Author Topic: My New Improved Spongebo Fic (Read 8454 times)

weird_4 · « **on:** February 03, 2005, 09:25:40 pm »

Hey everyone. This is my new improved Spongebob fic. Anyway, this is Chapter 1.

Chapter 1:Spongebob the Mad Man
Scene 1:Theme Park

Spongebob:Here we are Patrick. The best theme park ever.
Patrick:What's a theme park?
Spongebob:It's like a carnival, but it has more rides.
Patrick:What are we going to ride first.
Spongebob:I know. Let's ride, Bumper Boats.
Patrick:OH BOY! BUMPER BOATS!
Spongebob:Get ready to rumble Patrick.
Some anouncer guy:Welcome to Bumper Boat rumble. Now this is our first round of Bumper Boats. In boat 4 is Spongebob Squarepants. And in boat 7 is none other than Patrick Star.
Referrie:3-2-1 GO!
Anouncer guy:And the round has started. It looks like Spongebob got a head start and is going 50 mph aiming for Patrick who is now sleeping.
Patrick:Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz (Wakes up) FINLAND! Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......
Spongebob:PATRICK! WAKE UP!
(CRASH!!!!)
Anouncer guy:OOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! THAT'S GOING TO HURT!
(Patrick flys out of ride)
Spongebob:I'LL SAVE YOU PATRICK!!!
(Spongebob then flys out of the ride)
Patrick:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Spongebob:JUMP OUT PATRICK!
(Patrick jumps out)
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!(jumps out)
Anouncer guy:And that ends the Bumper boat rumble. Well, that's all for now.
Spongebob:Patrick, are you ok?
Patrick:Where's the leak ma'm?
Spongebob:I'm sorry I crashed into you. You were supposed to crash into me.
Patrick:I was?
Stay tuned for Chapter 2.

GIR · « **Reply #1 on:** February 04, 2005, 05:55:43 am »

pretty good

weird_4 · « **Reply #2 on:** February 04, 2005, 07:44:35 am »

Thanks :biggrin:

weird_4 · « **Reply #3 on:** February 04, 2005, 07:55:05 am »

Chapter 2: The Longest Ride Ever

Spongebob:Sorry Patrcik. I didn't mean to hurt you.
Patrick:Hurt who?
Spongebob:Never mind Patrick.
Patrick:Oh.
Spongebob:What are we going to ride next?
Patrick:How about, "The Longest Ride Ever"
Spongebob:O.K Let's go.
Fish:Are you sure you want to go on this ride?
Spongebob:Yeah but how long is this ride sir?
Fish:5 hours.
Spongebob:Come on Patrick.
(Later)
Spongebob voice over:There I saw it. When we first jumped on, the ride the water pushed us forward very quickly. Then we saw Mirmaid Man and Barnicle Boy running in the water. But 3 hours later the ride was over.
Patrick:Again.
Spongebob:Hmmmmm that's weird. I thought I saw our favorite heros.
Patrick:Huh?
Fish:Ready to ride again? (laughs evily)
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! Huh?
Patrick:What's with the yelling?
Spongebob:Oh. I thought the ride was over.
Patrick:Not yet. We have 4 more hours.
Spongebob:Really?
Patrick:Really.
Spongebob:Really?
Patrick:Really.
Spongebob:Really?
Patrick:YES ALREADY!!!
Stay tuned for Chapter 3

weird_4 · « **Reply #4 on:** February 04, 2005, 05:10:12 pm »

Chapter 3: Spongebob and Patrick Sing

Spongebob:(yawns) Patrick, I'm getting tired.
Patrick:Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz............
Spongebob:Pat?
Patrick:Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz SEAWEEBLE!!!! Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
Spongebob:WAKE UP PAT LOOK! IT'S THAT PEANUT GUY FROM THE GOOFY GOOBER.
Patrick:OH BOY! LET'S SING TO HIM!
Spongebob:O.K!
Spongebob and Patrick singing: I'm a goofy goober ROCK! You're a goofy gober ROCK! Goofy, goofy, goofy, goober!
Patrick:ROCK!
Peanut guy:Oh great. Those 2 again.
Patrick:Spongebob! Let's throught the sundes at him.
Spongebob:O.K!
(SPLAT!) (SPLAT!) (SPLAT!)
(2 Minuets later)
Peanut guy:I hate Mondays.
Spongebob:Now I'll sing a little song called, "Best Day Ever"
(Spongebob sings Best Day Ever song)
Patrick:HORRAY!
Spongebob:And look Pat. The rides already over.
Patrick and Spongebob:YAY!!! WE ROCK THE LONGEST RIDE EVER!!
Kid:Mommy, that sponge is scaring me.
Mom:I'll say. So is that star fiah. What is he doing, the funky chicken?
Kid:Let's get out of here.
Stay tuned for Chapter 4.

