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« on: October 06, 2004, 07:48:13 pm »
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Chapter 1: The big Mistake Part 1 (Intro) .


Spongebob: I made the Bigest mistake ever, I  don't think i can reverse it.
Spongebob: Its was peaceful 16 years ago But the fait of The earth Is over.
Spongebob: I will tell you this sad tale what Happend.

The year is X199 August 14th

Spongebob(Narrotor):  One Night Spongebob was sleepy in his bed Until Something came down.

CRASH!

Spongebob: What was that! *exits house*

Spongebob: Could it be? Is that the Magic Pencil?

Patrick: Hey spongebob was that you I heard a .. ITS THE MAGIC PENCIL!

Spongebob: Yea but what could it be doing down here again?

Patrick: I don't Know but Lets Draw Some Pictures!

Spongebob(Narrotor):  And that was horrible Mistake Number 1.

End of chapter.






 

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« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2004, 08:50:03 pm »
7/10. MAKE MORE!!!! Please...

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« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2004, 09:16:09 pm »
8/10. It ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!! Make more.

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« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2004, 10:21:48 am »
8/10 its awsome please make more

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« Reply #4 on: October 07, 2004, 12:25:51 pm »
I find that way to short to be a chapter. Check your spelling too.

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« Reply #5 on: October 07, 2004, 05:30:05 pm »
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I find that way to short to be a chapter.
Eh most my Intros Are short cause there Intros Not really a chapter More like a pre-Chapter most cahpters will be short Cuase this story is  very long


Chapter 2: The Big mistake part 2


Spongebob(narrotor): From where I left off it was horrible mistake number One lets find out why.

Spongebob: Uhh waht do you want to draw?

Patrick: Well lets make it somthing special like something magic.

Spongebob: like what ice cream?

Patirck: Oh yea.

Spongebob:  YEA!

Spongebob(narrotor): Then came The little One. Plankton.

Plankton: Whats with the big pencil.

Spongebob: No reason..

patrick: Its magic! you can do anything with it!

Plankton: Anything? *steals* *draws Rocket and balstes away*

Patrick: I told you to make some ice cream.

Plankton: (evil laugh) With this Doo hickey I can Steal the Krabby patty Fourmla!

Plankton: But why should I draw This? I could draw i time mahcine to go back in time and Take over the world!

Spongebob: Never!

Plankton: you can't stop me you fool.  I already made the time machine!

Patrick: Oh yea! throws rock.

Machine: Timee machine activated History Of the world is now ready.

Plankton: Oh real nice!

Spongebob: *jumps after Plankton they both get sucked into the machine*

Machine: Time travel activadeted.

Spongebob(narrotor):  That was horrible mistake Number 2


The year is now 160X

Spongebob: Where am I?

Stranger In robe: I am the one TO tell you that.
« Last Edit: October 07, 2004, 05:30:35 pm by Evilspongee »

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« Reply #6 on: October 07, 2004, 05:32:36 pm »
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I find that way to short to be a chapter.
Eh most my Intros Are short cause there Intros Not really a chapter More like a pre-Chapter most cahpters will be short Cuase this story is  very long


Chapter 2: The Big mistake part 2


Spongebob(narrotor): From where I left off it was horrible mistake number One lets find out why.

Spongebob: Uhh waht do you want to draw?

Patrick: Well lets make it somthing special like something magic.

Spongebob: like what ice cream?

Patirck: Oh yea.

Spongebob:  YEA!

Spongebob(narrotor): Then came The little One. Plankton.

Plankton: Whats with the big pencil.

Spongebob: No reason..

patrick: Its magic! you can do anything with it!

Plankton: Anything? *steals* *draws Rocket and balstes away*

Patrick: I told you to make some ice cream.

Plankton: (evil laugh) With this Doo hickey I can Steal the Krabby patty Fourmla!

Plankton: But why should I draw This? I could draw i time mahcine to go back in time and Take over the world!

Spongebob: Never!

Plankton: you can't stop me you fool.  I already made the time machine!

Patrick: Oh yea! throws rock.

Machine: Timee machine activated History Of the world is now ready.

Plankton: Oh real nice!

Spongebob: *jumps after Plankton they both get sucked into the machine*

Machine: Time travel activadeted.

Spongebob(narrotor):  That was horrible mistake Number 2


The year is now 160X

Spongebob: Where am I?

Stranger In robe: I am the one TO tell you that.
Different. 10/10

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« Reply #7 on: October 09, 2004, 08:54:44 am »
This penciel thing sounds like Frankendoodle???

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« Reply #8 on: October 12, 2004, 03:55:41 pm »
Chapter 3: So eh Whats going On

Stranger in robe: You only Get 3 Questions........ So choose Wisely.....

