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« on: December 06, 2003, 12:45:12 pm »
part one plankton's revenge

*at chumbucket*
plankton:Todayi will steal the krabby patty forumal with my lastest invetion.
the clone a matic 3000. Karen: whats it do?
Plankton:it makes me turn into a normal fish making me buy a krabby patty to go and ill have the secert formula.
steps in clone o matic.
next chpter coming soon


its not soppesed to be funnny yet its my first one anyway ill make it longer later

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« Reply #1 on: December 06, 2003, 02:00:01 pm »
i really dont get it... I cant under stand what they are saying.
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« Reply #2 on: December 06, 2003, 03:08:26 pm »
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part one plankton's revenge

*at chumbucket*
plankton:Todayi will steal the krabby patty forumal with my lastest invetion.
the clone a matic 3000. Karen: whats it do?
Plankton:it makes me turn into a normal fish making me buy a krabby patty to go and ill have the secert formula.
steps in clone o matic.
next chpter coming soon


its not soppesed to be funnny yet its my first one anyway ill make it longer later
1) The spelling was really bad
2) No offense, that was really short. If you're going to post a fanfic, maybe proofread it and spend more time then 2 minutes on your fanfic.
« Last Edit: December 06, 2003, 03:24:02 pm by Patrick »

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« Reply #3 on: December 06, 2003, 03:15:02 pm »
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part one plankton's revenge

*at chumbucket*
plankton:Todayi will steal the krabby patty forumal with my lastest invetion.
the clone a matic 3000. Karen: whats it do?
Plankton:it makes me turn into a normal fish making me buy a krabby patty to go and ill have the secert formula.
steps in clone o matic.
next chpter coming soon


its not soppesed to be funnny yet its my first one anyway ill make it longer later
1) The spelling was resally bad
2) No offense, that was really short. If you're going to post a fanfic, maybe proofread it and spend more time then 2 minutes on your fanfic.
Yeah, I agree with Patrick, but it's a good start. It could lead into something really great!  :happy:  

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« Reply #4 on: December 07, 2003, 01:24:27 pm »
you just said it all. off topic 300th post! yippee!
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« Reply #5 on: December 07, 2003, 04:09:27 pm »
Next time post more of the fic instead of a tiny part of it.