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BiggerSquarierSpongier

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Jack The Bum
« on: November 27, 2004, 10:08:02 am »
In January I finished the first edition of my comic series; Jack the Bum. Since then I have made 60 editions, and people have read them at the school. So now I'm remaking the first edition on the computer, and seeing what you guys think. I'm only posting a page at a time, because it's hard to redraw them on a computer. So here's page 1 of Volume 1: Grudge
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« Reply #1 on: November 27, 2004, 10:11:55 am »
Not Bad. Not Bad At All.
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« Reply #2 on: November 27, 2004, 01:35:34 pm »
That was hilarious!!!  
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xdragonsb

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« Reply #3 on: November 27, 2004, 11:11:47 pm »
that was OK

You made it good

ITS PART FUNNY
« Last Edit: November 27, 2004, 11:12:31 pm by xdragonsb »
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« Reply #4 on: November 28, 2004, 01:12:47 pm »
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In January I finished the first edition of my comic series; Jack the Bum. Since then I have made 60 editions, and people have read them at the school. So now I'm remaking the first edition on the computer, and seeing what you guys think. I'm only posting a page at a time, because it's hard to redraw them on a computer. So here's page 1 of Volume 1: Grudge
That Was Funny Make More.  :biggrin:  
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« Reply #5 on: November 28, 2004, 02:12:00 pm »
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In January I finished the first edition of my comic series; Jack the Bum. Since then I have made 60 editions, and people have read them at the school. So now I'm remaking the first edition on the computer, and seeing what you guys think. I'm only posting a page at a time, because it's hard to redraw them on a computer. So here's page 1 of Volume 1: Grudge
It was Okay,  and a bit funny .
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BiggerSquarierSpongier

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« Reply #6 on: November 28, 2004, 05:23:48 pm »
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In January I finished the first edition of my comic series; Jack the Bum. Since then I have made 60 editions, and people have read them at the school. So now I'm remaking the first edition on the computer, and seeing what you guys think. I'm only posting a page at a time, because it's hard to redraw them on a computer. So here's page 1 of Volume 1: Grudge
That Was Funny Make More.  :biggrin:
Thanks. I'll hopefully post page 2 soon.
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« Reply #7 on: November 28, 2004, 05:35:00 pm »
*Ahem* Care to change the bum's name?

It was okay.. I've seen a lot better.
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BiggerSquarierSpongier

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« Reply #8 on: November 28, 2004, 05:37:50 pm »
I can't do that! His name's been Jack for almost a year! But it wasn't meant to offend people named Jack. Sorry if it did.


       But as the series goes on, it gradually gets better, at least in my opinion. You meet more characters, who make it funnier.


EDIT: Here's page 2
« Last Edit: November 29, 2004, 03:07:40 pm by BiggerSquarierSpongier »
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spongey675

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« Reply #9 on: November 29, 2004, 06:07:12 pm »
a weird way to end part 2 7/10
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BiggerSquarierSpongier

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« Reply #10 on: November 30, 2004, 12:57:59 pm »
Well, it's all one comic, and that was page 2. They don't seem as weird when they're all together.
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« Reply #11 on: November 30, 2004, 03:09:40 pm »
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I can't do that! His name's been Jack for almost a year! But it wasn't meant to offend people named Jack. Sorry if it did.


       But as the series goes on, it gradually gets better, at least in my opinion. You meet more characters, who make it funnier.


EDIT: Here's page 2
Make More Please!  :biggrin:  
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« Reply #12 on: November 30, 2004, 03:13:51 pm »
Make More So I can review it.

Why is there a hole IN everyones ear?
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BiggerSquarierSpongier

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« Reply #13 on: November 30, 2004, 03:40:16 pm »
That's the inside part of their ear. When I first made it I don't think I could draw the inside part too well, so I just colored it in black or something like that. I'll hopefully make more soon. There'll be 6 pages in all. That's usually how long they are.
« Last Edit: November 30, 2004, 03:43:18 pm by BiggerSquarierSpongier »
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« Reply #14 on: December 01, 2004, 02:45:19 pm »
i need amusment please make more :excl:

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