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Spongebob Goes To: Ocean World
« on: September 13, 2004, 05:27:40 pm »
OK, before i make this fan-fic, there are 2 things.
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Pretend that this episode takes place before the Valentines Day episode because, this fan-fic will have SB's first Roller Coaster ride somewher ie in it.
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Before I amke this, i would like suggestions, because i am rarely making good fan0-fics latey, for two reasons:
Thw ritting
Does not have what you want
So, i will try to make it better, and I would like suggestions.
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This Fan-fic is really called "Spongebob Goes To Ocean World"
If you like this one, I will make more fan-fics were SB goes to all these different places. So, after i get some suggestions, i will make it. It will be a singal part story, most likely. So, please reply with suggesttions.
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« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2004, 06:17:45 pm »
sounds pretty cool  
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« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2004, 06:36:29 pm »
Thanks, but any suggestions? I will kot likely make this tommorow, unless I get a ton of suggestions in the nexrt few hours, or at lesest some.
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« Reply #3 on: September 13, 2004, 07:09:56 pm »
Yeah! Make Spongebob meet the the Queen of Seangland
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« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2004, 09:17:54 pm »
Seangland? I dont think I know what you're talking about
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« Reply #5 on: September 14, 2004, 10:54:08 am »
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Seangland? I dont think I know what you're talking about
Whoops! I meant England.
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« Reply #6 on: September 14, 2004, 04:23:12 pm »
OK, well, if someone will give me ONE more suggestion, I will make it.
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« Reply #7 on: September 14, 2004, 04:43:05 pm »
Is Spongebob Sorta In the Ocean?
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« Reply #8 on: September 14, 2004, 04:49:41 pm »
Well, yeah, sorta. Please, just ONE more suggestion,. Somebody said have SB meet the Queen Of England, but intead, im gonna maybe have her The Queen Of Sealand, a coun try in the ocean.
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« Reply #9 on: September 15, 2004, 02:56:21 pm »
Have him venture on a safari to the Great Barrier Reef.
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« Reply #10 on: September 16, 2004, 03:15:00 pm »
OK, just one more reply, so I don'ty double post, and you will see the story!!!
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« Reply #11 on: September 16, 2004, 10:28:27 pm »
I WANT TO SEE THE STORY.........now you can make it.
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« Reply #12 on: September 17, 2004, 06:10:41 pm »
Yep! Now...i can make it! Here it is:
(STORY NOW BEGINS...)




ONE DAY, SPONGEBOB WAS SITTING ON THE GRILL ON A SLOW DAY AT THE KRUSTY KRAB. ALL WAS PEACEFUL. THEN...ALL OF A SUDDEN....PLANKTON RAN IN CARRIENG LETHAL WEAPONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SPONGEBOB IMEDITLY TOOK ACTION. HE RAN AROUND LIKE AN IDIOT, UNTIL HE STEPPED ON PLANKTON! MR. KRABS THEN AWARDED SPONGEBOB A BONUS FOR THE DAY, AND THE MAYOR OF BIKKINI BOTTOM, AWARDED SPONGEBOB WITH 4 ALL EXPENSES FREE TRIP TICKETS TO BIKKINI BOTTOM'S NEWEST THEMEPARK: OCEAN WORLD!



Spongebob: Gee. Pat, i'm glad you could come. Same with you Sandy, and Squidward!

Squidward: Yeah, i can't wait to get my new hair at the Free Hair Stand!

Partrick: I can't wait.

Spongebob: Hey look theres the bus, lets get on!!!

Spongebob arrives at the themepark to find that he lost the tickets. The mayor agrees to give them new ones, but only if they do a few errands for him. They agree

Spongebob: Oh no....the place were no man has ever set foot on before....
 THE SHOE PLACE!!!!!!!!!!

Pat: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Meanwhile, Sandy is at SeaMart, picking up some sofas and chairs for the mayor....They get there tickets! They go back to the park, and get in. Then...the unthinkable happened......
TO BE CONTENUED..........
__Sorry, i know i said 1 part only, but I want to be able to post a little more, so it won't go passed 2 parts. The suggetsions will be in part tow.
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« Reply #13 on: September 22, 2004, 09:29:35 pm »
8/10m good

when's part 2 coming?
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« Reply #14 on: October 12, 2004, 05:02:58 pm »
Sorry it took such a long time, but here it is:



The Tattle Tale Strangler walked out of a bus ready to strangle to Spongebob. Spongebob, and so did all his freinds, ran inside, and hid at Pickey's house at SEATOON TOWN. They hid in his dishwasher., Then...all of a sudden..........[/size]











Spongebob: Oh NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Tattle Tale Strangler!!!
Squidward: But wait, if you didn't know about the Strangler until you saw him in "Spongebob Meets The Strangler" a few years from now, how do you know who it is?
Spongebob: Gee Squid, maybe because [B]IT'S A CARTOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/B]
Patrick: It's not a cartoon(Pulls out a book from the middle of nowere, that's titled: Nickelodeon's Spongebb Squarepants: Fish Happenings)
Spongebob: Ugh.
Squidward:Uhhhhhhh, Spongebob.
SB: Yeah.
Squid: Isn't that the strangler right in front of us?
Spongebob(SB): Uhhh. Yes.
Squidward: And.....he's out to get you, right?
SB:(worried) Yeeess.
The Strangler opens the dishwaher door.
SB: Squidwaaard.
Squidward: Spooonnngebob.
Sandy: Squidwarddddd
Patrick: ME!!!!
All exept Pat: Will you be quite!!!!
Strangler: And now, I shall Strangle you uhh, uhh, what's your name again?
Spongebob: (Joyfully) SPONGEBBOB!!!!!!!!(Now, talking scardly and worried) Spongebob, Mr Strangler guy.
Strangler: Right Right, Spongebob. And Now, I shall strangle you Spongebob, and you know what, I'll do the same to your freinds.......
TO BE CONTENUED.......[/size]

How do you like it so far? And, sorry again for waiting so long.
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