You'll improve sooner or later. I beleive in you man.
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« Reply #5 on: May 25, 2005, 11:29:06 pm »
Thanks, Sponge became Timmy and Timmy became Sponge.
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weird_4

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« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2005, 05:35:48 pm »
It reminds me of the Jimmy Timmy Power Hour. Cool idea.
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« Reply #7 on: May 26, 2005, 05:37:09 pm »
Good idea, reminds me of an IZ/Peanuts crossover I did a while ago. just do it good and use proper english so we can read what you write.
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« Reply #8 on: May 28, 2005, 07:18:30 am »
Woah... I haven't seen this before...shows how much I visit this forum...

Anyway, please refrain from flaming people like that.  I don't know what he did to you, but it's definitely no excuse to flame him.
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« Reply #9 on: May 28, 2005, 12:43:47 pm »
Sounds a good SB crossover.
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« Reply #10 on: May 29, 2005, 11:50:24 am »
I totaly agree. Your fan fic should be a spongebob episode.
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« Reply #11 on: May 31, 2005, 07:32:49 am »
Sorry I didn't like it, way too sketchy, and Spongebob WILL NEVER have association with Fairly Oddparents (at least after Abra-Catastrophe), Spongebob is in a completly different league.

I didn't catch the Dragon of Greif flaming, where was it?
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« Reply #12 on: June 01, 2005, 02:25:59 am »
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« Reply #13 on: June 01, 2005, 02:37:53 am »
Title Screen says: The Big Problem! ( 1st Episode of Fairly Odd Parents )                                                                                                          Spongebob:What    the.....?                                                                                                             Spongebob makes title into The Very Big Problem!                                                                                                          Spongebob: Where are we?                                                                                                                   POOF!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Spongebob's eyes strech until he can see the country                                                                                                            Sponge: USA? I wish I was back at Sea!
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« Reply #14 on: June 01, 2005, 08:19:03 am »
You gave it what little effort you could, and that in itself is a 3/10. But I took away three points for flaming Tyler. The dude rules.

And don't double post.
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« Reply #15 on: June 01, 2005, 10:36:53 pm »
What happened to the comic?
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« Reply #16 on: June 03, 2005, 01:40:49 pm »
Frogfish Expert, do me a favor and don't double post. Spam haters all around the world will thank you.
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« Reply #17 on: June 08, 2005, 07:40:47 am »
Yeah. Please don't. Thanks.
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