weird_4 · « **Reply #5 on:** February 05, 2005, 10:43:21 pm »

Chapter 4:The Grand Theft Auto Ride

Spongebob:Wasn't that ride great Patrick?
Patrick:Yeah. That was fun.
Spongebob:Let's ride a action ride.
Patrick:YAY!!
Spongebob:Let's ride "Grand Theft Auto:The Ride"
Patrick:YAY! I LOVE THIS THEME PARK!
Fish:HEY LOOK EVERYONE, IT'S THE CRAZY SPONGE WITH THE CRAZY STARFISH!
(Everyone laughs)
Spongebob:Let's get out of here first.
(Later)
Spongebob:Here we are Pat. The best action ride in the theme park.
(5 seconds later)
Spongebob:WOW PATRICK LOOK!
(explosions)
Patrick:DRIVE AWAY SPONGEBOB!!!
(VROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!)
Spongebob:YEAH! WE DON'T EVEN HAVE TO FOLLOW THE RULES HERE!
(helecopter flys over the car)
Spongebob:UH-OH! IT'S THE COPS!
(SCHREECH!!!)
Police oficer:HALT YOU GRAND THEFT AUTO YOU!
Patrick:Spongebob?
Spongebob:Yeah Pat.
Patrick:I want to tell you that......
Spongebob:Yes.
Patrick:Youre going to drive us off a 1,000 foot cliff.
Spongeob:Huh?
(The car goes off the cliff)
Officer:GRAB THE LADDER!!
(Spongebob and Patrick grab the ladder)
Officer:HOLD ON!
Spongebob:Patrick, if I die today, I want you to take care of Gary for me.
(Later)
Officer:YOU'RE UNDER ARREST!
(Spongebob pulls out a pair of cleats)
Spongebob:TAKE THIS YOU!
(Spongebob throws the cleats into the officer's eyes.)
Officer:AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! GET THEM OFF ME!
(Runs off a cliff)
Stay tuned for Chapter 5.

weird_4 · « **Reply #6 on:** February 06, 2005, 04:48:43 pm »

Chapter 5: The Madness Continues

Spongebob: Wow! This is great Patrick!
Patrick:Hey look Spongebob! Someone left a bomb in out car!
Spongebob:Huh?
(BOOM!!!!)
Spongebob and Patrick:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spongebob:Hey look Patrick. There's a Taxi cab over there!
Patrick:Should we knock him out?
Spongebob:Yeah. But with what?
Patrick:Stay here.
Taxi driver:May I help you sir?
(Patrick throws the taxi driver out the car)
Patrick:Ready Spongebob?
Spongebob:Yeah.
Burgler guy:TRY TO CATCH ME!
Spongebob:PATRICK! WE HAVE TO STOP THAT GUY!
(VROOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!)
Spongebob:RUN HIM OVER!
Burgler guy:AAAA!!!!
Spongebob:GET OUT PATRICK! THE CARS GOING TO EXPLODE IN 3-2-1!
(BOOM!!!!!!!)
Spongebob:QUICK! INTO THE BATTLE TANK!
Patrick:I'll drive!
(Spongebob presses random buttons)
(Spongebob and Patrick fly out of the Grand Theft auto ride)
Stay tuned for Chapter 6.

Daniel · « **Reply #7 on:** February 06, 2005, 07:03:33 pm »

WHOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Major Rule break here!!!!!!!!!!!! Multiple posts are aginst the rules.

SizzlinSean · « **Reply #8 on:** February 06, 2005, 07:23:56 pm »

All you have to do is edit your posts. Multiple-posting is against the rules.

weird_4 · « **Reply #9 on:** February 07, 2005, 06:58:03 pm »

Sorry about the double posting.

weird_4 · « **Reply #10 on:** February 08, 2005, 09:29:42 pm »

