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« on: June 20, 2004, 01:33:45 pm »
O.K This Is My 1st Fanfic. Hope You Like It!

Chapter 1
The Summer Change

One Day In Bikini Bottom, Mr. Krabs Was FURIOUS! There Wasn't A Customer In 9 Weeks! "IF FOOD WON'T SELL, WHAT WILL!" Yelled The Angry Mr. Krabs.
Suddenly, Mr. Krabs Got An Idea. "I Got An Idea" Said Mr. Krabs.
2 Hours Later
"All Krusty Krab Employees Report To My Office, That Will Be All"
Spongebob And Squidward Went To Mr. Krabs's Office.
"Whoopie! The New Spatulas Are Here!" Exclaimed Spongebob
"I Didn't Even Say Anything" Said Mr. Krabs
"Yeah You Did, Just Right Now" Said Spongebob
Squidward And Mr. Krabs Just Stared At Him
"Ahem, Back To My Anouncement, The Krusty Krab Is Having A Summer Camp For A Week"
"Well, Thanks For That Boring Old Anouncement, Can I Go Back To My Boring Old Life" Said Squidward
"Well, O.K, But I'm LOWERING YOUR PAYCHECK!" Yelled Mr. Krabs
"I Don't Even Like This Place, Why Would I Want The Owner's Money?" Asked Squidward "WELL, IF YOU PUT IT THAT WAY, NO PAYCHECK FOR 18 MONTHS!" Happily Yelled Mr. Krabs. "Will You Even Get Money In That Time" Asked Squidward.
"Probably" Said Mr. Krabs. "Do You Get Sarcasm?" Asked Squidward "No" Answered Mr. Krabs. "Can I Just Go To The Register?"Asked Squidward "O.K, But Spongebob Stays" Then Squidward Left Mr. Krabs's Office. "Spongebob, Do You Know Why I Kept You Here?"Asked Mr. Krabs "No" Answered Spongebob "Then, I'll Tell You Why. You & Patrick Are Going To Be Camp Leaders" Said Mr. Krabs
"Wow! I Got To Tell Patrick!" And He Ran To Tell Patrick.
"Patrick! Patrick! PATRICK!" And He Woke Up From A Nap On His Rock.
"Wha! Oh, Hey Spongebob!"Said Patrick "Hey Patrick. We Are Camp Leaders At A Summer Camp!" Exclaimed Spongebob "Well, Lets Get Ready!" Said Patrick
And They Got Ready For The Big Camping Trip At Krusty's Kamp.


Chapter 2 Coming Soon!
 

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« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2004, 01:47:17 pm »
I smell r0xness coming up soon.

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« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2004, 02:33:26 pm »
it has the makeings of a good fanfic

cant wate to read the next chapter

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« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2004, 05:25:46 pm »
O.K After Eating My Mom's Salad I Got Chapter 2

Chapter 2
Meeting The Kids

After A Week, 6 Kids Signed Up (And That's All The People That Would Sign Up, Mr. Krabs Made The Fee $9000!)
Spongebob And Patrick Were Extra Ready For There Camping Trip At Krusty's Kamp. They Yelled,"WE'RE EXTRA READY! WE'RE EXTRA READY!
WE'RE EXTRA READY!" And They Were There. Krusty's Kamp. Although It Was Very Cheap, They Still Liked It. "This Is Going To Be So Much Fun!" Giggled The 2 Best Friends. "This Is Going To Be So Much Fun!" Said The 6 Mean And Pranking Kids Named Bill, Alice, Jake, Katie, Marty And Lisa. "Joy Buzzers?" Asked Alice. "Check" Said Bill. "Whoopie Cushions?"Asked Marty. "Check" Said Jake. "Other Pranks?" Said Lisa. "Check" Said Katie. Then Spongebob And Patrick Arrived At Camp.
"Hi, I'm Spongebob.One Your Camp Leaders"Said Spongebob. "And I'm Roy" Said Patrick. The Kids Just Stared At Him, Because He Had A Nametag That Had His Real Name On It. "O.K Lets Just Ignore Patrick, Or Roy
For A Minite And Shake Hands With Me And Shake Hands With Me!"
What He Didn't Know Is That The Kids Hands Had Joy Buzzers With 1000
Volts On Them. And Spongebob Got Shocked By 6000 Volts. "Whatever You Do, Don't Do That Again" They Didn't, But More Pranks Was Yet To Come.

Chapter 3 Coming Soon!
« Last Edit: June 20, 2004, 06:23:19 pm by Kinghashpatrick »

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« Reply #4 on: June 20, 2004, 06:22:35 pm »
Yeah, they're getting better and better.

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« Reply #5 on: June 20, 2004, 06:52:14 pm »
Chapter 3 Is Up. Enjoy!

Chapter 3
Setting Up Camp

After The Joy Buzzer Incident, Spongebob Said,"Now, Lets Set Up Camp"
They Just Were Setting Up Camp When Katie Snuck Out To Get 3 Whoppie Cushions.She Gave Bill & Alice 2 Whoopie Cushions And They Made Farting Noises & Smells All Through The Camp Setting. After The 1st 10 Farts Spongebob Asked,"Who Did That?". "Not Us" Lied The Kids.
"Patrick!" Yelled Spongebob. "What?" Asked Patrick. "Did You Just Fart?"
Asked Spongebob. "No" And Then They Went Back To Setting Up Camp.
Then, 29 Realistic Farts Were Made. Then Spongebob Asked,"Who Did Those 29 Realistic Farts? Nobody Said They Did, So He Went Back To Setting Up Camp. Then After 100 Fake Farts, Spongebob Noticed The Whoopie Cushions So He Took Them Away. Then The Loudest And Smelliest Fart Under The Sea Was Made.So Spongebob Yelled,"WHERE'S THE WHOOPIE CUSHION!" Patrick Then Said,"That Was Me"
The Joy Buzzer Incident. The Farting Incident. There Was Still Pranks Left To Come.
 

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« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2004, 06:29:59 am »
Not bad at all! Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep em comming!

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« Reply #7 on: June 21, 2004, 09:53:55 am »
That was about 50 times better than the last 2 chapters.
« Last Edit: June 21, 2004, 09:54:11 am by patrick101 »

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« Reply #8 on: June 21, 2004, 10:29:51 am »
I like them

they are great

but now suspence is rearing its ugly head

cant wait to see the rest

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« Reply #9 on: June 21, 2004, 10:34:10 am »
Here's A Preview Of Chapter 4 (Expect The Rest Tonight)

"Who Put Gas On My Head! You Know I'm A Sponge!"
« Last Edit: June 21, 2004, 10:34:46 am by Kinghashpatrick »