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Sponge-Bob

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Your Rich Mr. Krabby
« on: February 05, 2005, 06:41:43 am »
Chapter 1 : The Commercail :

Your Krabby Rich :

Narrartor : Ahh, Bikini Bottom hey the krusty krab is open now

Mr. Krabs : My total of Money is 600,321!

Spongebob : What happened to plankton

(At the police station)

Plankton : NO! NO! STOP! (gets thrown In jail)

(Back at KK)

Spongebob : oh yeah!

Mr. Krabs : and total at Krusty Krab 2 : 216,000 so total of both is 816,321!

Spongebob : WOW!

(Turns on TV)

Fish : you wanna be rich! Huh? Then enter the richest lottey in the sea

Mr. Krabs : oh boy I gotta find out the address to there! (turns off TV)


GIR

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« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2005, 09:20:32 am »
7/10
1) you should have made plankton get thrown in a asylum
2) plankton should have been going crazy
3) put more jokes in there

Sponge-Bob

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Your Rich Mr. Krabby
« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2005, 02:41:26 pm »
That admin at fanfiction.net banned my story! i'm going to kick his butt for that!

SpongeBobAndyZX14

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Your Rich Mr. Krabby
« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2005, 04:43:00 pm »
Is that possible to kick someones butt on the internet?

Sponge-Bob

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« Reply #4 on: February 05, 2005, 04:50:18 pm »
i mean if you guys are admins of fanfiction
can you ban that guy forever. So that he stops banning me again and again and again