Chapter 6: The Longest Fun House Ever

Patrick:Spongebob! I'm getting tired of the rides. Can we do somthing else?
Spongebob:Sure Patrick. Let's go into a fun house.
Patrick:O.k.
Guy:How many?
Spongebob:2 please.
Guy:That'll be $3.00 please.
Spongebob:There you go sir.
Guy:Enjoy!
Spongebob:Look Patrick. The Wall of Mirrors.
Patrick:Look at me Spongebob. I'm skinnier than ever.
(Spongebob sees himself fat in the mirror)
Spongebob:I feel fat.
Patrick:Look at me Spongebob!
Spongebob and Patrick:WE'RE GIANTS!!
Kid:Mommy, there's that Sponge again!
Mom:Let's run away quickly.
Spongebob:And now we're normal.
Patrick:OH BOY! LOOK SPONGEBOB!
Spongebob:Patrick, it's just a bridge.
Patrick:Oh.
Spongebob:Watch out Patrick. Don't fall.
Patrick:LOOK! A VERY LONG SLIDE!!!
Sopngebob:I'll go in front.
Patrick:I'm right behind you.
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Patrick:WHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
(2 hours later)
Patrick:I think I'm going to vomit.
Spongebob:Look the other way Patrick.
(SPLASH)
Spongebob:Where are we?
Patrick:I don't know.
What will happen next? Stay tuned for Chapter 7.

weird_4 · « **Reply #11 on:** February 11, 2005, 09:16:20 pm »

Chapter 7: The Big Scare

Spongebob:Patrick! Did you hurl?
Patrick:No. Why?
Spongebob:Well whatever this stuff is, it smelles really bad.
Patrick:It looks disgusting.
Spongebob:Tell me about it.
Patrick:Besides Spongebob. Look. I think I see somthing.
Spongebob:We'll worry about that later Patrick. This sign says "Smelly Grounds" Hmmm. I never seen these at a theme park before.
Patrick:But Spongebob! I see a ball pit!
Spongebob:WOW REALLY!?
Patrick:Come on!
(4 seconds later)
Spongebob:OH BOY! CANNON BALL!
Patrick:I don't get it.
(Spongebob lands in ball pit)
Patrick:My turn!
(CRASH!)
Patrick:Sorry.
Spongebob:HEY PATRICK! BALL FIGHT!
(Spongebob picks up an orange ball)
(BONK!) (BONK!)
Patrick:HEY!
(Patrick throwas 20 balls at Spongebob)
Spongebob:This is fun!
Patrick:Look Spongebob. I found a very huge water spider in here.
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! Get it away from me!
Patrick:Awwwww... But it's soo cute.
Spongebob:PATRICK!
Patrick:I think we should keep it. Let's name it Hairy. Or Blacky.
Spongebob:OR SCARY! GET IT AWAY FROM ME!
Patrick:Yeah Spongebob. Blacky is a good name.
Spongebob:PATRICK! I'M SCARED OF SPIDERS! NOW PLEASE GET IT AWAY FROM ME NOW!
Patrick:But it's furry. Hey! Let's name it furry!
Spongebob:Patrick are you with me or aginst me?
Patrick:Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......
(2 hours later)
Patrick:Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
Spongebob:PATRICK! THROW AWAY THE SPIDER AND I'LL GIVE YOU 30 KRABBY PATTIES WHEN I GET BACK TO WORK!
Patrick:DEAL!
(Patrick throws the spider to the bridge they crossed before)
Spongebob:Thanks Patrick.
Patrick:Where's my 30 Krabby Patties?
Spongebob:I told you that I would give them to you when I get back to work.
Patrick:YOU LIED SQUAREPANTS!
Spongebob:I'm not even at work yet.
Patrick:Oh.
Stay tuned for Chapter 8. :biggrin:

Sponge-Bob · « **Reply #12 on:** February 12, 2005, 06:26:55 am »

This Story gets Second place in your fics

weird_4 · « **Reply #13 on:** February 12, 2005, 11:13:48 am »

What was my first place story then?

Rabble · « **Reply #14 on:** February 12, 2005, 02:28:54 pm »

Pretty Okay. 6 out Of 10

Meh Listen to Sean theres an edit button for a reason.

weird_4 · « **Reply #15 on:** February 12, 2005, 06:34:05 pm »

I know. So I can fix my fan fic for spelling errors.

GIR · « **Reply #16 on:** February 12, 2005, 06:59:33 pm »

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Sorry about the double posting.
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you just double posted again.

Sponge-Bob · « **Reply #17 on:** February 13, 2005, 04:39:45 am »

weird_4 banned from Spongezone.....

SS4Gohan · « **Reply #18 on:** February 13, 2005, 09:25:19 am »

Haha that fool said "Sorry about the double posting" and then he triple posted! lmao

Anyways, he's not banned... what are you talking about? People don't get banned for that, just warned.

Pretty good fic, not too funny, but SpongeBob-ish. But you're stealing some lines from other episodes, which isn't good. Be original.