Spongebob: Where Am I?

Stranger In robe: It is 160X AD at Bikkini Bottom

Spongebob: Where Is plankton?

Stranger in robe: Trying to take over the world at EAST of here

Spongebob:  Whats his plan!

Stranger In robe: To refix the Time machine To go to a place

Spongebob: What place!

Stranger in rbe: I wont tell you You used your 3 questions Bye.

*dissapers*

Spongebob: WAIT..... East East.. I must GO to the East

End Of Chapter 3
 

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« Reply #9 on: October 12, 2004, 03:57:17 pm »
Much mystery.

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« Reply #10 on: October 14, 2004, 03:25:17 pm »
Chapter 4: Slice And Dice

Spongebob: Bikkini Bottom.. It sure was Sppoky In the past. but I'm Safe Right?

Spongebob (Narrotor):  This Is Not a horrible mistake. Its a Good Mistake Number 1.

Thing With Dagger:  Würfelmensch..! *attacks*

Spongebob: *Backflips Out of way*  * Tie sliced in half*

Person: here! Take this it will destory the Demon  *throws staff*

Demon: *Tries To Slash spongebob*

Spongebob:  Hits dagger with staff*  Jumps And Spins And Attacks* Drills Hole in demon Demon is Tame*

person: Good work.

Spongebob: Who are you And why was I fighting A demon?

Person: So you not From this Time?

Spongebob: No I am Not tell me wahts going on.

Person: Plankton.  He rules His world In your time You are From I Persume he came Here. You must Have been In the Time Portal Too But he Got here much faster. A few seconds Can Even Be a few years. And He and Him And his Demons Enslave us all. you Must Help us.

Spongebob: I see And who are you.

Xero: My name Is Xero.

End Of chapter.

(Oh and its  Xero Not a typo)
« Last Edit: October 14, 2004, 03:27:12 pm by Evilspongee »

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« Reply #11 on: October 14, 2004, 09:13:20 pm »
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Chapter 4: Slice And Dice

Spongebob: Bikkini Bottom.. It sure was Sppoky In the past. but I'm Safe Right?

Spongebob (Narrotor):  This Is Not a horrible mistake. Its a Good Mistake Number 1.

Thing With Dagger:  Würfelmensch..! *attacks*

Spongebob: *Backflips Out of way*  * Tie sliced in half*

Person: here! Take this it will destory the Demon  *throws staff*

Demon: *Tries To Slash spongebob*

Spongebob:  Hits dagger with staff*  Jumps And Spins And Attacks* Drills Hole in demon Demon is Tame*

person: Good work.

Spongebob: Who are you And why was I fighting A demon?

Person: So you not From this Time?

Spongebob: No I am Not tell me wahts going on.

Person: Plankton.  He rules His world In your time You are From I Persume he came Here. You must Have been In the Time Portal Too But he Got here much faster. A few seconds Can Even Be a few years. And He and Him And his Demons Enslave us all. you Must Help us.

Spongebob: I see And who are you.

Xero: My name Is Xero.

End Of chapter.

(Oh and its  Xero Not a typo)
It intriges the mind.

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« Reply #12 on: October 17, 2004, 08:10:38 am »
pretty good

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« Reply #13 on: October 19, 2004, 05:49:30 pm »
Chapter 5: The Pain

Xero: So, Do you accept?

Spongebob: Yes yes i do

Xero: Okay hold still.

Spongebob: Eh?

Xero: Its A demon ganutlent It sucks out there souls And gives you power to level up your weapon.



Spongebob: Ooh shiny.

Xero: Lets head to the base


Plankton: Not so fast you will All die! The pain Snipe them!

The Pain: Yes master. i will snipe their faces off till the brains ooze out of their ear.



 Batlle!

*Bang*
spongebob jumps out of way
Xero Shoot fireballs out of his hand
Uses gun to asorb it shoot out 10 fire balls
Hits spongebob and Zero twice
Spongebob Throws staff.
Hits the Pain.
the Pain back flips 7 times then once more but this time really high
*bang
Shoots xero and misses
the bullet Bounces off the  wall hit xero in the back.
Xero: ahh crap!  My Spine!!!
The pain: Baby...
Spongebob Uses Tech Slice And Dice!
Slashes The Pain
Blood gushies out.
The pain: Haha Nice slice there rookie i'll be back for you and the baby here. *dissapears*

Spongebob: ....
Xero:.....
Spongebob and Xero: Freaky.

End of chapter
« Last Edit: October 19, 2004, 05:51:04 pm by Evilspongee »

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« Reply #14 on: October 21, 2004, 04:19:48 am »
10 /10 oh yeah this is awesome