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BiggerSquarierSpongier

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« on: December 12, 2005, 08:19:48 am »
This is a SpongeBob Jack the Bum comic I'm working on. Here's part 1, pages 1-3.
Please tell me what you think, even if you think it's horrible. I would like to know, that way maybe I can improve my comics.


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« Reply #1 on: December 13, 2005, 01:38:05 pm »
Pretty good lead in.
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« Reply #2 on: December 13, 2005, 02:20:07 pm »
Ohh. I liked it!
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« Reply #3 on: December 13, 2005, 05:04:00 pm »
XD!! I really really liked the "Good morning, Hairy!" part. And the drawings are amazing. Very good start.
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« Reply #4 on: December 15, 2005, 10:53:37 am »
Thanks for responding. Here's Part 2. Sorry about the low quality of the images; the reason they look so bad is because I use both sides of the paper and the light from the scanner makes the paper partially see-through. Anyways, here it is:




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« Reply #5 on: December 15, 2005, 03:45:23 pm »
cool story and pictures
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« Reply #6 on: January 10, 2006, 06:43:39 am »
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This is a SpongeBob Jack the Bum comic I'm working on. Here's part 1, pages 1-3.
Please tell me what you think, even if you think it's horrible. I would like to know, that way maybe I can improve my comics.



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That's good so far. keep goin... :biggrin:
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« Reply #7 on: January 10, 2006, 07:56:02 am »
Please don't double/triple post or upload useless attachments :)
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« Reply #8 on: January 10, 2006, 12:52:56 pm »
that looks almost like them 10/10
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lil`Sara

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« Reply #9 on: January 11, 2006, 04:39:32 pm »
OMG! Pirate's are teh sex! I <3 them!

and your cartoon made me giggle.
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BiggerSquarierSpongier

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« Reply #10 on: January 12, 2006, 07:25:25 pm »
Eh... sorry I haven't added anymore for  a long time. I'm stuck at a certain point in the comic, and it'll probably will be a while before I finish it. But I'm glad you liked it so far and if I ever finish it I'll try to post the rest here.
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« Reply #11 on: January 18, 2006, 08:19:25 pm »
It is A-W-E-A-M-E. Your a very talented drawer, and funny jokes, too. I noticed something wrong with thefirst panel, jacks tounge seems to be facing the wrong direction.
« Last Edit: January 18, 2006, 08:21:00 pm by The_Man »
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« Reply #12 on: February 01, 2006, 02:27:40 pm »
I AM PEG PINKY WHAHAHAHAH!
I at one point was considered to be.
very funy 9/10
« Last Edit: February 01, 2006, 02:28:09 pm by GIR »
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« Reply #13 on: February 04, 2006, 08:21:26 am »
it is hilarious you are very talented with comix.
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