IceFox · « **Reply #19 on:** February 13, 2005, 11:12:09 am »

Sean wants you to use the edit button for the reasons you said, and to just add the new chapters to those posts, i think.

Rabble · « **Reply #20 on:** February 13, 2005, 07:21:19 pm »

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Haha that fool said "Sorry about the double posting" and then he triple posted! lmao

Anyways, he's not banned... what are you talking about? People don't get banned for that, just warned.

Pretty good fic, not too funny, but SpongeBob-ish. But you're stealing some lines from other episodes, which isn't good. Be original.
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Some Do. Think about this Double posting Saying Sorry Quad Posting 3 times Then Posting 17 Times in a row then saying i will never do it again and Do it 12 More times in the same topic.

weird_4 · « **Reply #21 on:** February 13, 2005, 07:58:37 pm »

What am I supposed to do? Do a new chapter once every week?

weird_4 · « **Reply #22 on:** February 21, 2005, 03:50:38 pm »

Chapter 8: All's Well That Ends Well

Spongebob: That was a close one Patrick.
Patrick: Aren't we going to go on the bounce house of mystery?
Spongebob: I don't think it's the bounce house of Mystery anymore.
Patrick: Then why does the sign say that?
Spongebob: Patrick, there's no sign.
Patrick:Then how come on the top it says bounce house?
Spongebob:(sighes) Come on Pat. Let's go on the bounce house.
(3 seconds later)
Spongebob:WOW PAT! I feel as if we were in Mermaid Man and Barnicle Boy.
Patrick: LET'S GET READY TO RUMBLE!
Spongebob: LOOK! IT'S OUR ARCH NEMMISIS, MAN RAY!
Patrick:YOU'RE MAN RAY? DIE MAN RAY!
Spongebob: No Patrick!
(BAMMMMMMM!)
Spongebob: WHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
Patrick: Hey Spongebob! I found that spider you don't like.
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET IT AWAY FROM ME!
Patrick:Oh come on Spongebob. It's just a spider.
Spongebob:EWWWWWWWWWWWWW PATRICK!
Patrick:Spongebob. Just touch it!
Spongebob:NEVER!
Patrick:We could be here all day if you want to!
Spongebob:NO MATTER HOW LONG IT TAKES! I'M NOT GOING TO TOUCH THE SPIDER!
Fish: Hey guys, the park is closing on its final day.
Patrick:Did you meet this awsome spider. I named it Harry.
Fish:Well aren't you cute.
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Patrick:Well you see, my friend here doesn't like spiders and I told him that if he touches it, that we'll leave the park.
Fish:Good idea. You guys can stay here as long as you want!
Spongebob:PLEASE PATRICK!
Patrick:Look Spongebob, I'm even touching him! He won't bite! Besides, you're a Sponge.
Spongebob:Fine. I'll touch it!
(poink!)
Spongebob:There I touched it! Now can we go?
Patrick:Now you have to lick it.
Spongebob:BUT PATRICK!
Patrick:I was joking.
Spongebob:Phew!
Patrick:You have to eat it.
Spongebob:Fine.
(GULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPP!!!)
Spongebob:Ahh... Much better.
Stay tuned for Chapter 9.

weird_4 · « **Reply #23 on:** February 28, 2005, 10:46:55 pm »

Chapter 10: The Troublemaker

Spongebob:Thank goodness that was over.
Patrick:I'll say. You ate the spider.
Spongebob:But it was gross!
Patrick:I think we should stay here all night.
Spongebob:Are you crazy Patrick?
Patrick:What did you call me?
Spongebob:Never mind Patrick.
Patrick:The guy said that we can stay here as long as we want to.
Spongebob:Maybe some other time.
Patrick:You don't want to because you're scared.
Spongebob:But what I said was that-
Patrick:Scaredy pants!
Spongebob:WHAT DID YOU CALL ME?
Patrick:HEY LOOK EVERYONE! IT'S SPONGEBOB SCAREDY PANTS!
(anymous laughter)
Fish guy:Dude. What's with the shouting?
Patrick:My friend here says that he can't handle to stay in a theme park all night.
Fish guy:I see what you mean. You guys stay here as long as you want to.
Spongbob(thinking):This can't be happening.
Fish guy:Have fun you 2.
(Spongebob gulps)
Patrick:Cheer up Spongebob. It can't get any better than this.
Spongebob:(thinking):This can't get any worser.
Patrick:There's a spider farm Spongebob.
Spongebob:Patrick! There's no way that I'm going to touch a spider!
Patrick:Well, I didn't say that you had to Spongebob.
Spongebob:Phew!
Patrick:But if you insist.
(Patrick lets the spiders free)
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Spongebob runs around the theme park screaming wildly, trying to avoid the spiders)
Spongebob:DON'T EAT ME! MY KIND ISN'T HEALTHY TO EAT! I TASTE BAD!
Spiders:?!
Spongebob:Huh?
Spiders:ROAR!
(The Flying Dutchman appears)
Flying Dutchman:WHAT IS GOING ON HERE?
Spongebob:Sorry Flying Dutchman sir but I have a bigger problem. Those spiders are trying to eat me alive.
Flying Dutchman:Spiders eh?
(Spiders disipear)
Spongebob:How did you do that?
Flying Dutchman:I sent them somewhere else.
Spongebob:Where?
Flying Dutchman:Davey Jones locker.
Patrick:Look what I found. I found a turantula!
Spongebob:AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Flying Dutchman:You're on your own kid.
Spongebob:WE'RE NOT KIDS!
Stay tuned for Chapter 11.

