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« on: September 12, 2004, 02:50:39 pm »
This is a fan fic I made I hope you ike it. Its not as funny as the other chapters because its doesnt have IZ (whos a guest) and patrick so here:

             Sponge wars episode 1: THE PHANTOM KRAB
Chapter 1: Two strange visitors

"ORDER UP!" The voice rings as a ager little sponge hops to a table.

A fish looks up at him. "Er...thanks.... do I get a prize for doing the candy fund-raiser?"

Mr. Krabs bursts out of his office. His eyes are bloodshot as he walks to the fish.

"Prizes cost money! And moneys something we do not waste here."

Two hooded fish walk in. The first fissh looks at Mr. Krabs. "Yo" He says.

Mr. krabs looks at them.

"Er may I help you?"

The things look at him. "We come to destroy."

"What"

"This thing"

Mr. krabs looks at spongebob.

"Mabey we should kill them first egor?"

"Yes we should" One thing says.

They through gas pellets and flee.

"We will be back with larger weapons." one says while running.

Spongebob holds his breath.

"RUN FOR IT!" A custamor says but then falls.
Slowly things go black.

Spongebob wakes up on the krusty krab floor. He ran home. Afraid. But he would go back..

And save the krusty Krab!
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« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2004, 12:41:52 pm »
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This is a fan fic I made I hope you ike it. Its not as funny as the other chapters because its doesnt have IZ (whos a guest) and patrick so here:

             Sponge wars episode 1: THE PHANTOM KRAB
Chapter 1: Two strange visitors

"ORDER UP!" The voice rings as a ager little sponge hops to a table.

A fish looks up at him. "Er...thanks.... do I get a prize for doing the candy fund-raiser?"

Mr. Krabs bursts out of his office. His eyes are bloodshot as he walks to the fish.

"Prizes cost money! And moneys something we do not waste here."

Two hooded fish walk in. The first fissh looks at Mr. Krabs. "Yo" He says.

Mr. krabs looks at them.

"Er may I help you?"

The things look at him. "We come to destroy."

"What"

"This thing"

Mr. krabs looks at spongebob.

"Mabey we should kill them first egor?"

"Yes we should" One thing says.

They through gas pellets and flee.

"We will be back with larger weapons." one says while running.

Spongebob holds his breath.

"RUN FOR IT!" A custamor says but then falls.
Slowly things go black.

Spongebob wakes up on the krusty krab floor. He ran home. Afraid. But he would go back..

And save the krusty Krab!
I love it! :lol:  :mf_bounce8:  
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« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2004, 04:15:19 pm »
THAT"S COOL Make Ch. 2. Are you gonna make Episode 2. Star Wars Episode III is coming, and it is supposed to be like the final Star Wars film or something. Anyways, very nicely done. Can't wait for CH. 2!!!!!!
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« Reply #3 on: September 13, 2004, 09:18:18 pm »
I like it...looking forward to more
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« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2004, 10:00:38 pm »
Good, suspenseful. so far - 9/10
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« Reply #5 on: September 14, 2004, 08:39:57 am »
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Good, suspenseful. so far - 9/10
Ditto! When are you going to make chp.2?
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« Reply #6 on: September 14, 2004, 10:33:00 am »
a little confusing try simpling it in ch 2
 but otherwise it was 10/10 grade A material
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« Reply #7 on: September 14, 2004, 11:28:46 am »
Very cool. Looking forward to chap 2!
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« Reply #8 on: September 14, 2004, 01:37:10 pm »
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Very cool. Looking forward to chap 2!
Me too!!
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« Reply #9 on: September 16, 2004, 10:33:10 pm »
when's chapter 2 coming? I'm trying to be patient.
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« Reply #10 on: September 26, 2004, 02:49:38 pm »
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When's chapter 2 coming? I'm trying to be patient.
Aren't we all!
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« Reply #11 on: September 26, 2004, 03:43:42 pm »
It was pretty good....7/10!
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« Reply #12 on: September 26, 2004, 05:02:37 pm »
ya i cant wait till it comes out all i need is 43.00 and i can get and its going to be awsome
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« Reply #13 on: September 26, 2004, 05:15:15 pm »
..this is a fan fic he made???
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« Reply #14 on: September 29, 2004, 05:31:53 pm »
Yes there will be 6 episodes chap. two will be here in 5 minutes after theres another reply.
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