weird_4 · « **Reply #24 on:** March 03, 2005, 05:10:09 pm »

Chapter 11: The Return of Spongebob Scaredypants

Spongebob:GET IT AWAY FROM ME!
Patrick:What?

? You said that you were scared of spiders. So I found this.
Spongebob:Did you ever happen to know that a turantula is a kind of spider?
Patrick:Uhhhh......... Can I have a hint?
Spongebob:Patrick! This isn't funny!
Patrick:If it was funny, I would be laughing right now.
Officer #1:HALT! You have the right to remain silent!
Spongebob:Patrick? What are you doing?
Patrick:.................
Officer# 1:I said quiet you!
Officer# 2:YEAH! SOMEONE HERE LET THE SPIDERS FREE!!
Spongebob:IT WAS PATRICK!
Officer# 1: I see. Mr Patrick Star, you are under arrest!
Patrick:.............................
Officer# 2: He's not saying anything.
(Officers use a stun gun on Patrick)
Officer# 1: What do you have to say now?
Patrick:................................
Spongebob:PATRICK! SAY SOMTHING!
Patrick:Ouch!
Spongebob:Please officers. Don't arrest my friend. He didn't mean to. All he wanted me to do was to touch a spider and eat it! Now, he wants me to touch the turantula. And I'm scared of spiders. So please don't arrest him.
Officer#1: I don't know.
Patrick:................................................................................
Officer#2: You can speak now son.
Patrick: WHO WANTS TO EAT THE TURANTULA I FOUND?
(Officers jump into their boat and drives quickly)
Patrick: Now here's someone to sing you a song Spongebob.
(Rock intro begins)
Some guy: (Sings Spongebob Scaredypants song)
Patrick: WHOOOOOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Stay tuned for Chapter 12.

weird_4 · « **Reply #25 on:** March 10, 2005, 08:36:47 pm »

Why is noone replying?

Rabble · « **Reply #26 on:** March 10, 2005, 08:43:47 pm »

You still keep double posting Just edit it on the first post.

weird_4 · « **Reply #27 on:** March 10, 2005, 08:45:18 pm »

I will.

weird_4 · « **Reply #28 on:** April 12, 2005, 11:26:37 pm »

Chapter 12: The Great Escape

Spongebob:What's wrong with you Patrick? Are you trying to get me aressted?
Patrick:.........................................
Spongebob:The officers are gone now Pat.
Patrick:...................
(Spongebob uses a stun gun on Patrick)
Patrick:WHAT WAS THAT FOR?
Spongebob:The officers are gone Patrick.
Patrick:So?

??
Spongebob:So. We can leave. And besides, I have to go home and feed Gary before he eats the couch again.
Patrick:We're not leaving Spongebob and that's final!
Spongebob:But Patrick! I'm tired and I need my rest!
Patrick:Go sleep at Matress Land.
Spongebob:Are you sure we're supposed to be doing this?
Patrick:How many times do I have to tell you Spongebob? They said that we can stay here as long as we wanted to and we have to do that.
Spongebob:Who made you king of the park? You're on your own.
Patrick:WELL THAT'S FINE! I CAN STAY HERE AS LONG AS I WANT TO!
Spongebob:Fine!
(Spongebob jumps over the fence)
Patrick:Wow. This was a short episode.
Narrarator:Not yet you barnicle. We only have 15 minuets left.
Patrick:Darn! My watch stopped.
(Meanwhile, Spongebob was taking a bus ride home, until Spongebob saw a sign that read "You Are Leaving Bikini Bottom")
Stay tuned for Chapter 13.

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